HP: Bella and I Have a Baby

Nice! ! ! I really like Bella, this dangerous, charming and a little bit crazy lady! The protagonist is also very charming, and the love between the two Slytherins is so awesome! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's pretty good. The quality is guaranteed by the veteran author of HP fan fiction with two female protagonists. What's more surprising about this new book is that the author has changed his habit of not using ".". I give him a five-star review and hope for more updates.

A different Lily story, a very special HP story. It was really annoying to see Bella patronizing and worshiping Voldemort at first, but later I found out that there is a hidden secret. I hope Oz can get through this difficult level! ! I hope they are sweet and beautiful hahahahaha, this is the first time I see this kind of sweet but not sweet love story.

Suddenly I feel good about Lila... I don't know how to put it, I guess it should be like this. The original timeline is: Oz and Nose's soul fragments may have merged or Oz became evil and Bella completely fell in love with Nose and worked for Nose because of the Gu worm, which is the same as the original work. After Laila knew everything, she traveled back through the time turner to save her mother. I've only read Chapter 70 or 80, so I don't know what happens next. I guess this is it. I really feel sorry for Laila and admire her bravery. And when Laila put it back on, she should have played with the unicorn. It shows that she still has a pure heart after going through so many things. And she made a lot of preparations, such as asking Bella to find a Taoist priest. I can't imagine what she went through alone [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] I have to say that the author is so powerful and the character is well created. You can guess a lot from just a few short clips [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] (please don't comment on my personal opinion)

It's good to watch, but I want to see Bella chasing his wife in the crematorium

I have to say that Baicai has written so many HPs. He has a really good understanding of HPs. He also added some of his own ideas to the mix, and his writing is very good.

This book is really good. I originally read the book by the author Industrial Orange Candy. At that time, some book friends asked the author if he could write about Bella. The answer was that he was unsure and difficult, which made me feel lost. I saw this book in the recommendation list. After reading dozens of chapters, I still don't know whether it is written by the same author. I still read the comments and saw it [face covering]. I suggest everyone to read the book Industrial Orange Candy while updating this book. They are all very good [like]

Full marks, full marks, 💯 Lao Baicai's works are the best in my heart, especially Sissi's article that made me pay attention to Lao Baicai [Sending Hearts] But it's a pity that I don't know why I stopped updating the article about raising Penelo [crying]

It is a HP Lily novel that is well-written but also has its own characteristics. The emotional expression and character creation are very delicate, and the cp line is also very comfortable to write, making people willing to read on. The only problem is that the pace of the story is very stiff, like walking on an asphalt road. There is no small animal jumping out on the roadside to give readers a bright spot. Even if there are twists and turns, the plot goes by very quickly, giving people a dull feeling. This style is not bad, as long as you read it you will feel very coherent. What follows is purely my personal complaint and has nothing to do with the quality of the book: Shouldn't we consider changing the cover and title? I wouldn't have thought it was a lily novel unless I clicked in.

It's a rare HP story where the heroine is not Hermione. I quite like the character, but it feels a bit similar to Narcissa's story.

Brother (sister), why do you want to finish such a good article? I have already killed many HP fans in my heart! I absolutely believe that if you read it yourself before posting it, your score will be at least two levels higher (referring to wrong sentences and missing words). I once thought it was written by a machine, but I dispelled my suspicion after seeing some subtle descriptions and a comfortable atmosphere. Currently hoping to finish later? Will definitely follow up with a follow-up review...

The dual heroines of the wizarding world have another novel that is worthy of repeated review [learned][learned][learned]. I have always liked the dual heroines. This book has the sweets you can like [adoration][adoration][adoration] (the heroine is Hermione too much [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing], I want to read something different)

Don't interrupt like the last book. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

Very interesting subject! It was very interesting and funny at the beginning, but in the end the author was too hasty to finish it, and it was unfinished as the author said, but the main body was finished, but I think the author forgot one line, that is, the wooden box (or barrel) placed together with the crown, and I still don't know what its function is. When I saw that, I always thought that was the real cause of the heroine's accident, but it turned out to be the crown [currently in the process of drafting] In fact, I think strictly speaking, if the heroine wants to play well, all the Horcruxes must be destroyed, but in the end, only the crown is eliminated... Enmmm I won't go into details, but overall it's pretty good! !

The first time I read the author's article, I was attracted by Bella, the 'devil'. As a villain in the original work, the author has made full preparations for this new Bella who has the opportunity to change her own destiny, and where she will go. I look forward to the next story, and please work harder, author.

Nice! After the elegant Narcissa, I finally want to take action on the eldest sister. The passionate rose is so exciting.

As good as ever, when will the last Malfoy be updated?

I said why is it so beautiful that I can't stop? It turns out that he and Orange Candy are the same author. It's so beautiful that I love it. I love it. I love it. I love it.

As expected of Lao Baicai, I have already followed several HP books. When I opened the first chapter of this book and saw that the author is Lao Baicai, I knew it was safe. I knew that there would always be a HP book with the heroine being Bella. I recommend it.

I love this version of Bella deeply and feel that this is what a young lady from a famous family should look like, sober, strong, clear about her responsibilities and the life she wants! [Already planted][Bookshelf plus one]

Who can explain it? Is Oz Greenwich, one of the two heroines in this article, an original character of the author? I really like having double heroines, especially fan CPs with original characters in HP.

Dad, you must persist until the end and don't give up again

Good-looking (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡, still the style of Lao Baicai. Oz and Bella's tug-and-war (gosh, the author was bold enough to write this). When two other people faced Voldemort's conspiracy, Bella's filter was broken, and the two faced danger together. Very nice. The foreshadowing in the front is also filled with holes in the back. Very nice. Feeling sorry for Leila.

I finally waited for Bella, please don't torture me and don't use a knife.

This article is very good. One look at the author and I know that this article will live up to expectations. Lao Baicai's writing is really good.

Baicai, you are very good, but I have another candidate for Bella's text [shy][makes a face]

Okay, the author's books are as good as ever, just don't give up on them [crying]

The ambiguous pull between Bella and Ozzy in the early stages of Super Heartbeat [laughs]

Baicai's several HP fanfics are really very good to read.

The heroine is an original character, the object being Bella. It's not a brainless invincible school. Marry first and love later.