My Loose Cultivator Master

I can watch it, but some details feel a bit far-fetched, but most of it is pretty good, at least I can watch it. The typo here does not affect reading, but sometimes you still need to be careful when writing numbers. After all, this thing is the most basic setting. If you write it randomly, it will be messed up later. If other time travelers come over, it will feel confusing, and the settings brought in by one person will definitely not conflict. The monks originally started practicing qi, and they started practicing again here. Wouldn't it be said that these are two kinds of qi, and they are different things, right? It feels like this thing is purely used to give the protagonist a golden finger, and the time traveler's training speed is ridiculously fast, okay? Especially that Tang Shengyan's father and that Lu Lin I calculated the time. It has only been 40 years since Lu Lin came here, and he went from being a mortal to forming a pill. Why don't you say anything? Are the spiritual roots really all heavenly spiritual roots? That girl's father is really even more perverted. He is no more than 200 years old and in the middle stage of Nascent Soul. This speed of upgrading is really abnormal. Take a look at the local Yuanying you wrote about earlier. How old is it? The Yuanying is 560 years old. Look at this, it's almost dead of old age Show the superiority of one person's skills and reasonably cheat the protagonist? I feel like I have no more work to do. Most of the combat power system will collapse.

It felt good and nothing made me uncomfortable. The position of the master needs some attention. He can help his apprentice, but he cannot interfere with his own path. Once it interferes with something, it should be thrown away. I saw that the master left him in that cave to practice. More than 100 snacks were given. There is really no foundation-building monk. More than 100 snacks are easy to earn and have no impact. You can also change your mind to understand.

Not bad! This novel, except for some plots, needs a little polishing, but the rest can be said to be reasonable. It contains both the friendship between master and disciple, and the cruel indifference of the world of immortality. Although the combination of the two is not harmonious, it is well integrated. There are fewer typos than other novels, but there are too few updates. Only one chapter per day. This is not going to work! I don't dare to keep the book, for fear that it will be gone one day. The author should add more updates! Otherwise, it will be difficult for this popularity to increase. 🤦 I misread it, it's two chapters a day, but that's not enough! It's only 4,000. If you want to increase the popularity, it must be at least 5,000 or 6,000! 🤦

I originally thought Wang Ersi was the villain. . .

Good luck to the author, his writing is not weaker than others, it is not a genius, but it is very enjoyable to read.

It's pretty good, I hope the author will stick with it

It's a bit short, but it looks pretty good in the early stages. I hope to add more writing in the future!

So far, it looks relatively smooth! The protagonist is too old, if he is 17 or 18 years old, it would still be barely enough!

If you can read it, please help the author write.

Incredibly good-looking Very nice to look at.