After the Villain Awakened, the Heroines All Turned to Me

Is there something missing, some underground ruins? The front and back are too torn, it doesn't look like the same book

Let me reply in unison: "This is the first book I wrote a long time ago. Some conflicts between determination and logic are unavoidable (hair color, names, etc.), For example, the plot of the underground ruins is missing (I really can't find it) The previous record, this part is missing in the archived manuscript), so it is not surprising that there is a sense of fragmentation there, the archived manuscript is a bit smaller, so I will not modify the logic and plot, everyone just put their minds aside and make do with it! The book mainly focuses on the description of emotions (you can understand everything about boys and girls). Of course, this book will not be unfinished. It will be about one million words long! ". Currently preparing a new book...૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

I finished reading it all in 3 hours. It was very interesting. The author made the psychological ins and outs of the protagonist group very clear. It was very comfortable for people like me who like to study in detail. The only drawback is that the previous and following plots are not a book at all. The author said that it was written a long time ago, so there are logical problems. Although this is no longer a logical problem, I can barely forgive it because the writing is good. So as long as you can get through the poisonous spots in the front, the back will look great. My suggestion is to skip the previous part of the plot and watch the rest directly, which will make the experience much better. Just think of the previous plot as a very old-fashioned hero, which is self-salvation plus hero saving beauty. And many patches for the system were applied later. Does not affect the look and feel. [Shy][shy][shy][shy]

This book is the one that broke my drought of tomato novels. The personal descriptions and demeanor of the characters made me feel that what I was reading was not a novel, but a living person, and these things happened in front of my eyes, which touched my heart again and again. Especially the description of the girl who was rescued in the dark place, how she was afraid to accept all the benefits from others, was so aptly described, and it firmly captured my heart. In one sentence, it's really awesome. I haven't read the rest yet, but it's so good that I couldn't help but review it first. You must write more, don't write so little, it's not enough for me to read, please, I can do anything. The author is awesome and realistic. I didn't dare to read further. It was so well written that I was afraid that I would feel uncomfortable if I didn't read it.

Just finished reading the second volume. First of all, the plot is pretty good, but as the author said at the beginning, it is indeed inconsistent in many places, making some places look particularly awkward. I hope this can be corrected. Secondly, the character of Ash turned dark too quickly. He turned dark just because he didn't "save" the Saint. Although he should be very angry when he was cut off, and his character is also very unwilling to accept failure, but this matter should be like a branch line for him. He does not have to be "saved" before he can take the next step. After all, this "rescue" is just a one-time thing for him. It's just a play, and it's not impossible to do it in other ways. Logically speaking, this matter is not important enough for him to directly turn dark, but he broke the defense and gave harsh words to the protagonist. As far as those words are concerned, it feels like he has completely turned dark. It is not just as simple as planting the seeds of darkening. It looks very strange here. If the author sees it, I hope he can answer his doubts [eat melon].

In fact, overall, this book has a good look and feel. I still have high expectations for this book. Generally speaking, the character creation is very good. The only flaw is that it feels a little fragmented. After all, the author also said that it was a previously written manuscript, but the emotional changes of the heroine Claire after the first volume were a bit too great. The redemption of the male protagonist in the first volume should not cause her to still maintain great hostility in the third volume, and there are some conflicts in the emotional separation. Overall, this is a good novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Yes, the protagonist's personality and handling style are more in line with my taste. Maybe the author's outline is a little too much, which leads to a slight change in the emotional lines of the characters in the previous and later chapters. However, the author's broad scenery, characters and psychological descriptions still made my eyes shine. I hope that the author can go further in this work and pay attention to the people and things in his life. After all, writing so many chapters in a day is boring, hard and takes up time. All I can say is go for it. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)＼(`Δ')／

@ Rat The main problem now is that it's too confusing. The two are completely inconsistent and mixed together. I don't even know which line and character should be substituted. I hope I can modify it when I have time. It's too "difficult" to look at now. But the novel is really interesting, I hope to continue updating it

Classic, very classic, the routines are very old-fashioned, but the author's writing style is relatively literary, and I can read it. The protagonist's character is very suitable for my taste, and the heroine's character is also very good. The plot is a classic, but the reason why the classic is a classic is that his upper and lower limits are very large. The plot is really nothing new, but if you can write a story well, it is excellent.

It has a retro feel, which makes it a bit embarrassing [palms face], but I can still watch it. . .

It's a classic. If the author fills in the missing chapters or changes it later, the rating will go up [Like]

It feels very good to me. It has a faint sense of redemption without nrt.

Five stars, the article is well written. If I were the male protagonist, Claire's ending would definitely not be like that in the ending. With such humiliation, such disregard, and such condescension, I would let her fall completely into the mud at the end, rotting and stinking in endless humiliation and regret, instead of forgetting everything and continuing to welcome her, even if she returns and falls in love with the male protagonist. The above is just my personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it. Of course, writing a book is not real life. Everyone has different ideas, so I can only understand. I hope the author's next book will be more exciting.

There are some problems with the writing style in the last few chapters. Too many short sentences are used and the sentences are a bit greasy. Also, the character of the witch Lillian is too dissolute. Even if it can be corrected to a superficial dissipation, it will affect the perception. The rest can be said to be quite good.

Good looking It's a typical hero-saving-American-style whitewashing, but the author's handling is very delicate, and different girls are very distinguishable.

The author's writing is very good. Only in the first few chapters where the male protagonist has just traveled through the past and is looked down upon is a bit frustrating to read. But after reading the first few chapters, it is all about fine food [Like]

I admit it, I just like this kind of pretentious and dark plot, it's so good and I love watching it

Very good, very good, very good, very good, very good, so let me take a look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look, look.

Awesome, invincible second chapter, I was so happy to read it. Except for the plot, which is a bit awkward, everything else is invincible. The character portrayal, scene preparation, and hook are just right. The author also adds a super golden sentence from time to time. I just want to say one word: cool! The protagonist is handsome and can be said to be one of me.

To be honest, the content is indeed excellent among the many books I have read, and the character creation is also very good. As for many people saying it is too awkward, I can only say that it is a matter of opinion. The author's writing style is very consistent with the style of Western fantasy novels. It is very gorgeous and exaggerated. In short, this is a very good novel. It seems that the only shortcoming so far is that Ash doesn't know why he got a family inheritance.

It's very good. If there is some conflict with the previous setting, the author said it should be him. For a long time, they still said that the saved manuscript was lost, causing the account to be unable to be reconciled. It's a pity, but overall the character descriptions are very good.

In line with the characteristics of Western fantasy novels, the emotional description is very delicate, and some plots are relatively clichéd, but they are useful. I feel that the main reason for the low rating is that the wording is a bit too much. I'm really convinced. No wonder the description is so detailed and the score is so low. It's almost painful to read chapter 60. This sense of fragmentation...

Judging from the introduction, the witch is also the heroine. Maybe I'm a little more sensitive, but the last few chapters, emmm, the rest are really good.

One thing to say, the emotional and psychological descriptions of the male and female protagonists are really great, and the psychological description of the saint is really unbeatable. However, some parts of the plot feel fragmented (for example, the heroine's best friend later became a housekeeper, the original protagonist suddenly changed from a commoner family to an aristocratic family, and there seems to be a missing plot of some ruins in the middle). It looks like AI helped write part of it, but if you ignore this part, it is still quite enjoyable.

It's great. It's the best western fantasy theme I've seen in the past two years. It's very innovative.

Super beautiful, not brainless, sincere emotions, not a saint

I quite like it. The plot is indeed a bit fragmented and there is no foreshadowing between scenes. If you don't care about this, it's okay. In addition, the writing style needs to be changed. The text can be retro and close to Western fantasy, but the problem is that there are too many useless embellishments. It is recommended that there be some highlight moments, not too many ordinary words, and it is better to promote the main line.

The logic is rigorous and the details are well handled. Keep up the good work, the author. Is there any discrepancy in the content between the first part and the second part?

It's pretty good to watch, but the plot is a little confusing using AI, but it's manageable. This system is a bit useless.

The writing style is indeed ahead of its time on Tomato. Apart from the plot being a bit fragmented, there are basically no poisonous points.