Straight Man with a Cocky Butt Provokes Queen Long Ao and Changes His Life Against Fate

The writing is super good, so sweet, there are no surprises, and there is currently no evil fool supporting character. Although it is a novel with two male protagonists, I respect the female characters very much. It is a good read and recommended. It may be a new novel, and the score is a bit low. It should rise in the future. It is good to read. The author will update soon [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss] [Blow kiss]

Super beautifully written. The setting is delicious. And the teacher's writing style is really great. Hmm... The second thing is that chapter. I think the teacher can set each chapter to about 2,000 words. Although I am disappointed with Tomato, I have tried it on other platforms. In this way, 4000 updates per day can ensure perfect attendance. I look at the teacher's chapter word count. Very uneven. There are only 55 chapters in total. I think the teacher can give you one point, so that you can save more manuscripts and rest more.

For me, this book is simply perfect. Without the classic plot of sects, one must be the bad guy, and there is no inexplicable male-female competition. The characters of the female and male partners are very well-shaped, and everyone is very cute! It feels like a slight group portrait. I think the perfect thing is that this book looks relaxed and enjoyable, and the plot progresses very quickly. For someone like me who often wants to find other books after reading a book halfway through, I finished it in one sitting!

Finally let me see normal literature with Long Aotian 😭😭😭 What I read before was either embarrassing or straight and made me bend my head. Fortunately, my wife's literature saved my eyes and brain. 😭😭😭😭Madam, you are my god😭😭😭😭 You are not brainless and show respect to the baby girl. Of course, the demon saint who was brainwashed and made mistakes also considered all aspects, which really makes me happy! Can there be more articles that respect my brain? ! ! Of course, this one written by Shimizu and Rou is so delicious! ! ! 😋😋😋How can this emotional line be so appealing to me😚😚😚It's really not a loss to invest in it, my family! ! ! ! ! ! ❤️🌹✌✨☺️😘😘😘😘

The plot is very interesting, very sweet \(//∇//)\ and it is controlled and accessible. Some of the supporting characters are annoying and annoying. It depends on the person. Anyway, I find it quite annoying. The plot is a little draggy in some places, but it's okay (›´ω`‹)

It was my first time to read a novel about two men. I was actually curious about men and women, so I read it. Unexpectedly, it was so good! The little couple is so sweet, the author is very good at writing, and what's even more amazing is that I also understand it very well. It's really... Great. Both male protagonists fit the image of the perfect man in the novel world. They are decisive in killing, delicate and gentle. 1 Is strong in love but very respectful. 0 Is gentle and invades the world of 1. From admiration to attachment, both of them are very good people. They respect each other and the women involved in the plot. This is great. The women in the article are also very normal and great.

Yes, that's right, I stayed up until 4 o'clock in the morning. I admire my own courage and dared to open a single book before going to bed. I couldn't do it anymore and was going to die suddenly. Very beautiful, the young couple is very sweet. In the early stage, I don't know if any book friends had the same feeling as me, that is, the system was not a good one. Maybe it was because I read too many novels and became suspicious? After I established my position, I was no longer hostile to him. The young couple is so cute. Yanbai is so good and cute (there are so many words in this comic ╮(‵▽′)╭), Xiao Huojin is also a good son-in-law, he seems to be in love with Xiaobai, but in fact he is also in love [laughs][laughs] Xiaobai: If Xiao Jin can do it, he can do it too! Xiao Jin: So good I can't help it. This rice is so delicious [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] Admiration][Admiration][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] I love you so much~

Good looking From the current point of view, the pace is fast, not slow and slow, the plot is exciting, the characters are relatively three-dimensional, the content is light yet ups and downs, and the writing style is relatively humorous. There are foreshadowings buried in the previous article. How high it reaches depends on whether it will be connected later. The relationship between the protagonists is particularly sweet right now. Friends who like scumbag novels can give it a try. The contents of this novel include not only the touching of skin between the two of them, the two of them dressing up as women, the two of them going to Wushan together in their dreams... There is also an inconsistent assist system (I think it is like assisting, because every mission reward it gives to Shou is like an attack reward) To sum up: 1. The character creation is currently relatively three-dimensional, which is okay, but there is no particularly outstanding memory point. Maybe it is because it is currently in the early stage of serialization, so it is said to be four stars. 2. The plot has ups and downs and will not make people feel bored. There is a climax and plot, and the progress is fast. The relationship between the two protagonists does not drag on. Because the plot is humorous and humorous, it suits my personal taste, so I give it five stars. 3. From the current point of view, the author has perfected the background of the novel without obvious logical loopholes and buried foreshadowing. I also give it five stars here. 4. The only drawback is that the author's update speed is a bit slow. I'll give it to Samsung here. Overall evaluation five stars [laughs][like][like][like][like]

Good reviews: This book is really good to read. I just like the process of a straight man having sex, and I feel a little guilty, but it still feels good. Then, I feel that the writing is really good and the writing style is very good. I really like this ancient style novel. Thank you for cooking for us, I love you. And then, Shou's character is also very straightforward. Then, Gong's character is also different, he has a bit of a sinister feel, but he is also a bit dashing, since he is the male protagonist of the original book after all. I hope you will keep writing this book. Then, there aren't many lightning points, and there aren't any very poisonous lightning points. Then, it feels like the only highlight is the straight man's bending. That should be it. Then, the rest should be nothing, I think it's fine. Then it wasn't very awkward. I thought it was okay and more in line with my taste. Anyway, I really like these two babies, and I hope my little couple will stay together forever. I hope it will get better and better. I think the large-scale cars have a sense of proportion, and the stream-of-consciousness cars also feel very ambiguous. Then, they have a sense of detail that everyone knows, and the size is very good. And I don't feel embarrassed. It's very interesting.

After reading this I thought of commenting. Probably an unparalleled explosion of deliciousness! ! ! 🤤🤤🤤, Delicious. The young couple is so good, they are really the sweetest of sweetest pets, with a good plot and good characters. Although it still makes people want to cry when Xiaobai mends the sky with his body, even though he knows that Xiaobai will not die... Anyway, it is delicious, extremely delicious, invincible delicious, everyone should come and watch it. I declare this my favorite book of the year! I'm scratching my head while waiting for the update... I thought the author would continue writing later. It ended unexpectedly😭😭, not enough to watch😭😭😭😭😭. But it's delicious, I want to eat the author's extra delicious and explosive extra! ! ! ! I have to scratch my head and wait again. This is my first time writing a long review∧∧ How can I not count the time spent downloading and reading novels offline? Tomato, you really... It seemed like I wasn't taking it seriously for an hour😭😭😭, it just hurt me...

The emotional line written by the author is very good, and it is refreshing to read. At first I thought the relationship would progress slowly, but I didn't expect that the plot and the relationship would move very quickly, which I like very much. The character design of the protagonist is also very good. It really poked my XP and didn't fall apart at the end. But there are also shortcomings. The subsequent plot is not very full and feels very rushed. Especially the plot after Abai comes back. I personally feel that it is not perfect and the emotional expression is not as full as at the beginning. Of course this is not a big problem, it is already very good, keep up the good work!

This book is really interesting. The presence of Brother Pi is also very strong. There is car exhaust all over. It is very fragrant. This book is amazing, funny and funny. I am really in my heart after reading it. I not only love this book, but also a great love for the author. I like that she created this work and allowed me to see her vivid characters. The characters of the two male protagonists are very interesting. It is difficult not to follow. I went for the name at first, but the ending is a regretful surprise. It's a pity that the story of this young couple in the third dimension has stopped here. What's surprising is that Da Da will continue to work. I will look forward to it. Thank you for Da Da's efforts and everyone who has read it🥰 Your more positive comments will allow more people to see Da Da's works.

Wow wow, it's super nice, it's a very sweet cookie, and the interactive program is so great! I was very moved after reading this book. Young lovers should stay together for a lifetime [crying] [crying] This is simply my spiritual food. The tortured plot will have a certain place in my heart. I will definitely read it 3 times. The interactive part in the middle is really too It suits my taste, you can watch it if you like Xiao Huang, I don't want to understand it instantly [shy] Finally, I want to say Jin Bai 99, 10 years of separation makes the emotions more passionate, 500 years of waiting is for a better reunion, I love you is engraved in my bones. In the extra story, I knew you were my lover at first sight. Anyway, I still want to read it after reading it. I will always follow you, author!

Really like this article! I originally liked watching the drama of Long Aotian falling in love with the protagonist, and I couldn't control it after watching it! I stayed up late to finish reading it today! The extras are also very good, my gosh! The relationship between the two people is really consistent, and they have always chosen each other firmly. There is a fly in the ointment. In fact, I still want to see the daily interactions between Shiwan and Shiwan! There is also the drama of Taishang Patriarch! There's no way I can resist this kind of cute thing! But overall it really suits my taste! If I have the chance, I will try it more times!

It's quite interesting. The male protagonist's emotional change process is well written. There are no plots where he falls in love with the protagonist out of nowhere. Each character has his own characteristics. The protagonist does not have those delicate characters and is very consistent with the thinking of a normal college student. Although some plots are a bit cliché, the plot logic is well written. I like it a lot haha. It's the only Tomato novel that I've been able to read [Adoration]

When I first read this book, I was very curious, thinking that if I just took a few bites of the poison, I would continue to eat it. The more you read, the more enjoyable it becomes. Moreover, even if the protagonist has a golden finger, he is very reasonable and logical, and the two people's IQs are also very online. If you like it, you will like it. Once it is clear, you will boldly express your love and secretly pursue it. It is so delicious, and it is very enjoyable to watch. The early part of this article is really pure love, and the later part is written with "pure love"🚗It's also very interesting😋delicious! It's still hot and very delicious. Some of the settings at the back are also very novel. I have read so many books, and this is the first time I have seen that there will be "good and evil corpses" during the tribulation period. It is simply a super delicious foreshadowing! Although the fellow is no longer the same fellow as before, there are still people who will continue to save the world in her place (it's not a very good description, but it's delicious and worth savoring). The little jokes interspersed in the middle are also very interesting. Everyone has their own shining points, and the ones that appear are just right. The two of them are constantly fighting monsters and upgrading, which is so embarrassing, but they are growing up very quickly and are very sweet!

Overall, it's not bad. The author's writing is very good, with both sugar and meat. However, this novel is more sweet than plot. Just look at the emotional drama of the young couple. The main plot is relatively thin and blunt, and the supporting characters are also very monotonous. Of course, there is also a lightning point for me personally, because this article is a pure love 1v1, but in the plot, the shou is given the nickname "Golden Bell Iron Shirt". The side effect is that in the eyes of others, they can see whatever they want the shou to wear. If it is said that only the attacker can see this, it is completely unacceptable. Okay, but that's not the case. Although the author said that Shou can use the temperament of his behavior to deceive the people around him and let them see the clothes he is originally wearing, but to be honest, I personally can't accept this "self-justification". What do you think it would be like to be seen by a pornographic person outside? (This mine point is purely a personal opinion. If it is set so that only attack can be seen, then not only will it not be mine, but I will also applaud it)

I really recommend everyone to watch it 1. This book is not sloppy or perfunctory about the advancement of realm. For example, the design of promotion to the Nascent Soul stage is very careful. Although the overall direction is still interesting, many designs are not sloppy. 2. It's two strong characters, I like to see this kind of thing! Although the attack is very strong, the attack is also very progressive, and it is also very strong! 3. The emotional line is natural, not the kind of sudden love 4. The stream of consciousness writing is really interesting. Give me some suggestions 1. At the end, I feel like I can show you the current situation of all the supporting characters one after another in one shot. 2. The words describing the intimacy between the two are too sweet, a little too much, and a little greasy. 3. The character design of Gong is not perfect enough. Some are yandere, some are clingy, and some are... In short, it feels like there will be some slight contradictions, but this is not the point. The point is that the author may need to think more about the presentation of each detail. All in all, this is the best book I have read in a while.

This is simply too pretty. It's so refreshing. Men see menstruation, and women get crazy. This is the nemesis of depression, and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. It's like God is my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, jumped, and danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I shed tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water😭😭😭

Not bad, the plot is a little lacking, but the emotions are really disappointing. As the author himself said, the sudden increase in plot makes it difficult to follow up, so the plot is a little rushed and it develops too fast, but the relationship does come naturally. I personally think there is no "straight man breaking up" setting. The protagonist Shou is just a straight man, but he has never been in love before, so Yi considers himself to be a straight man, but in his relationship with Gong, his natural dependence and preference have shown his feelings, and their relationship has progressed very smoothly. Not long after the beginning of the chapter, Gong confessed that he likes her, and Shou was only flustered for a moment. After she realized that she liked him too, the two of them got together naturally. This book focuses on their relationship, which is super sweet. Gong is so paranoid and possessive that he can't wait to stick to Shou 24 hours a day. Shou knows Gong's little thoughts and has no bottom line to tolerate Gong and Shou's possessiveness. The two dote on each other. The biggest reason why I personally have five stars is that it's so cute. The key is not clear. The car described by the author adds a super sweetness to the relationship between the male protagonists. It's really sweet, so cute, so cute~

The article is not long, but I have a long aftertaste. I opened this novel with a novel title with the mentality of giving it a try, but I was deeply attracted by the article. I even reached a state of selflessness and read the book in one sitting. The author's writing style, the arrangement of the plot and the emotional development of the protagonist seem to be just right, and the artistic conception created is long, profound and touching. (In a word, the writing is good, the article is good, the author is good, the communication is good, the emotion is good, the character is good, everything is good, it looks good!!!)

After reading it, I really want to cry [almost cry]. I cry with emotion, not with tears of abuse. The love between two people is so overpowering. Oh my God... It is so well written that it can be regarded as a complete cookie. To me, it is not very sad, basically not at all. Moreover, the author will mention it before the abuse. I would like to explain before, please read it with confidence, I am really touched. There are no flaws in the whole text of this book. It can be explained clearly from beginning to end, and there is no such vulgar opposition. Everything can be explained in detail. This book really made me feel comfortable after reading it. It is very well written. I highly recommend it! ! ! The cover is also very interesting. Hahahahaha. I was attracted to it because of the cover. I'm commenting after reading the main text. I haven't read the extras yet, but I'm really unsatisfied... The ending is so good that I'm going to cry [almost crying] [almost crying]

Really, it's very beautiful and attractive. I was very sad when I saw the author say "see you later!" At the end. Pictures of the characters flashed through my mind frame by frame. The indescribable feeling was that it ended at their best time. There was some relief or enthusiasm in the regret? I like it very much [I'm almost crying] I'll see you later [I'm almost crying]

Help, how can this be so beautiful? Oh my god, from the first chapter to now, I don't think there is anything interesting about it. Well, I don't feel uncomfortable at all. Anyway, it looks good. It looks good, but I won't lose money if I invest in it. In fact, what I said is not very good, it may be equivalent to a lot of nonsense, but it is very beautiful, that is, it can make people feel that they are very comfortable and happy when doing CP. And he doesn't mean to just let us see the emotional lines of the protagonists. On the contrary, the plot line and the emotional line complement each other, presenting a novel that is very beautiful, very real, and very fantasy. Everyone in the novel is very vivid, and nothing is said deliberately. To describe a person in a bad light means that everyone has their own characteristics. Whether it is Junior Sister Zhao, everyone is good. (But I don't know if there will be some bad people.) Currently there are no bad people, they are all pretty good. When I looked back, I discovered that there were really some very bad people. But it does not include very good people. The system is also very good and always gives big thumbs up to novices. Everyone is very good except for those sinful people. After reading it, I continue to wait for the next chapter. This is the first time I write such a long review. I finished reading it, it was so sad (the ending hurt). The first clumsy confession in adolescence was rejected in the sultry rainy season. Teacher, don't leave me (Erkang's hand)

It looks good, 1 is white and black, 0 is a bit silly, they are both stronger, 0 wants to be 1's younger brother to avoid 1's death, and now I am also looking forward to the "Born to Death" plot that the author will write in the future [Blow kiss] It's so good, the pace is relatively stable, but it's a pity that there's only one extra chapter, but it poked fun at me, especially Miao Jiang. The plot of wanting to die and live was not disappointing. It's very well written. I'm looking forward to Da Da's next book, and I hope Da Da's writing career will get better and better [Sending Hearts]

I like this book very much. The character of the protagonist is interesting and not blindly cool, and the body and appearance of the female partner are not specially described. The plot development is completely OK. The ups and downs of the plot and the development of the protagonist in the later period are very sweet. Both sides have their mouths and boldly admit their feelings without running away. It is not irritating. The daily life after they are together is also very sweet and warm.

The pace of this book is relatively gentle, the characters are relatively three-dimensional, the content is brisk but not confusing, and the writing style is humorous and interesting. There are foreshadowings in the previous article. How high it reaches depends on whether there will be series connection later. The relationship between the protagonists seems to be relatively sweet right now. However, it is also sweet but has a foreshadowing. The attacker and the recipient dream of falling in love together. There is also an unreliable system, but like assists, each reward is relatively rewarding for the attacker. There are the climaxes that should be there. The progress is faster in the early stage and slower in the later stage. The presence of Brother Pi is also very good. The whole car exhaust smell is very fragrant. This book is amazing, funny and funny.

All I can say is that I enjoyed reading it in one sitting. The author himself feels that it is a bit rushed, but I think it is really good. The story is complete, there are no unfilled holes, the logic is smooth, the writing is very good, and most importantly, there is a lot of meat [full]

It's super beautiful and must be highly praised! So sweet [Admiration] Two men, I have read a lot of books recently but couldn't find them, and finally found this fairy tale [Like] [Like] I have read a lot of books, and I have read at my own pace and my requirements are high. This book is completely in line with [Love] Sweet article, two men. The plot and emotions are both fast-paced. They have been together for 50 chapters, and they are all mouthy. They don't pretend to be pigs and eat tigers. They level up and fight monsters together along the way, with a little humor (the system is really funny). It's really good [like]

God, this book made me understand how important paragraph comments are! ! Woohoo! ! By the way, can you send me the part where they were stumbling? Who knows! ! I'm late! Turns out those two chapters are still being reviewed! ! Chapters 65 and 66 Woohoo! ! ! After checking that you eat so well, you don't let me eat some too! ! Woohoo! ! /Sad! ! If any of you have pictures of that section, can you send them to me? Author: I need comfort! Woo woo woo [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] The plot is also very interesting, especially delicate. To be honest, the system rewards are so unique, hahaha, [admiration] [admiration] [laughing] I love watching [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]