Beyond the Sky Is the Wilderness

The plot is pretty good and quite innovative. Even though the dialogue is a bit awkward, it may also be the author's problem. Hope to improve it.

The story is about a time traveler leading a group of primitive people to fight against nature. The subject matter is novel, the description is in line with the changes in human nature, and the writing is simple and unpretentious. The story is coherent and not brainless, and it is interesting. It fully embodies the aura of the protagonist in ancient Chinese civilization and is worth reading.

It's a different kind of fun, after all, this seemingly slow-burning novel is not in line with Tomato's taste. This kind of thing makes you feel better the more you look at it. There is no need for the system to give two golden fingers, and there is no need to wonder whether there is any conspiracy behind the system. The author also wrote his own opinions. The description of Taiqing and Nuwa also has different ideas from most authors, but it is also reasonable and in line with their interests.

First of all, this is the prehistoric era, and it is the prehistoric era of the Lich. There are innate auras and "spiritual beasts" everywhere. The purpose of blood refining, leather refining and body refining is to exercise the body and eliminate impurities. But at this time, the human race will all be "holy bodies and Taoist fetuses" in later generations. At this time, the human race breathes innate spiritual energy, eats "spiritual beasts", and drinks "spiritual springs". They are all little supermen. The saying that the human race is "weak" is compared to the demon race and other races. In the world of immortal cultivation in later generations, that is the power of body refining. Secondly, it is not appropriate to bring out the qi training practices in the world of immortality. Later generations practiced qi because they were "poor". How poor is it? That is, only the acquired spiritual energy is left and is not pure yet, so it needs to be refined and absorbed. The protagonist travels through a time when the Six Saints have emerged. It can be seen from the cultivation methods of immortals and below that Taiqing Laozi has already patronized the human race!

If it was prehistoric, there would be no merit in creating so many things?

Very well written, the rise of the little guy You have to go from low martial arts to prehistoric times and then turn into the mortal combat mode. I suggest you stop training light armored cavalry and heavy armored cavalry. Instead, go directly to the physical transcendence artifact Namo Gatling Bodhisattva that emits blue fire [laughing awkwardly]. Come to the divine martial arts cannon, which is definitely a hundred times better than practicing armored charge.

The author continues to write, after eating and drinking enough, refilling the coffee and tea, finishing squatting in the toilet, washing his face, and then continues writing. Some need to check the information before writing to avoid making common sense mistakes. Writing in this way is also a rigorous writing attitude.

Very nice and well written. Come on.

Come on, work hard to code

My opinion is that there are too many acquired spiritual treasures and they are too easy to refine. Also, Taiqing is great at refining elixirs, but can't match Yuanshi in refining weapons. Only Yuanshi, who is so good at refining weapons, can only use the Heaven-shaking Seal to obtain the acquired treasure. So don't think that Houtian Lingbao is not awesome. You can refine the best acquired flexibility at every turn. Didn't you see, Dayu controlled the water and refined a Houtian Lingbao Celestial Rod to measure the sea water. With some merit in water control, Sun Wukong would regard it as a treasure. The acquired spiritual treasure just lacks a little bit of immortal spiritual light. Those that are not visible are worse than the innate spiritual treasures, let alone the acquired supreme treasures and acquired treasures. If it were so easy to refine the acquired treasures and treasures of the day after tomorrow, look at the real Huanglong, no matter how unpopular he is, he should still have a few spiritual treasures. A saint would be too embarrassed to take action if he was not at the highest level.

So far good. Hope it can be maintained.

The author writes well! However, there are some small places that go a step further! For example, this paragraph says, "The hunting team will get one-third of the remaining blood essence of the monsters, the escort team will also get one-third, and the last one-third will be distributed by you, the rich man." Can it be written like this! Chen Xiaoan stretched out his hands! Pushing out with his left hand, he pushed away part of the pottery jar containing the goblin blood and said: "This part is for the hunting team." After saying this, he couldn't wait to use his right hand to push away another part of the pottery pot for the blood essence and said: "This part is for the guards." After saying this again, he withdrew his hands at this time, looked at the old man of the rich family and said: "The rest will be distributed by the old man of the big family."

Mark five stars first, and then worship Tongtian as your teacher. This novel will reach the end. Three stars. I think Nuwa takes the protagonist as a boy, and then Taiqing takes the protagonist as a disciple. This novel has nothing to see at this point. I think the previous part is okay.

The background of the ancient story. Now. Qi training period. How long should it be? The update speed is so slow. How to chase?

It's worth watching. It's gradual in the early stage and a bit trivial in the middle stage. It gets better and better later on [Like]

The explanation is reasonable, because the demon tribe gave the human race a bloody wound. It seems that the Nuwa Empress did not care about the human race, but the demon tribe was destroyed. A tribe with a saint behind it would not perish without the tacit approval of this saint!

Not bad, not bad. Incredible understanding. You need to have a heaven-defying understanding. Feel. I have seen many golden fingers that defy the heavenly understanding. But they are all in sheep's clothing. Host Ding understood the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms. Bite! The host has realized the prison-suppressing power of the statue, haha

This kind of article is unsurprisingly good. It mainly focuses on the truth. There is no system for all time travellers. It does not pretend to be a slap in the face. It is not about escaping. There is always a variable in Honghuang articles recently. It is about escaping after traveling through the prehistoric times. I am also convinced. Writing novels is great, but many people who are used to pretentious writing will give negative reviews when reading this kind of novel.

The early stage is very good, so I'll look forward to the middle and later stages.

The writing is not bad, especially the recent ships sailing in the chaotic universe, but they treat other worlds with too little distinction between good and evil. Although they dislike the Holy Mother and like to kill decisively, they kill and plunder without logic, not to mention karma! It would be better if Huirou made more friends. Deduct one star! It's a personal preference, but it doesn't affect the quality of the book, and it's still worth reading. The rest is too procrastinating. Fighting monsters and collecting resources is the same as the beginning of other fantasy novels. The difference is that the name of the realm is different. In other books, it is called a first-order monster, but this one is called the Dao Realm, and the Wonton Beast of the Heavenly Dao Realm. Extremely boring

It would be too easy for the human race to break through. If things continue like this, in five thousand years the human race will have hundreds of millions of golden immortals, tens of millions of Taiyi golden immortals, millions of Da Luo golden immortals, and tens of thousands of quasi-sages, and they will be able to defeat the two Lich clans directly [snickering] [smirking] [what]

The author is awesome. He writes so well. Keep up the hard work and update soon.

I hope the protagonist's character can be changed. I feel like the protagonist is too self-righteous and a bit hypocritical. (Just personal thoughts)

It's well written. I think the plot and combat power in Honghuang are reasonable. Although there are some minor distractions, it's not a big problem. Please update it as soon as possible. It's not enough.

Recommended, well written, please encourage me

Very well written [Like] [Like] [Like] But the update is too slow

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It's pretty good, worth reading, but there's a bit of accounting behind it.

It's good-looking. The author has finished his sermon. Remember to come back and update. Let me make a wish. After my sermon, I will arrange a time-travel trip. I'll give you a plug-in.

The writing is good. He knows how to use his knowledge and experience to develop his strength. He is not very rigid.