My Pillow Turned into a Silver Wolf

I love watching Cross-Traveling, so I gave it five stars. After reading the current chapter, I feel that there are a few issues that are not very good. One is a little OOC. I feel that Silver Wolf's defense was a little too low when he came here. Although he is a loli, he is not a little girl in mind. He should not be allowed to touch his head when he comes up. The initial favorability is too high, and he seems very defenseless. Although Fang is a lolita, she is capable and smart. The male protagonist seems to have no sense of boundaries towards a girl he has just met for a short time. He is neither a relative of Silver Wolf nor his boyfriend. He comes up and says that he will give you a warm home, and then makes some self-righteous actions to comfort people. In fact, it is not normal to make people feel good, and may even raise people's vigilance. In addition, the words spoken by some characters are not ordinary enough, such as Yin Lang's evaluation of the meal cooked by the male protagonist. It would be okay to directly describe the meal from a third-person perspective, but if it is said from the first person and Yin Lang's mouth, it sounds strange. In daily life, when people evaluate cooking, they can just say it is very delicious. It is actually a bit embarrassing to say the same evaluation as a food documentary. There is still a lot of room for growth in daily life terms and descriptions such as ordinary prose. Come on, author.

Very good, look, very beautiful

It's okay, but isn't the favorable impression a bit too high? It's so fast. Silver Wolf just feels like he's given away for free.

After listening to it, it's really beautiful.

Very good, very good.

Not bad, very pretty

A bit like AI but good looking

Good looking. Love to see more.