My Childhood Friend’s Private Romance

When I first started reading the first few chapters, I felt that many things were a bit messy and some places were a little awkward, especially around the third chapter. (Feeling of self). The back part is quite interesting. The author may have found a feeling for it. The writing and plot are okay. It's a standard sweet story. There's a knife hidden in the back, but it's still very touching. Come on💪 It suits my taste quite well, the rise of sticky little lovers.

I hope you can work hard

It's a sweet article. You can continue to read it and give me some suggestions. Thank you.