After Rebirth, I Have Nine Families

It tied the game in one go!! It's beautiful! The group portraits are also very well described. Even the ghosts in the article have their own stories. It's quite interesting. You can really jump in. Don't hesitate. You won't lose money if you invest in it.

Okay, it's really good-looking. I don't have much to say. There's nothing bad about it so far. From the current point of view, the protagonist is taking the route of Neptune, but he obviously prefers Huang Bei. Is Huang Bei the main character? But judging from the fact that the author directly killed Zuo Dan, I suspect there was a big knife behind him, so don't let another accident happen.

The male protagonist is reborn, retaining his palace but not forgetting to return to the uninhibited indulgence of his youth in his actions. This looks very natural and comfortable. It's relatively slow to pick up, but it's interesting to occasionally reveal the author's outlook on life. The shortcoming is that it is not a fast-food novel, and the pace is not like a novel that should be published on Tomato. However, those who deserve support should still support [Like] Sister Mu, will you also fall? [Shy] ⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯⋯ Then it didn't work at all.

Nice! ! ! The plot is very compact. Although there are multiple heroines, each heroine has her own characteristics. They are not copied and pasted in the same way. The language and text are very contagious, and the writing is also very good! Very good book

The story is interesting, and the writing is racy and powerful! The author has rich experience. I have never seen anything like this in a lifetime of watching bathhouses! He is a bad guy with a righteous heart, a mischievous person who follows the moral bottom line, and an honest but all-around smooth writing style. Similar to Wang Shuo, it is eye-catching. I think it is enough to make a TV series. [Like] Highly recommended! ! ! !

The literary talent is brilliant and the language is vivid. Whether the protagonist, the supporting role or even the passerby are full of characters, the open-minded optimism when facing life's insights resonates strongly with people. It is a good book worth reading.

The writing is really good and the descriptions are spot on. In addition to ordinary routines, there is also self, which is rare. The feeling of the emotional line is also very good, and the heroine is very comfortable. This point also runs through the writing and thinking, so give it a thumbs up. Of course, there are flaws, and it still grows a bit wildly. It's just too real and lacks foreshadowing. Such as real brotherhood, such as real preferences and mentality. In the framework of such a setting: in those years, those who were not very smart, grew wildly, and lived a youthful and wanton life. It can resonate with me, but it's not comprehensive enough, and I can't say I like it. As it is now, the framework is a bit unclear, the stage goals are unclear, and the emotional value is not enough. You can't take all the benefits, you need brotherhood, rebirth and counterattack, sweet love and ambiguous love, etc. This will weaken the connection between each element. Specific manifestations, for example: brotherhood precedes the career line, but the career line itself is a main line. The heroine is independent of her career, highlighting the beauty of Bai Yueguang and her career in those years. To sum up: the emotions are too real, there are too many things to write about, and there is no focus on their own beauty. My personal suggestion is to sink it down and pull the tension, which represents a helpless copy of dark life, and the protagonist will come to rescue you; lift it up to engage in superiority or strong confrontation, and there will be twists and turns, and you will meet a noble person. For reference only. It is a good work for its utilitarian purpose. There are some flaws, but they do not affect my personal evaluation. It is worth reading and deserves a five-star rating.

This book is really well written, neither pretentious nor slap-in-the-face, humorous, and each character is described with a three-dimensional sense. It is considered a high-quality piece of urban writing. I drive at every turn [laughs] but the progress of starting a business is slow, and the rest is to my liking.

For me, an old bookworm born in the 1980s, this work has a strong youthful atmosphere. The humor without shit all comes from the enthusiasm of youth. The joy of campus life comes from being a teenager without knowing what it is like to be sad. The beauty of first love comes from ignorance, throbbing and caution. The author's writing style is delicate and substantial, and he has a profound literary foundation. As long as the structure of the later story does not collapse, it will definitely get a 9+ rating [Like]

It is really a treasure novel. The title is not very attractive, but the content is very good, and the protagonist's setting is very interesting. [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] It's really beautiful. It's the first time I saw this book. I read it every day.

It's really good, I'm not flattering, the writing is witty and humorous, and the characters' emotions are delicate. The shortcoming is that the pace is a little slow, really just a little bit slow. The pace is too fast and the delicate emotions of the male and female protagonists cannot be written. I really like Hao Dabao, he is so well-shaped! The author's writing style is really interesting, not the kind of people who copy bad memes from the Internet!

I love watching it every day. The feeling of love in early adolescence is very well written. The brotherhood between the Gao Yang brothers and some daily small things that happen in school are all told in a funny way! ! !

It's not easy to write a book, so I give it five stars. But how to put it, first, the main line is not clear, there are too many meaningless storylines; Second, rebirth novels tend to fall into the whining and pretentiousness of literary youth. This article still falls into this vortex. A short length can make people read, but a long one cannot; third, the plot develops too slowly, which has a lot to do with the first two points. I don't dare to guide the author in writing, it's just my personal reading experience. The author is talented, I look forward to the next masterpiece

The literary talent is high and the language is vivid. Whether the protagonist, the supporting role or even the passerby are full of characters, the open-minded optimism when facing the perception of life resonates strongly with people. It is a good book worth reading.

It's so beautiful, I highly recommend it. The author's writing style is smooth and contagious, as if every sentence contains profound thoughts and rich emotions. The article has a rigorous structure and clear logic. Each paragraph serves the theme appropriately, allowing readers to easily follow the author's ideas and deeply appreciate the profound meaning contained in the article.

The literary talent is high and the language is vivid. Whether the protagonist, the supporting role or even the main character is full of characters, the open-minded optimism when facing the perception of life resonates strongly with people. It is a good book worth reading.

The literary talent is brilliant and the language is vivid. Whether the protagonist, the supporting role or even the passerby are full of characters, the open-minded optimism when facing life's insights resonates strongly with people. It is a good book worth reading.

I read the new book as soon as it was released. I was still shocked. Now that I see it, the writing is getting better and better. The world view is huge and the good and evil in it are clear. The good and bad aspects of human nature are written very well. I must give it a five-star rating.

A good book, full of hormonal and youthful atmosphere. The inner world of the characters and plots are like those of us who are young in Deja Vu. The writing is sophisticated and the descriptions are vivid and vivid. It is rare to find a good book. The score is low.

I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night and read this book. Believe me, this book is really good. I was conquered after reading about ten chapters. Although I don't know if it will collapse in the future, it is a really charming book. It has rich content, a humorous plot, and a sweet love story. This book is good and really worth reading.

This is the best novel I have read recently! The plot is full of imagination, the main line is clear, and the branch lines are naturally interspersed without disturbing the overall rhythm. The description of the scene is vivid and lifelike, and the sense of picture comes to your face. The protagonist's growth line is delicately depicted, the transformation along the way is traceable, and the character's arc is full. The writing is smooth and not procrastinating, the foreshadowing is cleverly laid out, and the subsequent plot always brings unexpected surprises. The overall worldview is completely constructed, and the logic is rigorous and flawless. The more I read, the more I get hooked. I can't help but finish it in one go. It's a high-quality work full of sincerity and a strong benefit!

Reading notes After reading Chapter 60, the author's writing style is nothing short of amazing. It's humorous and witty, and the jokes can be picked up at will. It must be given a five-star rating. Some thoughts on later chapters will be written below this comment. At present, I am mainly talking about the interesting stories among classmates in the senior high school campus. The proportion of career is too small, less than 1/10. It is recommended to increase it a little bit. Career and daily life are divided into 73 and 82, so the proportion is more appropriate.

In fact, there are thousands of harem novels on the market, and they fall into three types. The first is a strong shackles in the name of love, the second is an emotional redemption in the name of the heart, and the third is a business game in the name of desire. This book prefers the third type. In fact, no matter which type, it is very difficult to write a good romance in a harem narrative. This book may not be the best harem novel I have ever read, but I can see the author's intention for this book, and I hope the author can write better and better: let all the unrealistic beauty grow reasonable and touching roots.

Seriously, this is the best novel I've ever read. Each character image jumps out on the page, the characters' emotions are very real, the plot connections are very vivid, and the logic is rigorous, as if writing a real history. The details in the article are already very good, after all, no one is perfect.

The plot is full of imagination, the unexpected interaction after rebirth is full of dramatic tension, the rivalry between the male and female protagonists is lively and interesting, and the ambiguous atmosphere is full. As a light comedy-style sweet pet story, it is overall easy to relieve stress, and it is suitable to be read with a meal.

I followed my heart and gave it a 5-star review. I just want to tell the readers, don't just read the comments, but also read the content. The writing is really good. At least I like this style. It is witty and humorous, and has a hint of youth pain literature. It is not tiring to read, and it is a lot of joy. But reading novels is enough to make you happy, right? I don't understand what happened later. Tu Xi was loyal to the male protagonist in her previous life, but she was deceived and scarred all over. The male protagonist didn't even try to make up for it in this life, but simply ignored her. The female protagonist died early in her previous life, but she was saved by the male protagonist in this life. The male protagonist has to have a taste of this, right? Isn't this equivalent to replacing Tu Xi from the previous life with the heroine in this life? Judging from the male protagonist's urinary nature, the story may not change at all. Is the co-author's rebirth just to let the male protagonist catch up on the white moonlight he once had? ================ It's a pity that I turned to the finale directly. As expected, it is a story about a scumbag. Those who love him and those he loves will eventually leave him. In the end, those who play with their feelings will have nothing. Although he slept with many more women in this life than in the previous life, Huang Bei, whom he wanted to keep, and Tu Xi, who wanted to make up for it, eventually parted ways with him. The end of the book is a pity. I don't want to watch the middle plot anymore for fear of pain.

The books I had read before were all boring, but now that I have read this one, both the plot and the characters are very well drawn, and I can't stop reading it. The author writes it very well, and I must give it five stars [heartfelt]

The writing is really good and the descriptions are spot on. The feeling of the emotional line is also very good, and the heroine is very comfortable. This point also runs through the writing and thinking. I will soon see the update. I feel that this novel is very good👍

It's humorous, with delicate descriptions and reasonable plot. It's a novel that you need to read without sleeping. The author who won't laugh after reading it will give you a filial piety.

At the beginning, I was thinking about the setting of the main character being a scumbag ➕scumbag man. How did he become so loyal, literary, naughty, and pure in love when he was reborn on campus? Only later did I realize that everything was scheming. Maybe he was too ruthless in his previous life and felt sorry for Tu Xi. I haven't done anything yet, but other women and brothers are all scheming. The plot, the protagonist understands that from the beginning to the end, he is clearly looking for money and women, calculating his brother's family background and resources to make money, and pursuing a literary youth to create a pure love character. Overall, it is a very good work, and it belongs to a slow trend. Many pure love literary youths in schools are all foreshadowing characters, which is very interesting.