My Tiger-Eared Friend

After reading ten chapters, my current feeling is that the story setting is quite good, but the wording is too complicated. A long and complicated and irrelevant interlude suddenly appears during the writing (giving people the feeling of trying to make up the word count), and the content is described a lot, all of which are emphasized repeatedly. In fact, if you remove these messy descriptions, the writing is still quite good, and it feels like you have used too much force (no malicious intent, just my personal opinion, and I apologize if it offended me).

The most explosive boss! ! ! I have been following the boss for a long time, and four chapters in one day are amazing. I am looking forward to the relationship between the two male protagonists. When will Xiao Ye become a human? The flowers of waiting for their relationship have dried up [crying]. .

I can only say that the writing style is very good and can be used to write traditional literary novels, but it is not suitable for online novels. The plot is too busy, there are too many descriptions of various psychological environments, and the piling of words is too obvious. In fact, the expression of Internet language is short and fast, but the atmosphere can be expressed very well! In short, I still have to praise the author. He is very creative and his writing is very good. He is slowly exploring the style of online novels. Come on!

Author: Will that old Xiao become a human?

It looks good. I hope the relationship between the two of them will develop later hehe.

Come on, the author [sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's super nice. Thank you for the author's support. I just found out that the cover has been changed [laughs] Finished "Spreading Flowers" [Grass Has Been Planted], this article has two perspectives, I thought it was Xiao Yeshou, but I didn't expect that the two authors wrote it from each perspective once, which made me confused [grievance], but from the beginning to the end, it was not easy to see Xiao Ye and Zhao Che, it is really great [Sparrow Food Masterpiece], and finally I wish our tiger and his wife [smirk] to stay together day and night [admiration]

Like, praise, praise, praise

Okay, okay, looks good

It's pretty good, but it's too literary, hahaha

I like it, but I don't know how to evaluate it. But it's true that it's well written. I recommend you to watch [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

There is a feeling of prose [send heart]

Good, good, deep in my heart

The story setting is very good and looks good

How do you describe this feeling? It feels a bit like converting anime into text

It can be that the writing is a bit gorgeous, but the author also likes to be abstract occasionally [face covering]

It's very well written. I won't be too impatient until I raise another piece.

The plot is very compact and the author's writing is very good. It looks good so far. By the way, the author really likes to use exclamation points [face covering]

It's really good. Author, your writing makes my body feel warm.

Such a good-looking article shouldn't be read by only a few people. This book is a really good book. The plot line is special, and it's like one link after another. It's super good and recommended.

The unique writing angle and compact plot will attract people from the beginning. Come on!

It's pretty cool, but it would be nice if there were pictures.

Good, good, good, good

It smells like a forest book [laughs evilly]

Hehe, I'm the only one who thinks the extra is good [laughs]

It's very interesting. Can there be more interactions between the two of them in the future?

It's nice to read, and the author's writing is very good.

It's so beautiful, especially the extra episode, I just like [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

It's very nice and warm, the writing is very good, and the embellishments are very nice.

Come on, come on, update quickly [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]