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It doesn't matter if the protagonist looks frustrated. It looks majestic in the Muggle world, but in the wizarding world, no one will love you, and there is Dumbledore's malice. It looks like he is awesome when using the rules, but he is actually incompetent and has to be suppressed from time to time. Regardless of the above, it seems quite enjoyable, especially Harry's change after a few days of school. However, I feel that the author likes Little Red Hair very much, and especially wants Little Red Hair and the changed Harry to be friends again. It's a pity that I can't watch the lone wolf Harry anymore. Although it seems frustrating, if you look at it for a long time, the protagonist has many opponents, such as Voldemort, Dumbledore's pure-blood family and the Ministry of Magic. The subsequent opponent plots should be more exciting, and it is better than a simple fanfic that only focuses on studying.

It's a good read, and a great read. Dumbledore came to pick up the baby, and when he saw the gun pointed at himself, he fell silent: Ber, are all Muggles like this? A group of wandering criminal wizards robbed the protagonist, and the Aurors said they found a small amount of flesh and blood in a large number of Muggle bullets. The protagonist before putting on the Sorting Hat: I am a good person~ Sorting Hat: Azkaban Thank You Others question? A book called "Magic Laws" will challenge you in an organized way A first-year Christmas troll with full anti-magic attributes. The protagonist Avada can't solve it. His backhand is a tug tug tug. He is about to fall down and keeps pointing his gun at the person who suddenly appears. Dumbledore: Good guy, is it me again? Seeing this, why don't you click on this novel? Believe it or not, I will let Draco bite you [angry] The main author is the Liver Emperor. I haven't touched a word during the summer vacation. He earns ten thousand a day. He doesn't care about his own body. Let's just take a look. It's not a loss after reading it. [Aggrieved] Please take a look (biting handkerchief) He has worked so hard. Why is there no rating? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] I think the protagonist is not like the Virgin. The protagonist has his own plan. No matter how powerful he is, he is just a student who has just entered the wizarding world (although he sued the magic officials, gained the trust of Voldemort and Snape, and memorized the legal provisions). The plot is fast and steady, but. He is a Muggle arms dealer. Is he going to attack senior officials or students? Isn't that just invincible? [Time Travel + System] is very good, he is very good like this, he can save people who believe in him, and he can not be bullied [send heart] (Of course, I only express my personal opinions here, you have your own reasons😒)

The characters have distinct personalities, and the author's control of the characters and their relationships is excellent. Currently, the original characters all have a certain thickness, the writing is smooth, and the writing style is also good. It is considered an excellent article in Tomato.

I saw the title and synopsis of the book several times before and skipped it, but after reading it I realized that it was really good-looking, no censorship, the protagonist is thoughtful and deep, talking about cooperation with Malfoy, discussing the law with Old Barty, and making an oath with Voldemort... Let's read it Those who push Draco don't come, those who push Draco don't come, those who push Draco don't come! ! ! Say important things three times! ! ! Otherwise, there will be consequences at your own risk! ! ! There was a conflict of interest with the protagonist, and the outcome... I won't spoil it. Don't come here if you want to encourage me! Du Wei, don't come! Draco's extreme fans don't come! (If you don't like it, don't complain, it's hard to persuade the damn ghost with good words)

The quality is high, the plot is good, and the author is good. The following is a paragraph written by the author in Chapter 32: I looked at some of the authors next door. "What? You update twice a day?" "What? You update it once a day?" "What? You update three times a day?" And I want to update ten or thirteen times a day! More updates! More to the death!

This book is a very good novel, and there are many other Hogwarts fan novels in it, such as The Godfather, Remy (I forgot the name of that novel), etc. To be honest, I feel like that about other novels. But I think this novel is really good. I can't say the pace is too fast, but I can only say it's very good. The quality is very high. After all, I just read it and saw 33 pictures. I didn't pay attention to whether there are any updates. But the author's sentence of 13 a day shocked me even more. I thought about it and posted this review. In short, it's very good. Can the author give me a like?

The author writes very carefully and takes this novel very seriously. But the relationship between Dumbledore and the protagonist is handled a little too lightly. Moreover, the audience of this novel is very obvious. After reading the following, there should be relatively few negative fans, so it is worthy of encouragement.

Okay, it's like digging out gold from the tomato shit pile. After reading more than 30 chapters, I don't see any poisonous points. The protagonist is ruthless, but it is a more charming one. You can think of it as a gangster godfather or Dior.

It's super good-looking, the protagonist is very three-dimensional and not brainless, and the supporting characters also have their own unique points. It is difficult to evaluate the good and evil of the protagonist, and the complexity of the character is reflected. The author is also very diligent in updating, and this book still has great potential.

The overall content is very good, I just hope that the protagonist will not have cp, otherwise it will not be good-looking

Harry "Ron, you know, this thing is better than bullets"! Harry is no longer the cowardly Harry. The full text is very enjoyable, and what moved me more than the article was the author, Da Da, who is very sincere. A Da Da who makes a full-time living by writing online articles must be under a lot of pressure. Da Da posted some very sincere words in Chapter 122 that made me feel the same! I will pay attention to DaDa's books in the future, and I hope DaDa will get better and better. There will be 8 or even 10 updates a day, with a total of 20,000 words. DaDa writes books and never deliberately whets the readers' appetite. I hope it will get better and better [shy]

I have read Chapter 167. The author's writing is good. I feel very smooth after reading it. I feel refreshed after reading it. The gang established by the protagonist himself gradually encroaches and controls the magical world. So far, the book has very little about magic, and there is no intention to develop the heroine. It is all about fighting and killing, without any human touch. It is kind of mindless and satisfying as long as you kill the villain, and you will be done with it once and for all. Dumbledore is hostile to the protagonist, and Voldemort is also hostile, and now they are fighting like crazy. It's a bit too brainless to buy it with money, and kill it if you can't buy it, but the author updates it every day, which is very good, but I still hope the author can dig deeper. After all, this is a Hogwarts fanfic. While fighting, add more parts about magic, otherwise it will be like a gangster novel with a shell of Hogwarts. Finally, encourage the author, come on!

I can only say that it is very interesting. Please forgive my lack of adjectives. The characters are well developed. Overall, it is a very interesting derivative work. Also, the author updates very quickly, which is very enjoyable to watch (⌒▽⌒)

It's very well written. The main character is ruthless and doesn't talk much. He is neat and tidy. I particularly like the scene where the protagonist first enters Slytherin and encounters the school bullies. It's very cool. This is a novel that I highly recommend reading. I have read 97 chapters so far and haven't seen any poisonous points. Come on, author ps: The author is great and it's very comfortable to read.

Frankly speaking, I still like to read cool articles, and I can pretend to be good at reading them. It's in line with my preferences, the writing is good, I don't care about OOC, and the author is very diligent. I've saved up some since school started, and it's another good article [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's a male channel, and the protagonist is very ambitious, just like Long Aotian. How can I put it, it's very enjoyable to watch. If you don't accept it, just do it. Under the principle of truth, everyone has to follow the prescribed order, and if you don't accept it, change it. In short, it's quite enjoyable. Compared with other content, this fanfic is still very novel, but the ending is very regrettable. However, for some people, they may think that the protagonist is very violent or something, and the Malfoy family is destroyed, etc. Anyway, it is just an online novel. Let's enjoy it. Those who like novel themes of HP can read it.

The protagonist is a German gangster with a moustache. He recruits troops at Hogwarts and cooperates with Voldemort. He is anti-Dumbledore. The writing is very good and there are many gangster-like plots. He carries the truth (more than a handful) with him.

This book is not bad. Time travel, male protagonist, no cp, fan fiction, cool writing, system, golden finger. Some of the settings are novel, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics, but it's a pity that it ended abruptly and was unfinished. The male protagonist crazily criticizes ruthless people, is indifferent and elegant, smart and clever, calm and decisive, calm and collected, humble and studious, and powerful. Great, keep up the good work^O^~

It's awesome. I didn't expect that one hundred thousand words would only be 40 or 50 chapters. The quality is extremely high and the details are handled very well.

I really like this book. I probably spent a day and a night reading it. It's really good. After the character change of Harry Potter, it really suits my taste, and the protagonist is really good. I really like it, but the author's ending is a bit sloppy. Just when I thought he would have a follow-up, he suddenly cut off the ending, but Voldemort and Momentum have not been killed yet. I think it can be written at least a dozen more, so I can't give 5 stars, I can only give 4 stars.

The protagonist is vividly portrayed, and the supporting characters are not flat characters. They also have their own ideas and considerations.

As soon as I saw the name of the protagonist, I was very familiar with it, and the style also reminded me of it. After reading it, I also read another book by the author.

Very, very good-looking. The author updates very, very quickly. [Sending heartfelt wishes] The quality is very, very good. That sentence is very nice

Very delicious, The Rise of the Dark Lord III

Very creative, I like the character design of the protagonist very much

Although the author's writing is a bit OOC, the overall rhythm is very good, the outline is attractive enough, the character of the protagonist also poked me, the plot is well controlled, and the updates are fast. Overall, I like it very much and will follow it until the end [Blow Kiss]

It's really super good-looking, and the author's writing is also very good. It's just that there are a little few updates a day. I hope I'll update a hundred times a day.

The content is very good and I like it very much, but I still say the same thing: The author takes great care of his body~ I'm a little worried~[Send heartfelt message]

Looks good, boss, please take care of yourself

Not bad, very good-looking, and the author is also nice.