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The writing is okay, but there is a small mistake. The little love is called Otome Ai instead of Otome Ai.

The writing is very good, and it's a bit charming, but I always feel that Xia Ya is clinging to Xiaoxin, not that she's clingy, it's just an indescribable feeling.

It's so cute! It's so healing and so well written! The characters are not OOC and the heroine is super cute! The original characters are also well written! I hope the heroine and Xiaoxin will be together in all or the ending [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] It's super cute! The description of the protagonists' previous relationships is not inconsistent at all! It's simply a fairy tale! I really like this kind of growth and companionship novel! The description of family and friendship is quite good! ! !

It's super in line with my idea of ​​Xiaoxin. Although Xiaoxin is a bit lazy, doesn't like to put away toys, and is a pervert, he takes good care of his friends' emotions and is a pistachio. He will take good care of his sister and give comfort and care to his mother. I once again emphasize that I hope Xiaoxin and Xia Ya will be together, because from the author's writing, it seems that Xiaoxin pays more attention to Xia Ya, and Xia Ya's future plans also include Xiaoxin. It's also more in line with Crayon Shin-chan's fan fiction. If Xia Ya and Yi Mu are written together, and Xiao Xin and Xiao Ai are together, the author can consider a more CP type, that is, not favor Xia Ya's writing style, and not favor Xiao Xin. But they are all the protagonists. Oops, there may be some problems with my expression. I hope the author can realize it. [Crying] There are more to follow! ! ! ! ! Author, how could you do this? Yesterday was Qiqi, you should write more articles [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

Who is the male protagonist? Xia Ya has a crush on Xiao Xin, but if I say she likes him, I think she doesn't. Besides, I am more optimistic about Xia Ya and Yu Yi. Their preferences, values, and personalities are all compatible. I think Xia Ya has also started to have a crush on Yu Yi. Could it be that she is teasing him? Also, sometimes the author changes Xia Ya's last name to Hayakawa, which is Hayakawa Yuichi's Hayakawa.

Can the author insert a theatrical version? It's "Crayon Shin-chan: The Tropical Rainforest" that I really hope the author will write! ! 😍

It's really very interesting. When I go there, I can't find a few Crayon Shin-chan fanfics. Some of them are just continuous ones, not like this kind of unit drama. I like it very much, I like it very much, the only drawback is that there are too few updates.

I really think it's super, super good-looking. Whether it's the friendship aspect or the relatively novel emotional line between the heroine and Xiaoxin, it's very easy to relate to. There are no surprises in the whole story, so it's very good-looking! ! ! (˘ ³˘)❤ ヽ(*´з｀*)ﾉ

Actually, I haven't read Crayon Shin-chan, but the author's writing makes me want to take a look, hahaha

I kind of hope the two of them get together when they grow up.

It's really great. It's updated now. Xia Ya and Wu Xiaozhi are in elementary school. I really like this kind of daily writing. I'm so curious about the love life of Xia Ya and Wu Xiaozhi after they go to college. There is also a friendship line between Xia Ya and Xiao Ai. I really like it. The author writes it very delicately. There is also Nini, the three girls are so cute [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] Come on, author, I will keep following up for more updates.

I've read a lot of Xiaoxin's fanfics, and I think this one is the most different among them. The interaction between Xia Ya and Xiaoxin is really cute. The author's many descriptions are very graphic and make people want to laugh. Their interaction is so cute [Blow kiss]

Not bad, not bad. Oh my gosh, I really like the interaction between Xiaoxin and the heroine. Well, is it um family-oriented, friendship-oriented, or love-oriented, let me go? In doubt.

The whole book gives people a faint sense of warmth. Although they are all small daily things, they are very warm and interesting. It makes people feel as if they are actually in their stories, not just a spectator but a witness. [Like][Love]

I want to make fun of Xia Ya and Xiaoxin [face covering]

I really like this story, I feel very happy

The friendships between children are very cute and beautiful to watch.

It's super, super, super good-looking. The characters in it are well written, but there are just too few. I finished reading it in one go. It's really beautiful. Could the author be better soon?

It looks great. I really like cabbage! [Adoration][Adoration]

It's nice to see the hotel room. It's nice. It's nice. It's annoying. It's annoying. It's annoying. It's annoying. What time will I get home? I still like Xinjiang. Everyone likes each other.

Have a good time with Xiaoxin

It's really beautiful

It's really pretty. It's really pretty.

Can you please get the name right? My little love is called Sootome Ai.

It's nice, I love reading it, but it's a bit short.

It's really super invincible and explosive and beautiful (´,,•∀•,,`)

I really love it to death, the sense of involvement is very strong, Xiao Ai is super cute, Yuyi is also very funny, everyone is a good baby [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

The author is great! Super pretty!

Really, it's very beautiful. The author needs to work hard and update it [blowing kiss]

It's very interesting. Come on, author. I support you.