Beyond the Sky Screen Lies the Primordial World

The plot is pretty good and quite innovative. Even though the dialogue is a bit awkward, it may also be the author's problem. Hope to improve it.

The story is about a time traveler leading a group of primitive people to fight against nature. The subject matter is novel, the description is in line with the changes in human nature, and the writing is simple and unpretentious. The story is coherent and not brainless, and it is interesting. It fully embodies the aura of the protagonist in ancient Chinese civilization and is worth reading.

It's a different kind of fun, after all, this seemingly slow-burning novel is not in line with Tomato's taste. This kind of thing makes you feel better the more you look at it. There is no need for the system to give two golden fingers, and there is no need to wonder whether there is any conspiracy behind the system. The author also wrote his own opinions. The description of Taiqing and Nuwa also has different ideas from most authors, but it is also reasonable and in line with their interests.

First of all, this is the prehistoric era, and it is the prehistoric era of the Lich. There are innate auras and "spiritual beasts" everywhere. The purpose of blood refining, leather refining and body refining is to exercise the body and eliminate impurities. But at this time, the human race will all be "holy bodies and Taoist fetuses" in later generations. At this time, the human race breathes innate spiritual energy, eats "spiritual beasts", and drinks "spiritual springs". They are all little supermen. The saying that the human race is "weak" is compared to the demon race and other races. In the world of immortal cultivation in later generations, that is the power of body refining. Secondly, it is not appropriate to bring out the qi training practices in the world of immortality. Later generations practiced qi because they were "poor". How poor is it? That is, only the acquired spiritual energy is left and is not pure yet, so it needs to be refined and absorbed. The protagonist travels through a time when the Six Saints have emerged. It can be seen from the cultivation methods of immortals and below that Taiqing Laozi has already patronized the human race!

If it was prehistoric, there would be no merit in creating so many things?

Very well written, the rise of the little guy You have to go from low martial arts to prehistoric times and then turn into the mortal combat mode. I suggest you stop training light armored cavalry and heavy armored cavalry. Instead, go directly to the physical transcendence artifact Namo Gatling Bodhisattva that emits blue fire 😅. Come to the divine martial arts cannon, which is definitely a hundred times better than practicing armored charge.

My opinion is that there are too many acquired spiritual treasures and they are too easy to refine. Also, Taiqing is great at refining elixirs, but can't match Yuanshi in refining weapons. Only Yuanshi, who is so good at refining weapons, can only use the Heaven-shaking Seal to obtain the acquired treasure. So don't think that Houtian Lingbao is not awesome. You can refine the best acquired flexibility at every turn. Didn't you see, Dayu controlled the water and refined a Houtian Lingbao Celestial Rod to measure the sea water. With some merit in water control, Sun Wukong would regard it as a treasure. The acquired spiritual treasure just lacks a little bit of immortal spiritual light. Those that are not visible are worse than the innate spiritual treasures, let alone the acquired supreme treasures and acquired treasures. If it were so easy to refine the acquired treasures and treasures of the day after tomorrow, look at the real Huanglong, no matter how unpopular he is, he should still have a few spiritual treasures. A saint would be too embarrassed to take action if he was not at the highest level.

The author continues to write, after eating and drinking enough, refilling the coffee and tea, finishing squatting in the toilet, washing his face, and then continues writing. Some need to check the information before writing to avoid making common sense mistakes. Writing in this way is also a rigorous writing attitude.

Very nice and well written. Come on.

Come on, work hard to code