Harry Potter: When I Touch Your Fingertips

The writing is very good and the logic is very good. This is really the best HP fanfic I have seen this year. I like Si Jiao and Xiaolong, but I really can't stand the change of Si Jiao's feelings for the heroine 😢 😢 😢. The change of family affection into love really makes me feel a little uncomfortable 🥺 🥺 🥺 Even if family affection turns into love, when the heroine still has affection for Si Jiao, Si Jiao actually kisses the heroine when the heroine is drunk and unconscious?????!!!!! This is really a bit vicious [Petrochemical][Petrochemical][Petrochemical] (First review) Tomato couldn't follow up the review again, so I had to modify the review, but I also kept the last review to prove that I did not personally attack the author and only spoke about the plot. I admit that I am biased in giving two stars. The author's literary talent is enough to give a higher evaluation, but readers should be free to comment. I was only expressing my opinions in the previous comments. I didn't even make an expression that made people obviously uncomfortable (such as [laughing] [smiling] [vomiting]). The author did not make any demands on the author (such as deleting the plot and changing the text), and then the author used the word "white-eyed wolf" to evaluate me. I also know that it is hard for the author to update 10,000 words or more every day, and there is a lot of pressure, but this does not mean that I must give you a five-star praise and not express my own feelings. Finally, I hope that the author can complete every creation according to his own wishes.

Watch it, watch it, watch it❥(ゝω✿ฺ) I really like Xiaolong's long, green and moving emotional line, and Si Jiao's family line. The teacher wrote very reasonable characters, and the plot is also advancing 😳😳 No... Your sister, Sijiao and Lilith kissed? 😇😇I really can't help it anymore. The little girl who loved me so much was broken into pieces. Why did Lilith kiss someone because she thought he was Decorah? It's so bloody bad🤧

I love it, I love Draco so much. The idea is very novel and the content is quite logical. I also really like Professor Snape, he has a good grasp of various degrees. It also allowed us to see a different Lucius and a different kind of fatherly love. It also allowed me to meet authors who are actively updating, which is very good. I am especially afraid of discontinued updates. Come on, come on, I really like this work. 😳 It was directed at Draco, but it turned out to be BE. Not to mention this, later the male protagonist becomes Grindelwald, [Punch][Petrified][Petrified]

The author's writing is really good. Well, what's so good about it🧐. When I first read the introduction of this book, I thought it was great. For example, the heroine Lilith, because she is a long-time fan of HP, I already know all the plots, character lines, emotional lines, etc. The author added the identity of "Obscurial" to her, which is really difficult to let people know. He stayed out of sight without clicking to read (for me), and he also wore the book. In order to save Malfoy, he risked everything (I personally like Draco very much❤) and even joined the Death Eaters (well, although it was mixed 🥲), but these points really made me love it very much. Later, I saw the recently added parts. Judging from the current setting, the plot is somewhat innovative. Well, it seems to be the part about the White Wolf. The author has also deduced and expanded the world view of Harry Potter. There are many unique story lines, such as the description of Harry Potter's darkening and other plots, which allows us to see the other side of Harry, which satisfies some of my imagination of the original work★. Returning to the heroine, apart from CP Draco, there is one more thing I want to praise the author about: Sri Lanka. In fact, I really feel that there is a family relationship between the Sri Lankan cultivator and the heroine, and every word reveals the Sri Lankan cultivator's protection and protection for the heroine. Just like what Voldemort saw when he used Legilimency on Lilith and was later seen by the Sect, as the author wrote, the Sect's first reaction was not to dislike her or hate her, but to think that her soul would be split if she killed someone. After reading so many fanfics, especially the one where the heroine is a Slytherin and was adopted by the Sect, I dare say that this one stood out to me the most! There is no such thing~! Another point is that the patron saint of Sri Lanka changed at that time, and I smelled a different smell in the love potion. At first, I doubted whether it was the heroine, but then I felt that he and the heroine were at most a family relationship. The author hasn't written about this yet, but for the time being I'm assuming that it's family affection or the family affection that caused Si Jiao to have love for the heroine. Then there is Draco, everyone knows Draco Malfoy, in the novel it is Draco first and then Malfoy. It is also fully reflected in this book. At the beginning, Lilith was a Muggle-born wizard (well, not a pure-blood or a mixed-blood anyway). She went to Slytherin and was despised by thousands of people. However, Draco knew that Lilith came to him because of him. She betrayed the young wizards of the original pure-blood family (well, I can't say betrayal, I can only say that I didn't associate with them), and insisted on going her own way with Lilith (the early stage may not have been particularly smooth [laughter]). Although I don't seem to have any evidence of Malfoy's confession to Lilith and the two of them speaking together, in short, Draco here is the knight who broke the pure-blood theory of the Malfoy family for generations (because I have also read many fan books about Draco, and many authors will write Draco's other half as Gryffindor, which can better reflect the idea that Draco breaks the principle for love, but I feel that is not what is written [laughs]). Finally, there is Cecilia Chloe who is a guest. I really like this character ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh (10,000 words omitted here). I really don't understand why some readers think that she is a guest through the back door. She is a very simple Slytherin (I think It is a bit far-fetched to say that she is a Slytherin, because Cecilia herself made a wish to the Sorting Hat to enter Slytherin because of Lilith 😅) In my personal eyes, she is a little sun who values friendship (can the author write more plots where Lilith cares about her🥹🥹). I also think that Cecilia's appearance and access to Lilith emphasize Draco's love and possession of Lilith. Okay, that's pretty much it. The above is my current evaluation and opinion on this book (Eh, uh, uh, uh, uh, I will review it again after I finish the review🩷🩷🩷) and the author. You have worked so hard not only to update on the hour, but also to update on time at 00:00 every day 😢 😢, come on, author💪💪💪💪💪💪, love you Mimidu🩷🩷🩷❤❤❤

I originally thought that as a non-pure-blood wizard who entered Slytherin, the heroine would act as a group favorite, but I saw that she was bullied and disgusted later. I just think it's normal. After all, the ideas they have accepted since childhood cannot be changed overnight. Of course, the relationship between Draco and the heroine is also very interesting. He is slowly changing for the heroine, but essentially he is still a tsundere young master. The professor also learned to care and protect. But I hope he won't care about Potter because of Lily later on. He shouldn't be tied up in self-blame for the rest of his life.

Seeing this, this story forced me to re-examine the lives that were already vivid in J. K. Rowling's writings. In the parallel world of "HP When I Touch Your Fingertips", what kind of heart-wrenching and reasonable new fates were given to them. Draco Malfoy: A coward tamed by rules and a glimmer of love I once lamented that the author's portrayal of Draco was extremely accurate. He is not a born villain, but the product of being carefully tamed within the pure-blood rules - a coward who is arrogant in favor and privilege, but instinctively shrinks before the iron laws. This perfectly echoes the boy who breaks down and cries in the bathroom in the original book: he is forced to take on tasks far beyond his ability because he is not a killer at heart. In the first week, Lilith's indifferent love, like a raging flame, became a weak catalyst for him to break away from domestication. His bravery is real - from not daring to speak out to daring to defend, and even tearing off the ribbon of the family crest, wanting Lilith to be his wife. This is the most rebellious sincerity that this soul soaked in rules can give. However, his bravery has its hard edges. When the love disappeared, in Erzhoumu's reality without deep emotional accumulation, he quickly retreated to the original form where he loved himself more. He was afraid of the real Lilith whose face was full of cracks due to making Horcruxes. His withdrawal confirms the character background of the original work: when the real test comes, domesticated instincts often overwhelm the courage that sprouts for love. Severus Snape: The bright moon that never shines alone on me As for Severus, a character for whom I have been heartbroken countless times, in fan stories, his "second choice" setting was amplified into a long lag. His deep love is his greatest medal and also his unintentional cruelty. He was good to Lilith, became her godfather, and gave her confidence. There is no doubt about this feeling. But at critical moments, he would always subconsciously choose Harry first. For Lilith, this means "the bright moon is hanging high, not only shining on me". This thorn accurately penetrates into the most contradictory part of Snape's character - his love can last throughout his life and last until death, but it often appears reserved and full of painful entanglements in the moment and in front of specific people. Just like his love for Lily Evans, it can support him to complete the greatest redemption, but he cannot go back to the past to stop that "Mudblood". In the world of fandom, this reserved love becomes the coldest sharp blade that pierces another soul that longs to be illuminated by him alone. Gellert Grindelwald: Ambition greater than love, and complicity in total acceptance The redemption (or rather, another kind of sinking) in the second episode comes from Gellert Grindelwald. The core charm of this Dark Lord, who had a legendary entanglement with Dumbledore in the original work, has never been simple evil, but his ambition that can ignite the world and his insightful wisdom. In fan works, this trait is particularly amplified, and it is also part of his charm. He can be Lilith's father, teacher, lover, and omnipotent accomplice. He accepted the broken yet powerful her and taught her how to use power. This is in the same vein as the charming careerist and politician in the original work. He is ashamed to admit "love" and thinks that this vulgar emotion has tarnished the noble connection between them - isn't this another extreme? For Lilith, what he provides is a kind of soul resonance and recognition that is higher than love. The silent proof of love: redemption accomplished in action My understanding was once so shallow that I thought that if I love someone, I must declare it with my mouth. But both the original work and this fan work tell me: the deepest love is often hidden in the subconscious instinct, engraved in every little thing done for you. Snape expressed love with a lifetime of protection, and Grindelwald expressed love with a hundred years of waiting. As for Draco, the ribbon he tore off was love, and his final retreat was the silent collapse of love under the weight of reality. The greatness of this book is that it does not glorify "love". It shows the various forms of love - some love makes people brave, some love makes people narrow-minded, some love is redemption, some love is binding, and the highest level of love is the resonance of souls that achieve each other but remain independent. It allows us to see how the characters draw completely different life arcs due to different encounters based on the established background. I sincerely hope that Lilith, who has been wandering in the abyss for too long, can be truly embraced by the warm light within three weeks of her eyes, and achieve the perfection she deserves.

I don't know how to evaluate this book. When I saw the name and introduction, I thought it would be crazy. But I read this book because of the double arrows of Draco and Lilith. I didn't expect it to be so crazy. It is really well written, has a good plot, and the writing is good, but the viciousness is also really vicious. When I was obsessed with the beautiful love between Lilith and Draco, I actually had a relationship with Sri Lanka. Although it was only a few chapters and it was unrequited love, it still had a major impact on me? When I read these chapters, I thought I would leave a negative review after finishing it, but the truth is that I can't bear to give a negative review. Lilith is really good because she wanted to save Draco and came to the magical world. She changed again and again. I also endured a lot. I cried blindly when I finished reading it. When I saw the author said that he wanted to end it like this and left a blank, the sky almost fell. Draco also wrote very well and would take the initiative to approach Lilith. When the heroine wanted to retreat, he approached Lilith again and again. I thought I was the kind of girl who dreamed of Draco, a deadly poisonous Yui, but that doesn't count. I still shed tears because of Lilith's love for Draco. I hope that Lilith and Draco can have a good ending. The author must keep writing and don't change his mind because of the readers' words. Although I was very angry when I saw the chapters of He Si Jiao and wanted to curse, but Lilith is really good. I don't want to see Lilith's ending in such a tragic way. I also feel sorry for Draco. Lilith is so good, what would he do without Lilith? The part about becoming a Death Eater in the movie version and the original book is both heart-wrenching. Please don't make people feel so heart-broken in the fanfic.

The author is here for Draco. Why is the heroine becoming less and less special to Draco? 😢 Do you really want to form a CP with Snape?

I came here to read Grindelwald. I have read several of the author's books. They are so good. GG's love is so good that I am almost addicted🤤🤤I really want to read more of GG's favorite novels... Hehe🤤🤤

The author's writing is very good, logical, and the writing style is super, super, super good!!! I really like to watch the heroine and Xiaolong fall in love 💕 In fact, I was a little shocked when I saw the part with the personal trainer, but I can still accept it 💕 I thought that the author would write the ending in the second episode, but I didn't expect that the male protagonist would be changed. , I was halfway through the second week of watching it and found out that the male protagonist had been changed. This was a big shock to me 😢 😢 😢 I didn't watch the plot after that, but I still support the teacher's book [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] The teacher's writing is really beautiful!!! The writing is also very good!!!