Border Bus: Am I Dante? !

This is indeed one of the best Prison Bus fan novels I have read. It makes up for regrets without depriving the sinner of his growth. On the contrary, it enlightens the sinner more than the original work and is more charming than the original Dante [Like]

Author Chu Aya? [Laughing evilly] It's a good book. Dante is very good at talking, and there is no awkwardness in the pretentiousness. Goldfinger is also very consistent with the city, not obtrusive, integrated, and it is fun and not boring. It is really a superior work [laughter] [like]

It's a good book. It's deep in some places, and it's entertaining in some places. It doesn't have a knife. It's actually a bit semi-invincible (I think it's pretty good). It has a heroine, but I think the emotional line is OK. Of course, I read it without thinking. I think the only drawback is that the updates are a bit slow, but it doesn't really matter. The pace of this book is relatively fast.

The content written is very novel, and it rewrites the plot of 084 in another way. Although it is capable, it does not choose to change the main flow. Dante inside is more like a parent, providing shelter to the sinners when they need it, and letting them grow when they face situations they can handle and their own tribulations. Most of the abilities Dante acquires are used in the plot to solve the root causes that cannot be solved in the original plot (such as the blood demon's thirst for blood, etc.), And are also used to save characters. It makes the development of the plot rational and not so brainless. At the same time, the author has also made changes based on the original plot performance. There are many original performances in the sinners' chapters. I personally think it is much better than the original plot, and each sinner has a different style. Dante and the sinners in the book are more lively, and the 13 idiots in the prison form a family-like relationship with the people who get on the bus later, and everyone's relationship becomes better than in the original plot. People like Uncle Chong successfully solved the knot in their own chapters, and all tragedies were reversed (those like Gopher and Catherine were also saved). What the author writes is like one of the countless branches of a river, except that this branch flows in a better direction. (You need to have a certain understanding of the original plot, otherwise many people will not understand it, and the same goes for other Prison Bus fans) Finally, the author is cute [laughing]

Well, I have played the original game, and the plot is very good. It is not an invincible plot, but as long as you understand it, it can give you a special kind of satisfaction in one line. It is highly recommended.

I have read some books about Bus, and this one is still well written. It is not that Dante was led by the nose in the "original book"; in this book, Dante has firmly established his "manager leadership". When sinners follow their own path, Dante will enlighten the sinners and also deal with the top management of K Nest. What I like most is how Dante handled Xiao Tang's rescue of the child when he first entered the K nest (Xiao Tang has changed from simply worshiping the ending person, and is looking forward to "The End of the Dream (this book should become a continuation of the dream)"). Also, Heath treated the bus as a family member before entering the villa (talked to Dante beforehand, not impulsive), finally there is Dante who has not played games in vain [face covering]

What art! Your description in this world is simply beautiful. Different sinners have their own emotions, and you perfectly overlapped them with the original work. I must have done a lot of homework in this area (tears flowed from your eyes unconsciously)! It was me who lost my composure. (Take out a handkerchief to wipe away tears) Faced with such excellent works as yours, I really can't suppress myself. I think that in the near future, Ringzhi will no longer ask for any art works to be submitted!

The children are very beautiful. The knives are basically all broken. In the chapter of the box, three of them are dead and all are alive. Dongbaek and Donglang were turned into dolls and then given to the box by Dante.

Jia Qiu: Answer me, Jia Baoyu, what do you think Hongyuan needs most now👿 Since you insist on burying your thoughts🫵 Then I have to take an ungentlemanly approach😡 You still don't have the answer😮‍💨 Baoyu, you still haven't given the real answer😩 I ask again, what does Hongyuan need? It seems that I have to wait until a severe winter is approaching before I can estimate whether you are still green at all👊 Look at yourself👉 Dig out your humanity and justice from within🫴 Jia Qiu: Then let me ask you👊😡👊 Baozi: Then ask me😊 Box: Teacher, I know 😔 Jia Qiu: You are not allowed to answer questions in class. Zi Lu elbows him. Jia Baoyu, I am asking you😡☝️ Baozi: Then you ask me, I don't know what to say😊 Xiaofu: The teacher...🤕 Jia Qiu: I didn't ask you, Zilu, maintain order in the classroom😡 Jia Baoyu, answer me quickly😡 Teammate: Dad, answer him🥺😣😖😫💀 Teacher Dadan: Tick-tock-tick (just answer him)😭 Baozi: ☺️ finally (The phone was turned on) Baozi: Oh↑be kind∽😊 Jia Qiu: Children can be taught👍🏻

So proud, so proud This is what I want to see Tell Me👏 Tell Me👏 mirror👏よmirror👏 Ichiban👏きな👏private👏👏になるの👏👏 Tell Me👏 Tell Me👏 Mirror👏よmirror👏👏 Ichiban👏きな👏private👏になるの👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏 👏👏👏👏👏

A+, no doubt about it. A new plot is created based on the original story, and even unexpected characters become teammates. Every tragedy in the original work has been rewritten, and it is even very reasonable. Although updating requires patience, patience ends every time you update. Needless to say, this is a great piece of work! You are A+!

Your rating is... Unable to determine... Even if it is a ring finger, I can't understand you... Ah no, your art, I also seem small in front of this kind of thinking. It is thousands of years ahead of the city's art, which makes me feel that I am worthy of the title of ring master. The starry sky shining in the city can no longer describe your creative power...

It sounds strange, but I haven't actually seen the original work at all, but I think it's really good, and I've watched a lot of it.

Well written, but the author needs to be careful! The flow rate of the monthly meter is never very good, except of course for people like Daddy Younuo and Set, the God of Prison War.

Fortunately, we didn't write about the spider nest directly. The number of people in the spider nest in this mirror world is much lower than that in the main world. There are really no humans left [face covering]

The writing is very nice, I like the complex ingredients.

It makes up for almost all the regrets I had while playing the game. The only thing that makes me nervous is that the protagonist comes to treat Aya as his wife, but it is not a big flaw. After ignoring this point, it is still very comfortable to watch.

Let me talk about the conclusion first: it is definitely worth reading the 084 fanfic, but the author seems to have not stretched it out in the early stage, and there are indeed some unacceptable plots in it. This is true, but in my opinion it still has flaws and is worth watching.

Wow, it's really enjoyable to read this chapter after reading the main storyline of Yueji ☝The content of a single chapter of Super Big Cup can definitely bring joy, and wise changes and another narrative can bring endless surprises! !

I hope there will be more in the future, and some Easter eggs from the game will be added.

What I watched was Dante as the protagonist [Like]

This is what I want to see! ! ! Must have perfect score! ! ! [Bookshelf plus one]

No knife. Single heroine. The writing is good. A mix of elements, but not bad. Good [Like][Like][Like]

The nerves are just right! The writing is adequate when it comes to expressing emotions. You are A+! I was a bit OOC from time to time because I was too free in the back. Two points will be deducted severely.

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I wrote a pocket and I wrote well. This and this are very good. They look very good. They are very good (≧∇≦*). Praise me.

Although this book is indeed very good, but the heroine I want to be floating [pitch][push][push][push]

For me, it is a very good book. After all, there are too few 80-level books and they are either discontinued or short. I feel that this is still very good.

What I want to read is this mouth. The writing at the end of each chapter is so good. After reading a chapter of this book, you will have endless aftertaste like you have finished the chapter of Prison Bus.

It looks good and makes up for the regrets. Dante's perspective fits the urban environment and is not too obtrusive. There are certain details, such as unclear handling of urban taboos, but overall it is still a good one, above.