Bring Laughter to the Pokemon World!

The author's battle writing is good, and the daily writing is also very good. It also writes about the characters I voted for. I give it a five-star review. However, there are some shortcomings. I feel like I could write less about the supporting character battles. (Supporting characters do not mean characters submitted by book friends.)

There is a high probability that there will be a heroine 😢, except for the inexplicable interaction with the heroine, everything else is fine 🥺

The author can conquer the mini-Q. Ghost Cicada (electric titanium essence. Wear goggles or balloons). Ichthyosaur. Flashing double axes? There is another attribute that I hope not to conquer too much.

Not bad, waiting for the debut

It's okay, uh, can there be less words in the parentheses of the elf? I prefer the author's side descriptions, because I'm listening to the book, so it feels weird. I don't like Pokémon talking because it's weird. The mythical beasts are okay, but they are just the ones in the anime. I think the author can refer to other books (Super Trainer) and the like, and the elves that the protagonist has just conquered can directly understand what the elves say. It's a bit fast. Can it be changed to a feeling type? No need to describe it in parentheses. Also, if you conquer the mythical beast later, I still recommend that the first-level god can come forward to support it. If you conquer it, then use the mythical beast or the second-level god. The phantom beast or the second-level god will only appear when it is dangerous, which is more refreshing and less tiring. In short, this book is okay. These are just my personal opinions. Some of them are still too early to discuss. The author can ignore them. I still wish the author can write better.

It's quite good. Most people say that the bad point of the plot of meeting the heroine is that it's too radical to just give someone a Pokémon. However, for those with some psychological problems and social fear and introversion, they really need to be more radical. It's really fast to gain trust by giving things, but in normal social situations, this is very strange.

Can the author have a cross-shaped bat with different colors? This is only for macho men. Please 🥺

I feel like the protagonist can't keep up with the version. Can you give him some special abilities? 🤔

So far it's all good, but the author wants every picture to receive a five-star rating, so we readers have no choice but to pamper him.

The author actively listens to readers' opinions and the characters have distinct personalities. No trivial details, the main character has an outstanding personality, and it is a refreshing style of writing. With a female protagonist (probably), the transition is better I'm generally satisfied, but personally I don't like the sudden insertion of characters added by readers midway. So there are fewer branches (´▽`)ノ♪ But the transition of the heroine in Chapter 21 is a bit strange. But the little author is changing it