HP: Daisy's Redemption

Already tied, good-looking, sister's name is just like her, Akagi, kind-hearted. The author shows the changes in Mei Bao's state of mind in layers. From the sincerity and brilliance that readers see in the beginning, to the middle stage when he becomes more vigilant and powerful from the things discovered by his own reasoning, and in the later stage, he explores and discovers the danger behind happiness step by step. From shallow to deep, he writes about Mei Bao's psychological growth. Moreover, the younger sister is a bit white and black, and the Claire family comes first. What I like most is the description of Severus and Lily. The blind cake guessing is a foreshadowing. The innocent friendship between Lily and sister Bao is really enviable. Also, I want to ask the author, will he be tortured? As the first person to read this book, I got better step by step as I watched the writing style of Rou Duck. I really felt like raising a daughter. It's quite funny when I think about it. Zhu Ya would also respond to our comments seriously. At that time, I often gave flowers to Rou Duck, and I would thank you patiently. I was very worried when I saw that Rou Ya was not feeling well. Don't neglect your own health because you focus too much on novels. Not everyone can be perfect when writing novels, and I understand that too. Jie Shaoya feels sad about some bad comments, but you have to be strong in Shaoya. Whether it is about your study, health, or personality, chest pain does not mean that you will have any terminal illness. Be more relaxed. You are still young and can learn more knowledge and see more of the world. Don't be too pessimistic. Novels are not everything in your life. You are the most important thing. Come on, Shaoya. Finally, I want to ask, does Shaoya have a V? If you have any difficulties, I can help or provide some emotional value.

The book is well written. It can delicately depict the psychological journey of the character, display the character's emotional changes and inner world more vividly, making it easier for readers to take on the role and feel the joy, anger, sorrow and joy in the story. The plot has ups and downs, both sweet and bitter. It revolves around the protagonist and Snape, and may incorporate some plots and settings from the original work. At the same time, it has original content and presents a unique story line. The story may contain elements of two-way redemption, where two "souls" meet and warm each other. This kind of plot is more popular among readers. The character creation of Snape should be consistent with the original work and innovative. Snape is a complex and charming character in the original work. This fanfic may continue his arrogant, affectionate and other characteristics. At the same time, through interaction with the protagonist, it shows a different side of him, allowing readers to see a more three-dimensional Snape. There are pros and cons to using a first-person perspective. The advantage is that it can give readers a strong sense of involvement, as if the protagonist is telling his own experiences and sharing his daily joys, sorrows, and joys, allowing readers to have a closer connection with the protagonist. But the disadvantage is that you will miss some plots from God's perspective, and you will not be able to know the inner thoughts of other characters and some events that the protagonist is not involved in. (But overall it's still okay) The overall style is sweet but sadistic. Although there may be some "knife" in the process, the overall tone is warm and healing. I think it is probably a two-way redemption novel, suitable for readers who like this style and the character of Snape. If the author can create more extras to further enrich the content of the story, it may give readers a more complete reading experience. (Please spoiler) 🥺🥺🥺 Also, um, will the heroine be reborn later? Or is he still alive or pretending to be dead or something like that? Or maybe the body returns to its previous state but the soul remains unchanged?

It's very beautiful, it must be five stars. It keeps raining in my eyes and I can't handle it well [cry][cry][cry]. The author's generous writing style gives me the feeling that every sentence has a unique flavor due to the development of the plot, such as the fragrance and sunshine of daisies, the tacit understanding of partners, the different paths pushing farther and farther, the bitterness of the Norwegian ice cellar, the death of daisies and the tears of the bat. The calm words at the end contain heavy sadness. I felt depressed when I read it. In fact, the bat is a saw-beaked gourd (although it is also related to his childhood experience), but it is still the same sentence: Slytherin always misses the person he loves deeply. The ending of the first volume is sad, but the ending of the second volume is sweet (it's actually about finding candy in the glass shards). I'm really looking forward to the bat chasing his wife, and I want to see the daily interactions between the young lovers. I also hope that Ai Xier and the others can reunite with Daisy as soon as possible. The author has now published a sequel. Sisters who have read this book can read it. That one is sweet. After reading the introduction, it is very sweet [Sending Hearts]. The author must pay attention to your health and be happy every day [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

This article is very good. Although it has been discontinued, I believe that the author will come back. The Daisy written by the author is very similar to the author himself, probably because of his biological daughter. In fact, each of us is already in this world when we assume the role of ourselves. If you want the ending of the novel to be good, it must be good. This sentence has many levels, such as the article, reality, and the future. I hope you will have a shining life of your own heroine. We will meet again in the future. Take a good rest, study hard, and come on!

As a high school student, the author's words should not be underestimated. Very powerful. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the article, and the description is also very detailed. The only drawback is that the writing may need to be reconsidered. The author is also very powerful, so support is enough. Maybe some of my comments about imagery in the previous article were a little inappropriate. I'm sorry. I found out after two or three chapters that it was a foreshadowing. The closed loop of time is very interesting. The author wrote it very well. Come on

Nice! But it's not finished yet (I grab the front row every time (/_＼) to complain) so I can save a few more chapters. I like the character of the heroine very much. The sunny and happy little golden retriever is so cute, but why does Daisy have to write so sad later and give me back the sunny golden retriever! Finally saved for the next generation⌓‿⌓

It's good-looking and quite sad. Two people abuse their bodies and minds. It's not very bloody. It's not a traditional escape. I feel so sorry for the baby heroine when I watch it. Forget about torturing SS, don't torture my Miss Daisy [I'm about to cry] (Give SS a punch, give the noseless Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms) It's better to be the heroine of the next generation. Finally, I wish the roast duck all the best and look forward to meeting Daisy and Bat again.

The author gave me his tears in exchange! ! ! ! I can't stand it anymore. I feel like my breathing is so short. The knife mentioned here is not the kind of big knife, but the kind of knife that is between a small knife and a big knife. There are more, and you really feel that your body is completely covered, but the back is quite beautiful, um, yes, I hope the back is sweet! Don't just rely on reading reviews when reading a book. They are all personal feelings. You can only know after reading them yourself. Highly recommended (´-ω-`)👍 It's still a five-star review. It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. I recommend it🤓🤓

I couldn't help but write a review not long after I watched it. I watched it because of the beautiful cover and introduction. The only drawback is that it is not finished. I really like the character of Sister Bao. Your character is also good, teacher. I have replied to every comment. The plot is super awesome! ! ! ! I just feel that the teacher has written very little. Please continue to write. I am really afraid that the update will be interrupted. I don't dare to read anymore. I am afraid that there will be no next chapter, so I will wait and read.

It's very good. I haven't read this book for a long time. Today I suddenly saw that there are only 14 chapters, and then I decided to finish it. Because I always get attracted to new books after reading half of them. , To be honest, I thought of this book when I saw this title. It is a very beautiful book. As I went to the back, I felt that there was more to the story. Why did it end at chapter 14? I didn't expect that after reading the book, I found out that there was something wrong with the teacher's body. I didn't know the teacher's physical symptoms. Is it better now? I wish the teacher good health. Now the teacher should be in college or already working. I also wish the teacher good luck in his work. Finally, I hope the teacher can post a follow-up. Of course, it doesn't matter if not. Finally, I hope the teacher is happy every day.

Very nice! However, due to the author's baby's health, I can only update here. I hope the author's baby will recover quickly and take good care of himself! Waiting for you to get better, waiting for you to continue to update [blowing kiss]

It's an okay book, but I felt that some of the parts I read were a bit focused on the male protagonist, which made some of the female protagonist's actions unreasonable. Of course, I didn't think the male protagonist interpreted it very well, but the plot was what I found interesting, so I gave it 4 stars.

Woohoo, it's really beautiful. The author's writing style is very delicate. I really like the emotional line between Daisy and Sif. I hope the little golden retriever can be sunny and happy forever (◍＞◡＜◍)hh I stayed up for a few days and finally finished reading it during the National Day holiday! ! ! I came late and couldn't accompany you (´･д･`), but the author's baby is really a very cute and strong person (๑•.•๑). I hope the author's baby recovers soon and I wish the baby a happy Mid-Autumn Festival.

Very nice, but the number of words is a bit short

The author's writing is vivid and delicate, very healing, and the writing is really beautiful.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

It must be five stars. The writing is very good and the story is very touching. Also, author, you are really great, come on

I just read it for a while and it's very interesting. I've read many HP fanfics and the writing style and logic of this one are very good. I like it (*´ω｀*)❤️❤️❤️

Very good very good

It's great, I'm really sorry

It's very beautiful, I didn't notice it before! ! ! !

Please, the author is so awesome but I can't see the sequel. Why am I only seeing it now [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's really nice, that tangle and swing!

Ah! ! ! ! ! It's so sweet. The writing in big letters is so sweet, and the writing style is also very good.

The author writes very well, and the heroine is very sexy [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

Super Invincible Explosion is so beautiful that it made me shed tears as if it was free of charge. The teacher's writing is also very good.

Yes, it's very beautiful and the description is very delicate🤓👆 Does anyone know how "Same Moonlight" fits this article?

It's so beautiful and it satisfied my imagination. I've always thought about what would happen if Lily were replaced by an original. This book is completely consistent with it and also describes in detail the psychological description of Sri Lanka's loss. It's very real.