Youlianxiantu

It is indeed very good. Among a bunch of bad immortality novels, this is the only orthodox major. It is a novel about cultivating immortals. It highlights the importance of money in cultivating immortals. It is a step-by-step and down-to-earth practice. There is no brain-dead passerby A or B. It truly describes the difficulties of every cultivator. However, generally the endings written by female channels are very rushed and are not perfect. Especially female channels do not seem to be good at writing works with a big world view. Some of the stories I have read before have ended hastily after they started to whet people's appetites. At present, the heroine is still in the small world. If she goes to the upper world and the fairy world later, it will probably need more space to complete the entire world view. According to the author's current progress, it should take 2000 chapters or more to complete the entire world view. Cultivation of immortality is about human relations and sophistication! ! ! ! ! !

The heroine of this work about cultivating immortals is very unique. She is ruthless and murderous, and her style of acting has been unique for two trillion years. When she was known to the world, she had reopened the door to the universe and created a world of Dao, Tian, ​​and Origins that is unique to her. Readers who like cultivating immortals have this book that is very powerful, scary, and extremely charming.

Advantages: No CP, the heroine is dedicated to practicing, there are no messy people or plots. The world, narrative, and character settings are also very good. The overall training rhythm is also very good. Disadvantages: There are too many introductions to some cannon fodder characters, and even the cannon fodder's fight scenes are written in very detail (which may be an advantage for some readers). Moreover, this article is not a cool article. The heroine cannot easily destroy the enemy but always feels like I despise you. I have read more than 200 chapters so far. If I were to write a story about flying out of this world, I would have to write a lot. I like long articles, but I don't like the long articles I'm following. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

It's okay, but I hope it won't be about male favorites. That's fine.

After seeing more than 250 pictures, I thought it was quite interesting. The heroine is self-strengthened and does not rely on others. I look forward to the heroine forming a pill. I feel that sometimes it is better for the heroine to be more passive, especially in the secret realm. The heroine retreated silently, protecting everyone in front of her [laughing][laughing][laughing]

After reading more than 300 chapters, the story is wonderful, especially the world map composition. It is very interesting and the language skills are also very good. I hope to continue the output and not have numerical expansion in the future. There are also air and water battles in the sect war, etc., I look forward to it.

As far as the plot is concerned, it's quite good. Although there are some problems, they are just minor ones and do not affect the viewing. But as far as the setting is concerned, the "spiritual ticket" setting in the article is a bit,, how should I say, kind of poisonous but not poisonous, because most fantasy novels It is said that the spirit stones in it can be used to practice, restore one's own spiritual power, or be used as consumables for formation energy. However, there is no mention of spirit stones in practice in the article, or the function of spirit stones is not mentioned. It seems that they are used entirely as currency.,,, In general, it is still readable

Everything is good, but the update is too slow. Breaking through the big milestone of Jindan, except for two chapters in two days, the rest of the time it was a chapter that could not be updated, and the readers were calm [laughing and crying]

Yeah, it's well written, but the elixir and magic weapon system is a bit unclear. It should be possible to write that the first-grade elixir magic weapon corresponds to the early stage of Qi refining, and the second-grade magic weapon corresponds to the middle stage of Qi refining. Just don't mention the third-grade low-level magic weapon. This will make it easier to know what grade of magic elixir it is at a glance later. Also, the author hasn't updated for three days. Please update soon. The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌

This book is very good to read. There are no interesting points in the more than 200 chapters. It is just that there may be a lot of pen and ink when writing about other NPCs. I quite like this "long-winded" writing. Everyone has their own story. But if you like non-cp female protagonists, don't read the novel with a very similar setting in the comment section. The setting of that book is okay, but it is just a purely male-friendly and stinky novel. After reading hundreds of chapters, you will be spoiled.

The author's portrayal of the protagonist is pretty good, not brainless. The plot writing is also good. I finished the first chapter in one go. Now I'm looking forward to the next plot Come on, author!

After reading a hundred chapters, I found the ancient cultivation novel, the plot is cliché but not procrastinating or watery. The article describes the path of cultivating immortality as an ascetic monk who is calm and calm, distinguishes between good and evil, has flesh and blood, dares to fight, and does not kill indiscriminately. Love to read, thank you for the author.

The heroine is focused on her cultivation, and the author has not arranged all kinds of weird love plots, nor does she have a very male protagonist character to come close to the heroine's influential plots. And then, the heroine is also very unique and beautiful! It's great to be an elder of a sect, and to attack other sects, that part really makes me feel good. Come on, author

Many settings are quite good. Why is no one watching? This is a traditional fairy tale that is very interesting to read and I want to keep reading it. It was a bit boring at first, but the more you watch it, the better it gets I read the introduction again, and it only said that the heroine would cultivate to a spiritual infant. What about the subsequent realms? Is it gone? Are you exhausted after cultivating to the Nascent Soul?

It's very interesting to read. Although I feel that the writing is a bit lacking, I can clearly feel the author's progress after reading it now. The heroine is even better. She is dedicated to seeking the truth. Anyway, this is a novel worth reading for the heroine to upgrade to immortality.

So pretty! Not enough!

Female videos serious about cultivating immortality

It looks good, I like it, but it's a bit lacking Author, please promise me! Can I finish the elixir formation at once tonight? Don't make us have to wait until the next day [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

I've seen it in Xuanchen Bar. I'll give you a five-star [like]

I've read Chapter 28 and will read it when I'm waiting for Golden Egg. It's really good.

Very orthodox immortality writing

Good looking, Modo Modo...

Personally I think it's okay, it's different

I heard that it can be made into intelligent reading, the latest AI reading

The water flows slowly, it is daily and normal

The more I read, the better it gets. This novel is worth the patience and the graphics are pretty good. Come on, author, it will definitely be a hit [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart] It's very real. I feel like this is a very bland novel without cheats. It's the most realistic novel.

It has the shadow of a mortal girl cultivating immortals, which is very good

Cultivation of Immortality + Single, it's quite interesting to me [Chigua] and the writing is pretty good.

Why is the score so low? It's obviously very beautiful.

This book is quite good! Clear thinking and smooth writing!