Honor 1453

First of all, I am very grateful to all the readers who have supported and read, and I also hope that everyone can give criticism and suggestions [crying] [crying] I myself also find that my works are too literary and indeed a bit obscure. If there are any shortcomings, you can criticize them severely, such as why I can't stand it after reading it, etc. [I learned it] [I learned it] I will accept it with an open mind

I have read many chapters, and I really feel that the author is thoughtfully imagining it. I have an uncontrollable mood while reading it. I feel that Constantine is really trying his best to change, but the ending of fate is always unknown and cruel.

The writing style is excellent, but the vocabulary is a little too much. Often the first description is enough to express the atmosphere, but the subsequent description is too complicated and a bit wordy. In fact, it can be described in outline; and in the description of the scene, more emphasis is placed on the image, artistic conception and atmosphere, and it is slightly ignored. Practical; there are also some foreign language words that appear in the text. If they have been translated in China, it is best to use the translation according to convention, which can better improve the reading experience; there are also too many words when describing the dialogues or actions of the characters. It cannot be used without it, but it is best not to use too many words. But it is indeed a good book. The writing is excellent, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are rich. When reading, you can feel the things the author wants to express. It can be seen that the author has worked hard and has a good reading experience.

The writing is great, I hope the author can continue to update [crying][crying][crying] Jingluo really makes me cry after reading it

What a great book. I haven't read such a immersive novel in a long time. I finished reading it in one day [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] and I reached the climax. The author has written a lot more [Sending Hearts]

It's very immersive, especially the description of the environment in the late Byzantine period, which gave me the feeling of the despair before the end of the Romans.