Traveling Through ***************

Change Bai, the writing style is average → the writing style is excellent, there is almost no description of women's clothing, women's bodies and female degeneration. The heroine of Wanfewang, the second heroine Shaoyue, I don't know if I will take the other girls in the future, the younger sister is not related by blood, Connor is a loli dragon girl, the master is the royal sister wolf girl, the plot is okay, the 53rd chapter becomes a god, and the emotional line of each supporting character and the heroine is well developed. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, I always feel that it will become a lily harem story, tsk tsk.

Feichang is good-looking, Feichang is worth watching, brothers. ❥(ゝω✿ฺ)

After reading it, objectively speaking, I can tell that the author watches everything, both female and male videos. This style is mixed in this book, and the writing is really serious. The writing style is very witty and humorous, and the plot has no flaws. The characters are really three-dimensional, which is the biggest advantage. But first of all, it is necessary to make it clear that the main subject of this book is Lily and the harem, and secondly, it is funny. If you are here to eat sweets and also want to have a lighthearted laugh, this book is undoubtedly a 10 on Tomato. If you are used to reading all kinds of Dragon King novels as a refreshing novel, it is not suitable because it is difficult to have the patience to survive the various foreshadowings and the gradually improving world view and settings. After one hundred chapters, I felt really good. All the heroines had laid the groundwork for the story. They were sending out sweets and posting happy posts. The protagonist also began to take the initiative to take full control of the situation. After the revenge was over, he was decisive in killing without losing any money.

Beautiful, no need to say more. Excellent literary talent, wonderful content, endless fun and enjoyment... Finally, I want to ask, can the author add more updates? ՞˶･֊･˶՞ (Ask a weak question) I sincerely hope this novel becomes a hit.

It seems like this is my first time commenting, and I can't read enough. Apart from anything else, the plot is quite smooth, it is really funny when it should be funny, and it is really touching when it should be moving. The protagonist is not purely decent (in fact, it would be better to be in a different world if he is not very decent), but he is really good to his own people, and even fights for it and sacrifices some immediate interests. I like the fact that the heroines are relatively equal and sincere. I just don't quite understand the author's positioning of the original male protagonist. The villain is certain, but according to the setting, it seems that he will continue to become the final villain BOSS? There is currently no sign of being offline. May I ask the author how long will he exist? It's not that I dislike the fact that the original male protagonist survived until the end and died, but I hope that he can be mentally prepared to avoid the other person who is about to die midway and thinks he will die but does not die in the end. It is a bit disturbing that the villain repeatedly jumps sideways without being mentally prepared. In short, you can log off at any time, and your own pace is the best, but I hope you can let me know. Of course, if you think this is a spoiler, just pretend that I didn't say it.

To be honest, as a love-fight comedy adventure, it's not bad [laughs]. The first dozen or so pictures are actually quite average, but in the end the author figured out how to write, and the writing is really good emotionally. As for the battle, if you are not interested, you can skip it directly. After all, we are not here to watch this [laughs]. There are still some shortcomings, but they vary from person to person. Let me talk about a few points first. First, there are a lot of off-site interactive links, which is the so-called breaking of dimensional walls. Second, Lei Xiang himself was retained, and he could not be moved by forcing the plot to kill him. However, the author also wisely eliminated his role in the future. Basically, there is no such thing as the protagonist in the main perspective. Third, the feelings of some characters are a bit unclear. For example, the younger sister. At first, I really thought she was being bullied, and she also thought she could read the atonement of the Golden Code, but it turned out that it was just the arrogant older sister bullying the humble younger sister [face covering]. Fourth, in order to promote the plot and allow the protagonist to grow, some logic and rationality will be abandoned. Those who like to focus on details may find it poisonous. For me personally, the above is not very poisonous, but some people may think it is poisonous if the protection is not complete, so let me say it in advance. Overall, this is a good lily novel. The emotional description is not bad. You can read it. I hope the author will not cut the book. Ps: I feel like the protagonist should have been a woman in her previous life [face-covering], how can I maintain her character after being introduced to her? How can I maintain such a good character? [Face-covering]. Isn't that venomous mouth the same as starting a fight if they disagree [face-covering], "intermediate acting skills".

I don't want to poke fun at it, the plot is better, and I quite like the characters, meow. Triss Hideyoshi can portray that person in it. I hope there will be more characters like this in the future. That spell to send friends off is really eye-catching to me, it's pretty good~ Recommended ◝(⑅•ᴗ•⑅)◜..°♡

Small poison is pleasant, big poison is one star One of the poisonous points at the moment is that I don't use a very powerful background. I want to do it myself, but I find that I don't have enough brains. In the end, I mess up the matter, kill myself, and then forcibly resurrect myself to promote the plot.

I originally read it just to kill time, but the author wrote it very well. At first, I thought it would be a tit-for-tat confrontation with the male protagonist, and the vigor of playing a big villain, but as it went on, it became more like two funny characters, like a funny and hot-blooded love show. I haven't seen a very heavy one, such as organizing a series to deal with the problem of big brains. Instead, it allowed me to focus on the present that has been light and funny and sometimes passionate. It is very suitable for a retired person like me [Like] Unlike that kind of extreme description of a certain character, even the villain in this book has a personal image, which is very three-dimensional, just like a real story.

According to the Tomato rating, this book, so far, I think it is capable of getting 9 points. It is a lily post with a Western fantasy worldview. It is quite well written and of high quality. As for the writing style, it overall gives people a sense of humor, which I quite like. Now the score is obviously low.

This is my favorite novel, five stars directly

Not bad, not bad. I really like watching it. Don't stop updating it.

Why is the rating so low?

Good-looking, green, non-toxic [eat melon]

It would be best if you are a hundred queens [laughs]

The new book Lily is beautiful

Emmmmmmmmm... To be honest, I really like the style of this book. I hope the author can write more leisurely. I saw grass growing from the grave of a hundred generations ago („ಡωಡ„) After all, grass has grown...[Awkward laughter]

It's so beautiful. This is what I want to see.

It's delicious 😋, my rating will not be low in the future

It's an excellent work. The author really writes it with all his heart. We, the seniors in high school, are forced to start reading books every four weeks. I hope it won't stop updating. It doesn't matter if it's slower. Come on, author [I understand]

It's very interesting. Some of the protagonist's psychological activities are very interesting. Overall, it's a fun novel.

I think the sex-changing spell can be saved for later use when giving birth to children.

Isn't it just a five-star rating? Here it is!

It's beautiful, I hope I can see it finished

Looks good. I like this.

Very good, full marks in my mind.

Why was it banned if it wasn't Chapter 10? What are you talking about?

Looks good, but I don't like the lolita

We don't know if we can still be resurrected, but the Five First Stars have [punched][punched]

Good luck to the author, it's so hard to find a good book