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The writing is very good and the logic is very good. This is really the best HP fanfic I have seen this year. I like Si Jiao and Xiaolong, but I really can't stand the change of Si Jiao's feelings for the heroine [cry] [cry] [cry]. The change of family affection into love really makes me feel a little uncomfortable [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] Even if family affection turns into love, when the heroine still has affection for Si Jiao, Si Jiao actually kisses the heroine when the heroine is drunk and unconscious? ? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! ! This is really a bit vicious [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical] (First review) Tomato couldn't follow up the review again, so I had to modify the review, but I also kept the last review to prove that I did not personally attack the author and only spoke about the plot. I admit that I am biased in giving two stars. The author's literary talent is enough to give a higher evaluation, but readers should be free to comment. I was only expressing my opinions in the previous comments. I didn't even make an expression that made people obviously uncomfortable (such as [laughing] [smiling] [vomiting]). The author did not make any demands on the author (such as deleting the plot and changing the text), and then the author used the word "white-eyed wolf" to evaluate me. I also know that it is hard for the author to update 10,000 words or more every day, and there is a lot of pressure, but this does not mean that I must give you a five-star praise and not express my own feelings. Finally, I hope that the author can complete every creation according to his own wishes.

Watch it, watch it, watch it❥(ゝω✿ฺ) I really like Xiaolong's long, green and moving emotional line, and Si Jiao's family line. The teacher wrote very reasonable characters, and the plot is also advancing [shy][shy] No... Your sister, Sijiao and Lilith kissed? 😇😇I really can't help it anymore. The little girl who loved me so much was broken into pieces. Why did Lilith kiss someone because she thought he was Decorah? It's so bloody bad🤧

I love it, I love Draco so much. The idea is very novel and the content is quite logical. I also really like Professor Snape, he has a good grasp of various degrees. It also allowed us to see a different Lucius and a different kind of fatherly love. It also allowed me to meet authors who are actively updating, which is very good. I am especially afraid of discontinued updates. Come on, come on, I really like this work. [Shy] It was directed at Draco, but it turned out to be BE. Not to mention this, later the male protagonist becomes Grindelwald, [Punch][Petrified][Petrified]

I originally thought that as a non-pure-blood wizard who entered Slytherin, the heroine would act as a group favorite, but I saw that she was bullied and disgusted later. I just think it's normal. After all, the ideas they have accepted since childhood cannot be changed overnight. Of course, the relationship between Draco and the heroine is also very interesting. He is slowly changing for the heroine, but essentially he is still a tsundere young master. The professor also learned to care and protect. But I hope he won't care about Potter because of Lily later on. He shouldn't be tied up in self-blame for the rest of his life.

The author's writing is really good. Well, what's so good about it🧐. When I first read the introduction of this book, I thought it was great. For example, the heroine Lilith, because she is a long-time fan of HP, I already know all the plots, character lines, emotional lines, etc. The author added the identity of "Obscurial" to her, which is really difficult to let people know. He stayed out of sight without clicking to read (for me), and he also wore the book. In order to save Malfoy, he risked everything (I personally like Draco very much❤) and even joined the Death Eaters (well, although it was mixed 🥲), but these points really made me love it very much. Later, I saw the recently added parts. Judging from the current setting, the plot is somewhat innovative. Well, it seems to be the part about the White Wolf. The author has also deduced and expanded the world view of Harry Potter. There are many unique story lines, such as the description of Harry Potter's darkening and other plots, which allows us to see the other side of Harry, which satisfies some of my imagination of the original work★. Returning to the heroine, apart from CP Draco, there is one more thing I want to praise the author about: Sri Lanka. In fact, I really feel that there is a family relationship between the Sri Lankan cultivator and the heroine, and every word reveals the Sri Lankan cultivator's protection and protection for the heroine. Just like what Voldemort saw when he used Legilimency on Lilith and was later seen by the Sect, as the author wrote, the Sect's first reaction was not to dislike her or hate her, but to think that her soul would be split if she killed someone. After reading so many fanfics, especially the one where the heroine is a Slytherin and was adopted by the Sect, I dare say that this one stood out to me the most! There is no such thing~! Another point is that the patron saint of Sri Lanka changed at that time, and I smelled a different smell in the love potion. At first, I doubted whether it was the heroine, but then I felt that he and the heroine were at most a family relationship. The author hasn't written about this yet, but for the time being I'm assuming that it's family affection or the family affection that caused Si Jiao to have love for the heroine. Then there is Draco, everyone knows Draco Malfoy, in the novel it is Draco first and then Malfoy. It is also fully reflected in this book. At the beginning, Lilith was a Muggle-born wizard (well, not a pure-blood or a mixed-blood anyway). She went to Slytherin and was despised by thousands of people. However, Draco knew that Lilith came to him because of him. She betrayed the young wizards of the original pure-blood family (well, I can't say betrayal, I can only say that I didn't associate with them), and insisted on going her own way with Lilith (the early stage may not have been particularly smooth [laughter]). Although I don't seem to have any evidence of Malfoy's confession to Lilith and the two of them speaking together, in short, Draco here is the knight who broke the pure-blood theory of the Malfoy family for generations (because I have also read many fan books about Draco, and many authors will write Draco's other half as Gryffindor, which can better reflect the idea that Draco breaks the principle for love, but I feel that is not what is written [laughs]). Finally, there is Cecilia Chloe who is a guest. I really like this character ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (10,000 words omitted here). I really don't understand why some readers think that she is a guest through the back door. She is a very simple Slytherin (I think It is a bit far-fetched to say that she is a Slytherin, because Cecilia herself made a wish to the Sorting Hat to enter Slytherin because of Lilith [laughing awkwardly]) In my personal eyes, she is a little sun who values friendship (can the author write more plots where Lilith cares about her🥹🥹). I also think that Cecilia's appearance and access to Lilith emphasize Draco's love and possession of Lilith. Okay, that's pretty much it. The above is my current evaluation and opinion on this book (Eh, uh, uh, uh, uh, I will review it again after I finish the review🩷🩷🩷) and the author. You have worked so hard not only to update on the hour, but also to update on time at 00:00 every day [crying] [crying], come on, author💪💪💪💪💪💪, love you Mimidu🩷🩷🩷❤❤❤

Seeing this, this story forced me to re-examine the lives that were already vivid in J. K. Rowling's writings. In the parallel world of "HP When I Touch Your Fingertips", what kind of heart-wrenching and reasonable new fates were given to them. Draco Malfoy: A coward tamed by rules and a glimmer of love I once lamented that the author's portrayal of Draco was extremely accurate. He is not a born villain, but the product of being carefully tamed within the pure-blood rules - a coward who is arrogant in favor and privilege, but instinctively shrinks before the iron laws. This perfectly echoes the boy who breaks down and cries in the bathroom in the original book: he is forced to take on tasks far beyond his ability because he is not a killer at heart. In the first week, Lilith's indifferent love, like a raging flame, became a weak catalyst for him to break away from domestication. His bravery is real - from not daring to speak out to daring to defend, and even tearing off the ribbon of the family crest, wanting Lilith to be his wife. This is the most rebellious sincerity that this soul soaked in rules can give. However, his bravery has its hard edges. When the love disappeared, in Erzhoumu's reality without deep emotional accumulation, he quickly retreated to the original form where he loved himself more. He was afraid of the real Lilith whose face was full of cracks due to making Horcruxes. His withdrawal confirms the character background of the original work: when the real test comes, domesticated instincts often overwhelm the courage that sprouts for love. Severus Snape: The bright moon that never shines alone on me As for Severus, a character for whom I have been heartbroken countless times, in fan stories, his "second choice" setting was amplified into a long lag. His deep love is his greatest medal and also his unintentional cruelty. He was good to Lilith, became her godfather, and gave her confidence. There is no doubt about this feeling. But at critical moments, he would always subconsciously choose Harry first. For Lilith, this means "the bright moon is hanging high, not only shining on me". This thorn accurately penetrates into the most contradictory part of Snape's character - his love can last throughout his life and last until death, but it often appears reserved and full of painful entanglements in the moment and in front of specific people. Just like his love for Lily Evans, it can support him to complete the greatest redemption, but he cannot go back to the past to stop that "Mudblood". In the world of fandom, this reserved love becomes the coldest sharp blade that pierces another soul that longs to be illuminated by him alone. Gellert Grindelwald: Ambition greater than love, and complicity in total acceptance The redemption (or rather, another kind of sinking) in the second episode comes from Gellert Grindelwald. The core charm of this Dark Lord, who had a legendary entanglement with Dumbledore in the original work, has never been simple evil, but his ambition that can ignite the world and his insightful wisdom. In fan works, this trait is particularly amplified, and it is also part of his charm. He can be Lilith's father, teacher, lover, and omnipotent accomplice. He accepted the broken yet powerful her and taught her how to use power. This is in the same vein as the charming careerist and politician in the original work. He is ashamed to admit "love" and thinks that this vulgar emotion has tarnished the noble connection between them - isn't this another extreme? For Lilith, what he provides is a kind of soul resonance and recognition that is higher than love. The silent proof of love: redemption accomplished in action My understanding was once so shallow that I thought that if I love someone, I must declare it with my mouth. But both the original work and this fan work tell me: the deepest love is often hidden in the subconscious instinct, engraved in every little thing done for you. Snape expressed love with a lifetime of protection, and Grindelwald expressed love with a hundred years of waiting. As for Draco, the ribbon he tore off was love, and his final retreat was the silent collapse of love under the weight of reality. The greatness of this book is that it does not glorify "love". It shows the various forms of love - some love makes people brave, some love makes people narrow-minded, some love is redemption, some love is binding, and the highest level of love is the resonance of souls that achieve each other but remain independent. It allows us to see how the characters draw completely different life arcs due to different encounters based on the established background. I sincerely hope that Lilith, who has been wandering in the abyss for too long, can be truly embraced by the warm light within three weeks of her eyes, and achieve the perfection she deserves.

I don't know how to evaluate this book. When I saw the name and introduction, I thought it would be crazy. But I read this book because of the double arrows of Draco and Lilith. I didn't expect it to be so crazy. It is really well written, has a good plot, and the writing is good, but the viciousness is also really vicious. When I was obsessed with the beautiful love between Lilith and Draco, I actually had a relationship with Sri Lanka. Although it was only a few chapters and it was unrequited love, it still had a major impact on me? When I read these chapters, I thought I would leave a negative review after finishing it, but the truth is that I can't bear to give a negative review. Lilith is really good because she wanted to save Draco and came to the magical world. She changed again and again. I also endured a lot. I cried blindly when I finished reading it. When I saw the author said that he wanted to end it like this and left a blank, the sky almost fell. Draco also wrote very well and would take the initiative to approach Lilith. When the heroine wanted to retreat, he approached Lilith again and again. I thought I was the kind of girl who dreamed of Draco, a deadly poisonous Yui, but that doesn't count. I still shed tears because of Lilith's love for Draco. I hope that Lilith and Draco can have a good ending. The author must keep writing and don't change his mind because of the readers' words. Although I was very angry when I saw the chapters of He Si Jiao and wanted to curse, but Lilith is really good. I don't want to see Lilith's ending in such a tragic way. I also feel sorry for Draco. Lilith is so good, what would he do without Lilith? The part about becoming a Death Eater in the movie version and the original book is both heart-wrenching. Please don't make people feel so heart-broken in the fanfic.

The author is here for Draco. Why is the heroine becoming less and less special to Draco? [Crying] Do you really want to form a CP with Snape?

The author's writing is very good, logical, and the writing style is super, super, super good! ! ! I really like to watch the heroine and Xiaolong fall in love [Send Heart] In fact, I was a little shocked when I saw the part with the personal trainer, but I can still accept it [Send Heart] I thought that the author would write the ending in the second episode, but I didn't expect that the male protagonist would be changed. , I was halfway through the second week of watching it and found out that the male protagonist had been changed. This was a big shock to me [crying] [crying] [crying] I didn't watch the plot after that, but I still support the teacher's book [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] The teacher's writing is really beautiful! ! ! The writing is also very good! ! !

I came here to read Grindelwald. I have read several of the author's books. They are so good. GG's love is so good that I am almost addicted🤤🤤I really want to read more of GG's favorite novels... Hehe🤤🤤

Don't think it's not popular, just because there are few people, it's really beautiful! ! ! I immediately tied it. I just hope that the author will not imitate others. It is too uncomfortable to stop updating at every turn [crying]

The stir-fried chicken is really good-looking. I can't close my mouth when I see Lucius smiling. It's really fun to watch the character who always takes revenge. The little girl who apologizes to the professor in tears is also very cute.

It's really super good to watch. I finished reading more than 120 chapters in three days. The heroine's character is very special and she must avenge her. It's really refreshing to watch. The little dragon is also very cute and cute. I'm a great author. I will always follow you. I'm already ready to read another book by the author [Admiration]

The author's writing is very good, really, it even makes me feel that it doesn't seem like it should appear in a foreign persimmon. But I didn't want to read the rest of this book. The first episode was so brutal that I burst into tears. Then when I saw the introduction of the second episode, the male protagonist was changed, my heart ached even more! Jumping to the final chapter of the second week, seeing Lilith like this made me feel a little strange. Maybe I skipped her growth process. Of course, I believe that the remaining two weeks will be very exciting. I don't know much about Grindelwald, but the other two Grindelwald books made me feel his charm (to be precise, I am following all the author's works at the same time these days). Readers who like Draco very much like me can just watch the first episode, otherwise it will make the pain worse. To be honest, I don't understand why the male protagonist was changed in the second or third show. Even when the title of the book is directly related to Draco, did you think of changing the male lead after finishing the first show? Or was this the outline from the beginning? Just leaving a be ending makes me feel better, and I can read another book in the next two or three weeks😭. The pain is too painful. I have been depressed for a day. I hope my eyes will not be too swollen tomorrow after reading Flora tonight. Finally, will there be a follow-up to the book by the author Faya? Where can I find the book "Fireworks in the Day"? I can't find it [crying]!

I felt so bad for my little sister after reading this book. I have read Chapter 112 and I can't get over it. This book is still very good, but it is so cruel to my little sister [I almost cried] [I almost cried]. The scenes between my little sister and Draco were quite sweet, but the three times Snape hurt my little sister made me feel a little overwhelmed (I don't know if it counts as three times), my heart ached, just now When I read it, I hoped that my sister would never forgive Snape for the rest of her life, but when I thought about Snape, I didn't know how to let go of my lover, but I still couldn't relax. I couldn't breathe while reading this book, and my heart ached. Alas, I'd better slow down and read it again. I'll add it to the bookshelf first, and then the rating may be changed [blowing kiss]. Again, the author's writing is very good.

Fine chaff, very rare fine chaff, updates are not slow [like][like][like]. In the middle, I feel that Professor CB is almost CP, and recently he has returned to the family relationship line. It doesn't matter if you have good teeth and you can make up for it on your own. There is a little bit of a body-massaging plot, which I also love!! Please keep up the good work! I don't like this book. Although I also care about my sister, I feel that it's too impure and too much about Harry. By the way, Draco in this book is very good. Except for scolding his sister for being a mudblood at the beginning, he stopped saying it when he realized his mistake, and he is not that stubborn.

Thumbs up for the second and third chapters. The author is so awesome. He wrote the Grindelwald in my heart. It's not OOC at all. Even the concept of love is very consistent. I have read the author's other two books on Grindelwald. The heroine is still too controlled. I personally like and am satisfied with the character of the heroine in this book. She is more crazy and decisive than the other two books, and she is evenly matched with Grindelwald.

Very, very beautiful❗️The main plot of Harry Potter is written very logically and does not look OOC. The love line between the heroine Lilith and Draco is also very interesting. The pure love between boys and girls is very well written. Kisses and hugs are also very atmospheric. The family relationship between the heroine and the teacher is also very interesting❗️❗️ The heroine is super smart and her fighting power is off the charts! I will never wrong myself! Tuoduoshuangwen does not abuse women at all! This book is really fine chaff. The author has many ideas and insights that are worthy of in-depth study and can stand up to scrutiny. I will defend the author to the death ❗️I won't allow anyone to disobey her ❗️ @ limit drizzle

You have to watch it to know. It's so good that the more you watch it, the more you like it. It's so good, I love it ღ(´･ᴗ･`). I really like their interaction ᥫ᭡. Hehe✌︎˶╹ꇴ╹˶✌︎

So pretty! I was so excited that I almost fainted, especially the heroine and Grindelwald, OMG! Very good at writing! Five stars is the limit for Tomato, not the upper limit for my rating! Super pretty! Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage, although the first one was definitely not my cup of tea. But this book is very well written! I never deny good things. This book is really well written! It made me burst into tears. In terms of rating, five stars is Tomato's upper limit, not mine. [Praise]

It's good to watch, I really think it's great, but the corridor movie is really embarrassing to me. I can't even watch it anymore. I'm not saying it's embarrassing, haha, but it's still very good. I love it so much. I hope it will be updated soon.

I think this HP is a relatively high-quality book among the books I have read (there are very few high-quality books). Especially in the first chapter, I feel that the author wrote about the kind of love that breaks the dimensional wall (Dream Girl). Especially the bullying part is really impressive, but why is the rating so low? If my writing is not good, please don't complain @DRizzle

Sometimes it makes me angry, but the writing is really good and the plot is also very good

I just came back after my vacation 🍅 and I saw a HP fan who is so to my liking! ! ! Do you know how excited I am! ! ! I really like the plot and writing style of this book. Who knows? The character of Snape is really vivid. The author updates it very quickly! ! I love it so much! ! !

Don't be a BE, I want to see a sweet love. When will Si Jiao and Xiaolong remember what happened in the first week? What is Chloe's identity? The heroine's baby must be well and don't die again. Finished kicking, okay, little me, I feel sorry for little Lilith, Si Jiao, how can you use Shen Feng Wuying on Lilith, little Lilith must be very sad ★★★★ 8.25 Follow-up review ★★★ You've tortured me so much, Samsung, please don't torture me anymore. I feel sorry for Xiao Long, I feel sorry for Lilith, I feel sorry for Sijiao, and I hate people from the Order of the Phoenix for the time being. 9.5★★★ I don't want to watch it in the second week. I feel sorry for my dear. I'm kicking the third week. 9.27 Don't love the three-week-old one too much 10.6 I consider myself to be barely a fan of Xiao Long, but it doesn't feel good to see Xiao Long like this.

In the first week, the heroine likes Decorah, and she fights the boss bit by bit like a player. From the second week, she becomes the big boss. Decorah can't keep up with the heroine and is afraid of shrinking. The hero becomes Grindelwald. He likes it very much and looks good.

It's super good-looking. The heroine has a character that must take revenge. Some of her small actions with the hero. The author's writing style is very good. The plot is smooth and the details are well handled. Be sure to read it. I found out that it is a very good HP novel [Like]

It's beautiful🥰, but can the author tell me if the ending is he? If not he, I'll just settle for it [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] The Corridor Accident made me laugh so hard [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I rarely post comments, but this book is good, really good. I cried so much when I saw the ending of the first part. The second part must be hehe, ahhhhh, I am going to be broken into pieces [crying] [crying] Our religion has suffered so much, can we have a sequel [crying] [crying] [crying] I'm so broken. I'm really broken. Please complete the tutorial with one click. My little heart can't bear it [crying]

How can it be so good and cruel? My hands are shaking when I look at it from behind (ˊᵒ̴̶̷̤ ꇴ ᵒ̴̶̷̤ˋ)