Road Survival, Awakening SSS-Level Talents at the Beginning

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I've read Chapter 52. The writing style and content are different from the road survival articles I have seen before, but it feels good. There are very few descriptions of driving and opening treasure boxes, very little description of killing monsters, and there are also very few harvests and data. But it describes many wonderful, talented, charismatic, kind and upright characters. It's a bit like when the stars of humanity shine, praising the motherland. It's a bit like a group portrait, but maybe the writing isn't enough, and the description is still a little one-sided. Personally, I think the description of the protagonist is not enough. I like to describe the growth of the protagonist, but the description of the character, external communication, and combat is not detailed enough. The protagonist is not outstanding enough. The author likes to write some incomprehensible words for the sake of weirdness to add to the weird and suspenseful atmosphere. I also often skipped some plots, or jumped from one paragraph to another, which resulted in the plot not flowing smoothly enough and making it a bit difficult for me to understand. I hope the author will work hard and work hard to write better works.

Not bad? It's quite satisfactory. There was a short climax near the explanation of the truth about the road game in the later stage, but it's a pity that it couldn't be continued and ended hastily. Personally, I think the main points are as follows: 1️⃣The writing style always feels like something is missing. Some descriptions are very deliberately grand? But the sense of immersion is relatively poor 2️⃣The foreshadowing is not good. The foreshadowing is very similar to the Riddler and I personally feel that the pits are not filled in or not filled in well. There is a lot of description in the front, but when filling in the later, it is hastily or written in one stroke. 3️⃣It feels like the author only wrote the general idea and outline before starting to write the book [? The timeline connections between many chapters are quite confusing, and it feels like the author felt that he had to write here, so he wrote it. The author's own ideas don't seem to be clear. . ? It doesn't feel like a whole story, but a chapter-by-chapter 4️⃣ ending. I feel that the author is tired of writing. When I rose from the road game to the consciousness of two planets, I feel that I can give it five stars. But the ending is indeed a bit unsatisfactory. Of course, the author is very lively and has a strong sense of life and writes with great care. Kudos! ! ! Looking forward to reading the next book

Not bad, keep up the good work [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good. Take a seat in front. Call me if it becomes popular.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's okay, this is still a quick road work [laughs]

After watching it, I thought it was quite interesting, but I was a bit confused [Petrified]

It's very interesting. The author's ending is a little rushed, but it's to my liking. It's my favorite style.

The heroine has dual attributes of lamp and moth, right?