Gunslinger Angel's Dimensional Journey Begins in the Delta

A very good book The author combines the elements of the two games very well, and the plot design is relatively reasonable and smooth. From the shaping and description of the operators, it can be seen that he has done more in-depth research on the background of the operators. This alone has surpassed many Delta fan stories. The author is still very careful. However, Liya's characterization and background settings could be further polished. There are also some shortcomings and mistakes in the description, and there are also wording problems. For example, the description of the white knuckles appears twice in three paragraphs. It is very abrupt, but it may be that the author did not notice it. It's okay to pay attention. The irrational phenomenon of Angels will definitely be discovered in the future. I don't know how the author will come back to it at that time. You can pay more attention to it. I have read several books that failed to come back and collapsed. I hope the author can continue to bring surprises to us Zhouzhou players. I will continue to read it. I just hope that it can be updated soon and it can be recommended to let more people see it. This book really shouldn't be buried. It is a good example of fan fiction. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Yes, can the subsequent chapters discuss the planning of rice pudding? They are so inhumane

Not bad, especially Chapter 11 is really well written. Give a five-star review as support.

The story is simple, the writing is excellent, and there is zero description of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. A very good "Operation Delta" fanfic. The writing style is worth it. It can be said that it is one of the best among Tomatoes writing about Delta. The combat descriptions of modern warfare are very good, and the modifiers are also very sharp. The plot of the magic modification, especially the interweaving of the timeline, is perfect. Anyway, I can't resist the charm of the mecha. Gee, speed update. Although the heroine is currently neutral, I feel that the mecha has affected the balance of the battlefield. Sooner or later, I will intervene. When the time comes, I can help Weilong and intervene in the plot. I look forward to the follow-up! ! And your sister has grown up too, right? I didn't say a specific time, but I can write more sticker scenes anyway. Interspersing daily life with battles is the right solution for the novel~

Let me teach you how to read this book, and think of it as a novel written by Xiao Le and Ni Fu. It has the same skin as ew's story, and the pattern becomes bigger in an instant [laughter]

Yes, the character restoration is okay. The plot is viewed from a first-person perspective, which is very good. Whether the story is written based on the season tasks in the game or is an original plot depends on how the author writes it. The current plot is not bad [like]

It's okay, but I don't like the first person version.

Except for the first person, which is a bit uncomfortable, everything else is okay. Just watch Aneng tonight [laughing]

The linkage will be announced in one day. The author must seize this opportunity [laughing evilly][face covering][laughing evilly]

A very good book, excellent in all aspects, but it is written in the first person. If you read too many novels written in the third person, you will not get used to it.

Well, Arnold, this is a large size, so five stars is not excessive.

Check it out, a very good book.

It's really good

I feel pretty good so far, but will the author have other characters from Porridge appear in the future? Or is Aneng the only one with no other porridge in the whole journey?

Okay, be sure to write it down!

It's well written, but I'm a bit uncomfortable with first person.

The character is really on point, really good-looking

Good-looking, really good-looking

Give your peers a five-star to encourage them

Very good writing style. Maybe you can try writing a few short essays and submit them to newspapers.

Yes, yes, but blaming everything on Havork is a bit unfair. This makes it feel like GTI is weaker than Hasker, and GTI will definitely be more cautious. Why not introduce it directly⊙▽⊙

I read a very good book. (*´I`*)b

It's pretty good-looking

The description is good and the characters are three-dimensional, consistent with the original work. It is a good book. Anyway, it suits my taste

The writing is very good, the characters are not broken, and the plot is exciting, especially the description with such a strong sense of déjà vu. Is this really a new author? [Laughs]

Come on, the plot arrangement is not good and needs to be tempered

Not bad, better than the one next door Author, how do you feel about predicting this linkage?

Although I haven't played it yet, give it a look, it looks good.

Not bad, not bad, the writing is good That's why the author is so stupid However If you're not a Fortnight fan, it might be hard to watch.

Except there are few others, it's pretty good