Traveling Through the Old Nine Gates, I Am Sure to Be This Heartthrob.

It was so well written and the characters were well described. I thought it was a sweet story about All Xiangtuan's pet, but until I saw the chapter where Lao Qi died, I immediately died. They met in spring, and that spring happened to be in March They parted in the cold winter. There was no snow in that winter, but the weather was extremely cold. In winter, not only everything dies, but also the love in the heart. 'Hey, what's the new stall doing? ' 'Do business in the arena and sell information. ' The relic left by Qi Tiezui to Bai Xiaosheng is not a cold dead thing, but a living Xiao Qi. "The relics Lao Qi left me are not many, Xiao Qi is one of them." Orange peel, author, please give me back my orange peel [cry][cry][cry] Wow, finally someone loves Xiaobai again, but the orange peel is also dead [crying][crying][crying] Now Xiaobai is alone again [crying][crying][crying] I hate Changsheng. Changsheng asked Xiaobai to send away Lao Qi and then send away the orange peel. But overall, this novel is not very sadistic and gives people a dull knife feel.

It's very beautiful. The characters are very delicate. The more delicate the twist, the greater the impact. When I read it in the early stage, I thought it was a sweet story. I really kept crying later [crying]. I could have died with you, but you left the last hope of the Qi family. He can make the Qi family stand up again, so he can't die. He has to cultivate the hope of the Qi family with his own hands. The enemy is still alive. He wants to avenge his lover with his own hands, so he can't die [crying] Be under control and be careful. The later part of this article will be very hurtful. If you can't accept it, run away.

This book is very nice. I especially like the pairing of Qi and Bai. You must read it. I really recommend it to everyone. Moreover, it is not an ordinary sweet novel. It is a different kind of fireworks. There is a twist around chapter 45. Remember to go and see the author. If you meet the author, remember to say hello to me.

It's so good to watch, it's really super good to watch, and it's really coming to fruition in just three or four chapters. [I learned how to play with Qi Tiezui. He was the first one to eat meat. There was a bit of abuse later on. [Crying] The chapters about Wu Xie were quite fun.

The protagonist is neither a real good guy nor a real bad guy. But he must be a good person in the eyes of some people. There are not so many bloody plots. The author's description is really good. Even Zhang Qishan is like the original work. When I heard fans of the original work analyze Zhang Qishan before, I was just shocked that he betrayed the Nine Sects and had no superfluous feelings. But the author made me know Zhang Qishan's ruthlessness and the arrogance of high-ranking people. I stayed up late to read it in one sitting, and I burst into tears. This is the first time I have seen something close to the original work in the Laojiumen fanfic. The plot line is developing very quickly. I look forward to the follow-up development.

It's good to watch, but it's not enough. I beg you to wait for more, to one or two hundred pictures. It's not enough. Please be more positive. The eighth master is so funny. He stirred up a hornet's nest in one sentence. He poked the Buddha, the second master and the second master, the ninth master's Shura field🌝🌝🌝🌝, please go ahead. The ending must be all, all, all. Three important chapters are needed to catch all the first, second, and third generations of the nine gates in one go. I don't think it's too much. Seeing that it is completely different later, the Zhang family is written as the villain, and it is not all at all.

Although the ending is left blank, if you think about it carefully, you can already see Xiaosheng's future at a glance. The loneliness brought by longevity is watching the people around you die one by one, leaving you to become a passerby in a different world forgotten by time. Keep connecting with others. Constantly watching others die. Lonely, I am waiting for the death that I don't know when, and I am waiting for the reunion that I don't know when. I have never understood why some people pursue eternal life. When they skip the reincarnation of time and lose the initial joy, all that is left is endless loneliness and the death of those around them. The writing is superb. It's a masterpiece that you must read even if you can't stop crying. The writing is beautiful and the story is also beautiful.

Ba Ye and Xiaosheng are a perfect match. I feel that Xiaosheng would not be with him so quickly if he had been with someone else. But Ba Ye is different, sunny and enthusiastic. Xiaosheng has grown up in the darkness, and Ba Ye has a character like this that he likes and wants. Ba Ye did not refuse when he approached him. I feel that Ba Ye is Xiaosheng's salvation. I hope Ba Ye can be resurrected later.

It's really, really beautiful! ! ❤️❤️❤️❤️ But I hope that except for Lao Qi, they all have single arrows, and I still hope that Qi Bai will be together forever. The single arrows look very cool, but if it is a double-headed sword, it feels weird ( ˃̶̤́ ꒳ ˂̶̤̀ )

The front part made me smile like an aunt [laughing evilly], and the back part made me tear up so much that I couldn't stop crying [I was about to cry]. The sweet story I had promised was ruined again, oh oh [crying]

Okay, okay, I've read a lot of Pirates fanfics, and the routines are basically all, but this one is a CP with Lao Qi, so the idea is very novel. Although the emotional line is a bit fast, it doesn't affect the CP. And although he is said to be a heartthrob, Xiaobai is not the kind of person who is flirtatious and emotionally devoted to Lao Qi. I feel that Lao Qi is a rope that holds him. If the rope is broken, he will wither like a flower. I feel sorry for him. (By the way, can the author really not resurrect Lao Qi? The young couple is so sweet) And I really like Xiaobai's characterization. He is not the cookie-cutter perfect fantasy partner. He doesn't need to be a powerful or powerful person or have a great life experience (because many stealing fans are basically like this now). He is not perfect, he has shortcomings, he is greedy for money, lazy, and petty. He does not have the meaning of "deifying" the protagonist, so that it feels more vivid and real. In fact, if you think about it carefully, people who travel to troubled times are all "wandering souls" with no destination. Xiaobai can have the warmth of "home" here because of Lao Qi, so please keep it warm to me! [Smile] Author, try stabbing me again!

This book is really good, the author really writes it well, but it is really painful. I really want Lao Qi to live. One of them knows the past, and the other calculates the future. They are obviously meant for each other. Why are we separated forever?

The period of Laojiumen is very good. It shows the acquaintance, love and happiness between Bai Xiaosheng and Qi Tiezui. The admiration and love of others for Bai Xiaosheng are also vividly displayed (personally I think it is a bit too much). The life experience of Bai Xiaosheng throughout the whole story and the words he uses to persuade others to face life are very beautiful. ✌️ At the same time, I personally think that the knife part is particularly essential. Unfortunately, it is a bit messy, but the despair and sorrow of this period can touch people's hearts. Just like what is said in the extra story, no one can be hard-hearted, 😢 but the further you go, the more rough it gets. To be honest, I didn't understand the Shahai part at all and had a happy ending. I didn't think about the story after the reboot, which is quite a pity. If it had been written longer, the rating might have been higher. Regarding the extra, my personal opinion is that it is recommended to delete it. It is completely inconsistent with the lifestyle and emotions of Bai Xiaosheng and Qi Tiezui. At the same time, it is inconsistent with the content of the main text. It is a weird extra that goes against the wishes of the protagonist simply to satisfy other people's love and desires... But Fang Waizhong's viewing of the movie was okay... The scene of arranging the meeting between Bai Xiaosheng and Qi Tiezui made me truly realize that this is still a work written by the author🤨 In short, the shortcoming is that when it is time to write in detail, it is not written in detail, and it focuses too much on drawing the emotional line and showing the charming charm🤔 The advantage is that the language is beautiful and the emotional lines are deeply drawn, which makes people remember it fresh. If the author is willing to open up new pits, I will definitely follow it.

The writing is very good, but I really cried at the end. Especially in terms of movie viewing, Xiaobai saw Lao Qi again but it was not his Lao Qi. And when Orange Peel passed away, Xiaobai really cried to death when he said that someone bullied him but no one supported him. I really want to go in and give Zhang Qishan a big mouth. People who read this are a little bit worried. The author's writing is super good. When I saw Xiaobai returning to Changsha, I thought that Lao Qi was not dead, but was just planning something, so he faked his death. If he really died, I thought there would be a resurrection or something, but no.

The author is simply not good enough! ! ! It's very interesting, but not enough. The author will update it a lot. It's best to update 100 chapters [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Wow, I thought it was a sweet article, but it turned out to be Tiezui. . . I dare not open my eyes. I hope it's my imagination. I feel sorry for Xiaobai [crying]

It's beautiful, but it's so cruel that it made me burst into tears. I beg the author to resurrect Lao Qi later. I am willing to trade my lifelong marriage for my lover to finally get married.

All in all, the setting of this heartthrob is pretty cool. Everyone will fall in love with Xiaobai, but Xiaobai will always think about Qi Tiezui. It is best not to watch it at night because it will hurt your heart and make you unable to sleep. I really can't accept that the setting for Bai Xiaosheng was so good and brilliant at the beginning, and I can't bear the feeling of losing love and suffering for a lifetime. Even I can't believe that Qi Tiezui's death happened so quickly, so hastily, and such a good person died so carelessly in an instant. Xiaobai probably can't believe it either. Xiaobai is a person who dares to love and hate. He dares to love Qi Tiezui, he dares to hate Zhang Qishan, he dares to hate and regret that he has misunderstood people after seeing clearly the true thoughts of Zhang Rishan and Er Erhong. Bai Xiaosheng is also very rational. The character is like a living person. The bright colors are vivid. There are many colors on him, both sweet and bitter, which further highlight Bai Xiaosheng's three-dimensional sense. Xiaobai is also kind and conscientious. He will be soft-hearted for Xiaoqi. In a sense, Xiaobai is not a piece of paper, he is not a piece of paper without temperature, but a person of flesh and blood. I feel that Xiaobai has become a person and a legend in my heart. Xiaobai is also undefined. He can be murderous and decisive, he can be gentle, he can also be lively and agile. That's why I said Xiaobai looks like a person

It's very good to watch [Blowing Kiss] But the back part is too cruel, I don't dare to watch it [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] And can the author resurrect Qi Tiezui? If not, at least find someone for Xiaobai who will treat him wholeheartedly [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Our Xiaobai is suffering too much [crazy]

I was really convinced. I originally wanted to find a sweeter one, but in the end, why did you do this? It was too harsh (maybe it's because I have a low tear point, and I can't stand the abuse at all), but it's so beautiful. I was so awake in the middle of the night that I couldn't sleep at all [smile]

I felt really uncomfortable after reading it. The writing is so good. Of course, the writing style of a good book is very important, but what really touches people's hearts and leaves a mark is the deep-rooted emotions of the love and hatred of the characters created by the author. Maybe the fan story is not so ups and downs and even the readers know the general direction of the plot, but the character of Xiaobai is brought to life by the author. In the second half of the book, you are even driven by your own emotions by the character of Xiaobai. You hate what he hates and love what he loves. The books I have read in the past usually have Qi Tiezui as a character, and they are not very focused on the description. Even if there is his cp, it is a little bit more deputy eight. But after reading this book, I really like Qi Tiezui. This is the charm of the character that you can't describe no matter how many gorgeous words you use. I am a person who can't stand reading abusive articles at all. I feel so uncomfortable after reading it that I can't accept it. However, the abuse of this article does not mean that it is reflected in the death of Lao Qi as it is written. He will not make you cry after reading it. It is the regret and sadness that lingers in the hearts of Xiaobai and the readers since Lao Qi's death. It is a pity that Lao Qi passed away that winter and left. It is a pity that Xiaobai knew that Lao Qi died as a result of his various mistakes. It was also a pity that in the end, even if Chen Pi did not go to Changbai Mountain, he could not change his fate. There were too many regrets, too many mistakes, and everything was beyond your control. Everything was fate. How could God let you really live a happy life? I even felt that it was the causes of Xiaobai's previous life that created the effects of this life. The author's writing is really good. The only shortcoming is that it is too short and not enough to read. I also sincerely hope that the author can write more books in the future and bring better stories to us readers. I have read a lot of books on this type of subject. I cannot say that I have read them all, but the popular ones and the less popular ones are all in the group. In my mind, this book ranks in the top 10. Of course, this is my personal opinion. After all, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. I mistook it! Readers who like DB fanfics strongly recommend this book as a book worth adding to your collection, but if you can't stand the slightest bit of abuse, just skip to the chapters. After all, some chapters are really uncomfortable, like cutting flesh with a dull knife. Don't even look at the Buddha Party, after all, he was strangled to death, just like Xiaobai said, his death was ridiculous.

It looks really good, but when I look at certain places, I feel like drool is dripping from the corners of my eyes [I'm about to cry]

It's really good to watch, but it's a bit too cruel. I originally read it for the sweet story, but I was very upset in the middle. But the writing yesterday was really good, but the plot was simplified a lot and it ended too quickly. The ending was a bit not very good. Although I also know that Bai Xiaosheng's final ending will not be like the one in Lao Jiumen's period, I am still a little melancholy. I actually want to see more of Bai Xiaosheng's plot, but I haven't watched the extra episodes for a long time [crying]. At last! I still hope everyone is well! Big and good!

It's very interesting to read, the character of the protagonist is very attractive, and the writing is also very good. The life of the protagonist is very attractive to me. The plot is appropriate, very interesting and logical. The emotional description is also very good, and the emotional aspect is very good.

The back part is really "super sweet" and very beautiful. I recommend you to watch it.

It's super invincible and beautiful. Come and see it. It's so sweet. . . . . . . . . . . . . . When I read more than 30 chapters, the editor's "sweetness" was unbelievable. Later, the style of the painting changed and I was abused [awkward laughter] [face covering]

I have to say it's really interesting. It turned out that the Tomb Raider fanfics I read were all heart-throbs, but I wasn't with anyone else, or with Er Erhong and Chen Pi. I never had a perspective with Qi Tiezui. After reading this book, I realized that everyone has their own shining point. They are really good. Damn, Qi Tiezui and Bai Xiaosheng were really close to each other. They really liked each other. Even in the back, when Qi Tiezui died, Bai Xiaosheng was not with anyone. It was really not a loss to invest in the movie, and the characters were well described. Except when Qi Tiezui died, that part was really sad. It was really beautiful. Highly recommended!

I like this book very much. Although the love story between Xiaobai and Lao Qi is written in the extra, the death of Lao Qi in the main text has always been a thorn in my heart. I think I may not have the courage to read their story again. I have been crying, from Lao Qi to his death. I didn't even hear Xiaobai say that I love him. Chen Pi couldn't worry about Xiaobai until he died. Lao Qi, who transformed into an ancient bronze tree, sent Xiao Bai away with his life. At the end of the text, Lao Qi was not resurrected. His tears could not stop, but their relationship ended here. [Love] [Love] [Almost crying] [Almost crying] Their story is over, and it has left a deep mark in my heart.

The author writes very well. It almost killed me without a knife! Qi Tiezui is so good, how come... I thought he was a sweet father in the early stage, but the knife came and caught me off guard (ಥ_ಥ)

I thought it was sweet when I looked at it from the front, but it tortured me to death at the back, and I burst into tears just looking at it. But the author's writing is really good. I hope the author can update it soon.

Please read and cherish the first 40 chapters. I really like the pairing of the protagonist and Lao Qi. Lao Qi can be the protagonist Bai Yueguang. If Qi Tiezui can pamper Bai Xiaosheng one point, he must do two points, and then try his best to get the third point. Qi Tiezui's love is visible to the naked eye, and he just needs to use a loudspeaker to announce it to the whole world. After Lao Qi left, there was still Chen Pi, the only person Bai Xiaosheng could rely on, but he also left - "People always like things that are out of season... It's like after you die... I find Guangxi is particularly beautiful..." Although she is a heartthrob, I feel that the heartthrob attribute is a bit weak, but she is really beautiful🥺🤧