After the Villain Awakens, All the Heroines Take My Side

Let me reply in unison: "This is the first book I wrote a long time ago. Some conflicts between determination and logic are unavoidable (hair color, names, etc.), For example, the plot of the underground ruins is missing (I really can't find it) The previous record, this part is missing in the archived manuscript), so it is not surprising that there is a sense of fragmentation there, the archived manuscript is a bit smaller, so I will not modify the logic and plot, everyone just put their minds aside and make do with it! The book mainly focuses on the description of emotions (you can understand everything about boys and girls). Of course, this book will not be unfinished. It will be about one million words long! ". Currently preparing a new book...૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

Is there something missing, some underground ruins? The front and back are too torn, it doesn't look like the same book

I finished reading it all in 3 hours. It was very interesting. The author made the psychological ins and outs of the protagonist group very clear. It was very comfortable for people like me who like to study in detail. The only drawback is that the previous and following plots are not a book at all. The author said that it was written a long time ago, so there are logical problems. Although this is no longer a logical problem, I can barely forgive it because the writing is good. So as long as you can get through the poisonous spots in the front, the back will look great. My suggestion is to skip the previous part of the plot and watch the rest directly, which will make the experience much better. Just think of the previous plot as a very old-fashioned hero, which is self-salvation plus hero saving beauty. And many patches for the system were applied later. Does not affect the look and feel. 😳😳😳😳

This book is the one that broke my drought of tomato novels. The personal descriptions and demeanor of the characters made me feel that what I was reading was not a novel, but a living person, and these things happened in front of my eyes, which touched my heart again and again. Especially the description of the girl who was rescued in the dark place, how she was afraid to accept all the benefits from others, was so aptly described, and it firmly captured my heart. In one sentence, it's really awesome. I haven't read the rest yet, but it's so good that I couldn't help but review it first. You must write more, don't write so little, it's not enough for me to read, please, I can do anything. The author is awesome and realistic. I didn't dare to read further. It was so well written that I was afraid that I would feel uncomfortable if I didn't read it.

Just finished reading the second volume. First of all, the plot is pretty good, but as the author said at the beginning, it is indeed inconsistent in many places, making some places look particularly awkward. I hope this can be corrected. Secondly, the character of Ash turned dark too quickly. He turned dark just because he didn't "save" the Saint. Although he should be very angry when he was cut off, and his character is also very unwilling to accept failure, but this matter should be like a branch line for him. He does not have to be "saved" before he can take the next step. After all, this "rescue" is just a one-time thing for him. It's just a play, and it's not impossible to do it in other ways. Logically speaking, this matter is not important enough for him to directly turn dark, but he broke the defense and gave harsh words to the protagonist. As far as those words are concerned, it feels like he has completely turned dark. It is not just as simple as planting the seeds of darkening. It looks very strange here. If the author sees it, I hope he can answer his doubts 🍉.

Yes, the protagonist's personality and handling style are more in line with my taste. Maybe the author's outline is a little too much, which leads to a slight change in the emotional lines of the characters in the previous and later chapters. However, the author's broad scenery, characters and psychological descriptions still made my eyes shine. I hope that the author can go further in this work and pay attention to the people and things in his life. After all, writing so many chapters in a day is boring, hard and takes up time. All I can say is go for it. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)\(`Δ')/

Classic, very classic, the routines are very old-fashioned, but the author's writing style is relatively literary, and I can read it. The protagonist's character is very suitable for my taste, and the heroine's character is also very good. The plot is a classic, but the reason why the classic is a classic is that his upper and lower limits are very large. The plot is really nothing new, but if you can write a story well, it is excellent.

In fact, overall, this book has a good look and feel. I still have high expectations for this book. Generally speaking, the character creation is very good. The only flaw is that it feels a little fragmented. After all, the author also said that it was a previously written manuscript, but the emotional changes of the heroine Claire after the first volume were a bit too great. The redemption of the male protagonist in the first volume should not cause her to still maintain great hostility in the third volume, and there are some conflicts in the emotional separation. Overall, this is a good novel. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

@ Rat The main problem now is that it's too confusing. The two are completely inconsistent and mixed together. I don't even know which line and character should be substituted. I hope I can modify it when I have time. It's too "difficult" to look at now. But the novel is really interesting, I hope to continue updating it

It has a retro feel, which makes it a bit embarrassing [palms face], but I can still watch it. . .