Unable to Escape from the Hands of the Reborn Beauties

It looks good. The male protagonist is weak compared to other harems, which are all reborn. The author clearly wrote in the title introduction why there are so many people jumping on it. Isn't it just to see the feeling of the little spoiled man and the domineering female president?

The male protagonist himself is quite funny. Compared to other novels, I think the most unique thing is the lively atmosphere in the sect. The male protagonist has friends from the same sect who come to comfort him when he drinks, and there are dozens of brothers who are beaten for standing up for the male protagonist. These detailed designs make people feel that the relationship between the male protagonist and other senior brothers is very warm.

The subject matter is good, the content is good, the male protagonist has a distinct personality, has advantages and disadvantages, and has an obvious growth trajectory. The small characters like Lin Sheng and Ganba are flesh and blood, but the plot development is a bit stomach-ache. The author's constant attempts in writing style have made the perception very diverse. Generally speaking, the flaws are not concealed, you can take a look

There is a plot and logic. The protagonist is indeed not strong in the early stage, but it is very logical. Otherwise, what do you want to see? Brainless cool novel and brainless romance? Then you can leave after seeing this message from me. This book is indeed a good book. This book definitely shouldn't be rated 6.6, It's much better than many books on my bookshelf. But the author's strength... Is a problem. Rather, the solutions in many chapters are rather unfamiliar and annoying to watch. But luckily, as long as the story is clear, it's fine. Anyway, Tomato is a place where you can read novels for free. No matter how long and difficult sentences or difficult-to-handle memories are, you can read them for free, so I don't ask for anything more. Finally, author, you must update to the end and never stop updating. You are one of the few articles on this platform that I can read with more than 100 chapters——

It's pretty good, with foreshadowing, comedy, shaping, and clear characters, but it's just not enough to watch. Of course, everyone has their own ambitions.

It's a good book, but it's not suitable for Tomato because it's not mindless. There are still many people who like to have fun without thinking. No matter how stupid the system is, it can still get high scores. I hope that the author will not be affected by short-term ratings. Over time, the scores will be improved.

As long as it is unsystematic, I have to take a high look at it.

It's great. I just finished watching the mine chapter. The characters are very well drawn, not the usual type of chasing a husband. Among them, there is a big difference in realm. Especially the protagonist, who is practicing Qi in the mine and building foundations on the seventh and eighth levels, was unexpectedly able to see burning. In the mine chapter, the character of the protagonist is brought up and the portrayal is very good. Then the author keeps giving long and difficult sentences, and it's hard to understand every time you have to read them one by one. The various small foreshadowings are very good and not too abrupt, and they don't directly give you clues. And now the heroine seems to be basically invincible, she just needs to be able to make a comeback with various secret techniques. What can I say? This book is a slow-burner, but it is definitely not the kind of book that just eats a small cake at night and just loses a chapter. From the current point of view, every chapter is basically meaningful. And the memories are only interspersed chapter by chapter, and now there are no dozens of chapters inserted as tough as the forced cutting software with shake. How can I put it, Hoseisu, the protagonist's transformation from world-weary to unwilling to admit defeat is very good, at least the mine chapter is about 1500 pages long. It feels very immersive. It should be the beginning of the change in the protagonist's personality. Forget it, I felt weird when I saw the later part, especially the dream of Hongchen. I thought it was the result of a previous life or a dream, and then the author kept inserting a lot of unfinished dialogue, which was very annoying, especially the kind of book that has a high probability of being incomprehensible. For example, how come 114 suddenly knows everything and then knows nothing at all. Then the senior sister directly wanted to give birth to an heir with the protagonist, but I didn't expect it. My impression was originally not good. There was nothing about her in the previous plot. It was too abrupt. Then after the protagonist came out of the mine, his personality changed back to the stupid look before, which was a bit uncomfortable. He had a bad impression of the senior sister and it was a bit difficult for the protagonist to stick to her again. Oh no, I can't stand it anymore. Although I haven't broken my guard, why should I give it to my senior sister? After thinking about it, I thought about Shangguan's childhood sweethearts, the witch's best friend, and Bai Xin, who shared life and death together. I don't feel anything about this senior sister. The article also mentions that a sword was given to me after thousands of years, and it was mentioned that the protagonist is Bai Yueguang. I feel that I am still estranged. I don't know why I am being tsundere, but I stabbed myself to death. The protagonist pushed the other three harems away again and again and wanted to eat secretly. It felt very selfish. I felt that in the previous life, the protagonist was invincible under the immortals and admired the protagonist. Marrying the senior sister was just a matter of Bai Yueguangjia doing some trivial things. I felt like being with the senior sister was being favored. I can only say that I feel unworthy. Still a long and difficult sentence [Petrochemical] I have finally read the final chapter, and I can read it. What can I say about this book? The opening chapter is actually not very good until you get to the mine, because there are a lot of foreshadowings, and the protagonist is not good. Most people may leave after reading it twice. Then the part from the mine to the meeting of Bai Xin is not bad, but after the dream of the mortal world, it is not very good. Maybe it is a subjective reason that the senior sister has more scenes. But the mine chapter is really good to watch. The changes in the characters and the lowering of everyone's realm make it seem that the protagonist will be stronger. However, it is difficult for the protagonist to be stupid later. I support Qian Yue to become bigger. Bai Xin is also okay. Bai Xin is a bit pitiful. I guess there won't be much drama in the future.

It's quite interesting, but I'm just curious as to why the eldest sister backstabbed the male protagonist in her previous life? At present, if the disaster had not come early, the senior sister would probably not have had direct contact with the male protagonist in this life (she would have only silently protected him from behind)

In this era where most online articles are fast-paced, it really makes me happy to see such slow-paced and beautiful novels on Tomato. Although the author is a novice, his writing style is not unfamiliar. I have written novels myself for a while, so I know what this means. For a novice to have such writing style, it means that the author must have put more effort into writing than others, and needs to spend more time thinking about each word and constantly improving it. Because a new author who writes at a slow pace must do his best to present works that satisfy himself and even the readers. Let's briefly talk about the content of the novel. The male protagonist was a bit useless in the early stage and was abused everywhere, so that some readers were dissatisfied with it. But you have to know that this is a slow-paced fairy tale, that is, a growth flow. A refreshing novel is good, but witnessing the protagonist's growth process through various hardships and becoming stronger is the essence of slow pace. Compared with a refreshing novel that starts with genius or invincibility, it is more worthy of careful consideration. Let's talk about the story line again. This book is a story of growth and immortality that combines love and passion. Love and immortality are equally mixed. It is rare in Tomato that a fairy tale is not mainly about love. However, there is also a lot of interaction between the male and female protagonists, which also satisfies the preferences of readers. There are also some readers who feel that the character Qian'er was created in the early stages of the novel. I can only say that you didn't understand. Let me briefly summarize, Qian'er is dissatisfied because the male protagonist doesn't care about her, so she deliberately neglects the male protagonist and talks happily with others. The purpose is just to make the male protagonist feel uncomfortable and then care about her. However, the so-called "poisonous point" is less than a hundred or two hundred words, just to make Qian'er's character image more full, and there is no poisonous point. There are also some other plots where the male protagonist is abused, which is really normal. After all, he has not grown up yet, and he is not actually abused much. In short, although it is a new book, each character is fully and successfully created, the storyline is not too romantic, and the protagonist's step-by-step growth and passion are shown, and the plot is delicate and non-toxic. I hope readers will support this book and encourage the author. I also ask readers to be merciful and read slowly if you don't understand, because the author has worked very hard (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧

The nameless fire is full

It feels good, but the comments in the book are not very friendly. Some people feel that they are just for the sake of criticizing. It feels that most people come here to read the interesting articles. The author wants to enrich the connotation and add some storyline, but he is criticized for the word count. For example, when the protagonist and the senior sister pass each other again and again and finally meet, not many people feel this strong sense of fate. Instead, they think it is the word count. It feels quite good. Sadly, the author wants to give this work a better emotional foreshadowing, but there are always some inexplicable doubts. Nowadays, Tomato's works are more accepted than the brainless and refreshing articles. Of course, it may also be that the name of this work is a bit confusing. It sounds like a brainless and refreshing article, which mistakenly attracts some readers who are not suitable for this type of reading. Now it has low ratings, which is quite regrettable [I'm about to cry]

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It's fun to watch [laughs] The catastrophe is actually an alien plane trying to devour the original plane, deliberately leading the war, using life and blood to weaken the restrictions of heaven's rules. The three land gods who appeared in the previous life, Beidi, Baipao and Styx, all have this purpose. The male protagonist arrived in another world in his last life, and really grasped the possibility of solving the disaster, so he was targeted by the BOSS, who marked him when he launched the time regression, and also had three layers of insurance [face covering] The first level is a blow that will definitely fall on the male protagonist's head, the second level makes it impossible for the male protagonist to break through the land immortals, and the third level is more sinister, allowing the male protagonist to learn to think that it is a hangover and become empty. If the male protagonist really grows up, he will become a knife from an alien plane [face covering] The author will update a hundred chapters quickly. I know this is difficult, but this is an order.

What a good book, the main plot is clear, and the daily life is good to read. The male protagonist speaks like a light novel. Although his growth experience is not that of invincibility or opportunity, it is still okay (although I feel that there is no good foundation for physical invincibility. He said that physical training is not enough but he still practiced it). The female protagonist is likeable, and the overall plot is also good. I said it is a treasure.

It's a bit interesting. I really haven't seen many books on this kind of routine in recent years. The writing is really smooth and quite acceptable.

I like the subject matter very much. I hope I can keep updating it. The books I read before were all dead halfway. I hope the author can stick to it [crying] [crying] [crying]

The brave man is angry and draws his blade against the stronger one. The weak are angry, but they draw their swords at the weaker. There is nothing wrong with the design of the character Yin Xiaofeng, but I hope the author will not whitewash her in the end. After a little review, the description of the protagonist is really not very good. Not much strengthening, but always on the road to failure. Maybe the author has a long plan, but I really don't have the patience.

It's good to read. I've read dozens of chapters. The author's writing is good, but some of the plots are a bit unfamiliar. Others are fine. Also, the protagonist is not weak. The other female characters are all reborn. They practice Qi to fight the Shenshen Game at the beginning. The protagonist is not the protagonist of the system golden finger style. How can he beat him with only physical training talent? [Facepalm] One of the few hopes I have for this book is that the author can keep it from being a bad book.

It looks good, and the author's writing style is very good. I don't know why this book has a low rating. Maybe it's because harem novels are not popular nowadays. Most people like to read fan fiction, or infinite streaming, but this does not prevent this book from being a good book. It's just a pity that there are only about 100 chapters updated now, which is a bit insufficient. Author, you'd better give me three updates a day [smile] (just kidding:-D) I just read some other book reviews, and overall some of them were rated low because they were short in reading time. I turned to a book review and it said that some people like to read purely refreshing novels. It suddenly occurred to me that it is indeed possible. Some of the people who read harem novels must come for the enjoyment and don't like complicated plots. However, the protagonist of this book is not Long Aotian, and the combat power setting does not feel broken. The protagonist is very strong in this worldview where human races are not suitable for physical training. I didn't say how powerful the spell is. There is a seven-stage period of Qi refining in the middle to build the foundation. It is generally recognized in fairy tales that the gap between realms is not that big when the cultivation level is low. The gap between realms becomes larger as you go later, so the protagonist is only invincible at the same realm, and the protagonist is a development type, not particularly strong at the beginning. If you don't like this, I can only say that it is not suitable for reading. (If you make a mistake, you can scold me, but please explain where the mistake is. I will change it, but the point of view will not)

Please give the author five stars and encourage him to update faster.

Just write like this, don't use those formulaic articles, have your own style

It's an unexpected work. There aren't many updates at the moment. The foreshadowing is quite interesting. The characters are relatively three-dimensional and not all the same. I'll give it five stars first and see what happens next. The fighting scene in Chapter 46 was so funny [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying], I recommend reading it, I don't think it's poisonous~

Strong, I can only say that the logic is very clear and the plot is very good. It's unique and the protagonist's growth is well written.

Feeling pretty good

Your article is very good. It reminds me of that summer when a pack of paper was an afternoon.

The writing is good and the subject matter is quite to my liking.

It looks good, the subject matter appeals to me, and the writing is also good.

A light novel style fairy tale. Those who like this style will like it very much!

The writing is very good, but the male protagonist is a bit miserable [face covering]