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Naruto Has No Masterpieces (Except Dave, Artist, Sister Juan's, and Divine Land)
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The Hokage Has No More Masterpieces to Argue With.
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A New Fanfic That Really Brings Out the Content of Naruto and Has Excellent Writing Style ~
Is there any new Naruto fanfic on Tomato that has novel, strange, surprising content, smooth writing and connotative content? If the number of words is less than 30w, please avoid it~Please give me some advice~
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Naruto Becomes a Rebellious Ninja
Naruto becomes a rebellious ninja, or the male protagonist and Naruto become a rebellious ninja together
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Naruto Was Too Strong and Was Banned
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Looking for High-Quality Naruto Stories
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Is There Any Hokage Who Is at His Peak at the Beginning?
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I Don't Believe There Are No Good Books About Naruto Anymore.
Looking for a good book on Naruto, rated 8 points or above, urban, invincible
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Please Write a Book That Makes Naruto Black, a Huge Black Book
It doesn't require a grand world view, the main thing is to darken, completely changing the kind-hearted Naruto, darkening to the point of being a bit disgusting.
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The writing is very good, especially when it is mentioned in the book that Naruto spent 100 taels of silver to buy rice and 1,000 taels to buy a hairpin for Hinata. And the words "aunt" make me think this is Naruto from the Qing Dynasty era! It smells so much! Full marks, haha
Reasonable, tolerant enough, knowing good and evil, right and wrong. Absolutely top quality.
The rest of the story was unexpectedly exciting. When I looked at the score, I thought it would be about the old routine of contrast and excitement created by Naruto's pure blackening. However, when Naruto, the time-traveler, went from pure revenge for a bad childhood to self-awakening with the goal of overthrowing the sick structure of the ninja world, the plot finally started to become exciting. I look forward to the protagonist's world-changing plan and see if he can attract more fellow travelers with his philosophy, personality, charm and wisdom that transcends the boundaries of the times, instead of relying solely on systematic mechanical deification. With a vision beyond the times, he can obtain more essential power than Otsutsuki based on the plot of the original work. What kind of future world with the characteristics of the ninja world will be shown in the future. (PS: We don't want the old-fashioned pure technological future. What we hope is the ninja world technology that can deduce the characteristics of chakra based on the plot that appears in the original work; the anatomical output of concepts and twisted values in the ninja world hopes to not only impress people in the ninja world, but also give readers who like Naruto a sense of excitement [salute] [salute] [salute])
It must be full marks. Come on, the author. It's so enjoyable to watch. The only drawback is that the protagonist does a lot of big things later and there is no system prompt to add points. However, I can understand that after all, the writing workload will be much greater and I may not be able to focus on content creation. From the time I read this book until now, the author has insisted on updating two chapters every day. From the first chapter to the 380th chapter, the author's writing has always been very exciting, and there is nothing that makes me feel unreasonable. It can be said that the author has a very deep understanding of the Naruto anime. Well-known characters in the anime have appeared in this book. The author can vividly portray the characters in the original book with just a few strokes. I am looking forward to the follow-up plot. I hope the author can Enough to continue creating so that we can see a brand new ninja world, a ninja world without war and pain, without exploitation and domination. I have read more than a dozen Naruto novels on Tomato, and I think this one is the best. Of course, it is just a personal opinion. The specifics still depend on your own preferences. I hope the author can write more chapters to make the novel richer in content and worldview. These are some of my current thoughts.
I think this author writes very decisively, and also has human struggles, unlike other authors who defected, and then all the struggles that day were covered up in one stroke, but it just doesn't have that real taste [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][smile][laugh][laugh][almost crying] But author, you do seem to have some ink stains.
At least four stars. I saw a few comments saying that procrastination feels like malicious comments. Please, what I wrote is about betrayal and ninja. Some psychological activities are very necessary. Is it necessary to have a pig's foot in the first chapter to cheat on Naruto in the second chapter, and then start fighting in the third chapter, then defect in the fourth chapter, and directly fight the six paths in the fifth chapter. Would you feel comfortable writing it this way? Don't pay attention to individual malicious comments. At least so far, the psychological description of the characters, the characterization of the characters, the plot development, as well as the background and environment are all reasonable. If you want to read mindless stories, look for it. There is always a book that can give you an Olivier.
The plot is somewhat similar to another one, Naruto's Defection, but the treatment is more sophisticated, not light-hearted but very real. There is almost no system in this book, and it is mentioned less than five times. It almost all relies on prophets to act. This is quite in line with my expectations, and there is not much room for action. Although each step is very slow, it is very steady. I think it is a good book.
He kills decisively and without hesitation. Being kind to the enemy means being cruel to yourself. Many of the doubts in the original drama have quite reasonable explanations. The protagonist has a clear goal. From becoming a ninja, he became stronger and more tolerant, and later when Konoha collapsed and rebelled against the village, he traveled around the villages and became stronger until he had his own power. In order to change the pattern of ninjas, he became the enemy of the world...
It's very nice to watch. Each character's personality is very detailed. It's normal for them to kill each other even if they have different stances.
I really want to fight for this work! I have dug up another treasure that is seriously underestimated. The score of 6 points is simply ridiculously low. In my heart, it is definitely in the echelon of 9 points or above. You see how solid its growth line is, the battle scenes are so exciting, and the confrontation of ideas between the characters is even more exciting. The most rare thing is that the creation of dark characters is completely non-facial, and the logic is self-consistent enough to completely convince me to accept their transformation. Such a conscientious and good work must be given to everyone!
Okay, if you keep reading, the logic is smooth and the writing is okay, but it's too short. I watched it all at once, and it was so satisfying to see Naruto transform into a black man, but then I lost it.
Very good, killing Tsunade surpasses most anti-Konoha fanfics, and also helps Danzo realize his dream of becoming the 5th Hokage [laughing]
I can only say that the slow pace did affect the rating and screen out some readers. However, the subsequent writing was pretty good and there were shortcomings, but the flaws were not outweighed. The rebellious journey of the rebellious ninja Naruto was very profound.
The reversal is to my liking, but if there is a love line later, could it be more novel to replace the princess with the sister-in-law? I look forward to the author's update.
The protagonist is Naruto. He has been a dog licker for more than ten years and has saved more than 200,000 points to exchange for a fairy body. He has been preparing to defect to Konoha for more than ten years and was hunted down like a lost dog. Even Kakashi went after the protagonist hahahahahahaha. The son of the fourth generation, Kakashi hunted down the protagonist hahahahaha.
Great book, it portrays the world of ninja so well.
It's a very good book. Put yourself in Naruto's shoes and think about his growth experience. It doesn't darken the underlying logic that kindness is really engraved in your bones and cannot be changed. Anyone else would make the normal choice to destroy Konoha and kill those so-called hypocrites.
There was a little delay and a little bit of poison in the beginning, but the defection and fighting in the middle was very interesting. The full story reveals the cruelty of reality very eye-catching. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist has a little double standard, but the problem is not big. It is very interesting and enjoyable.
I had underestimated the many details on the original Naruto screen before, and I didn't notice it. Without thinking about it, I found it very exciting and beautiful. But this author is very careful. During the writing process, many reasons were not explained in the original video, such as why the third generation ignored Naruto! For example, why did Pain and the others have to kill Jiraiya! The author has explained everything and taken it into consideration, very coherently! Follow the advance route. There is no such thing as a dull one, only the protagonist is smart. A very good novel with strong logic. I hope the author will continue to work hard!
I'm not going to brag about it, but the writing is really good, but it requires a lot of pressure, and people who read it need to be more patient. It's a bit more enjoyable after chapter 78, and the details are also very good. The author should update it quickly.
Another piece of gold, 6 points is too low. In my opinion, it is definitely worth 9 points or more. The growth trajectory is reasonable, the battles are passionate, and the concept battle of the characters is also very exciting. The dark character creation is reasonable and can completely convince me. I highly recommend it.
There are still many flaws. But the last few chapters have been really fun. Five stars
The second part is so exciting. It is really the most enjoyable part of all the dark films I have ever seen. The first part doesn't matter, the second part doesn't matter, but the part in the middle about taking revenge on the villagers of Konoha is really interesting.
It's very interesting. I like it best during the Chunin Exam. I used to be weak and had to pretend to be a little sun🔆, but later I endured the humiliation and successfully took revenge. Love this climax part! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]
It's quite good. Although it feels a bit strange in some places and feels like it's missing something, it can be connected at the end. The plot is not that urgent. It's a good book worth reading 🍅
The five-star gang gave the author a rating. Although it did not reach a full score, the book still scored between seven and eight. Disadvantages: The first sixty-odd chapters are basically similar to the original work. The author's settings are basically poisoned by fan fiction, which will make people who like the original work a little unhappy. Others are generally good.
It's OK, it's OK, come on, it's a very good Naruto movie
I think it's quite good-looking. It should be killed and released. It should be released. Create a new world and clean up all the residue of the old world. It's quite good-looking. The Naruto Darkening novel is also good-looking. The rating is a bit low.
It's very good, not procrastinating, it's not the kind of boring story that plays house.
Come on, although the front is indeed boring, but I have enough leisure, the back is okay, and what I do is quite rare in various Naruto stories. I look forward to the follow-up