One Punch************

It's very good. There are no poisonous points for the time being. It's quite smooth. At first glance, it's not written by AI. The AI ​​doesn't know how to use letters. At first glance, it's just sitting around and being lazy and doesn't want to type a few more letters.

The writing is pretty good and interesting, but there is a bit little plot about the two heroines. This is what we want to see! There is no need for a transition of several years in the early stage. You can definitely write some development. The love between the two heroines feels a bit too little now. Let's play it normally in the follow-up. Can you improve the heroine more? Legal Lolita and Royal Sister are really fun, and Tatsumaki should be allowed to conceive the child first, after all, she is the older sister [laughing] ? ? ? Under what circumstances was it removed?

Pure and ultimate cool writing

Not bad, just a little less!

Very satisfied with the hard work of the author.

The author's writing is very nice and not toxic at all.

It looks so good. I love watching it. I watch it every day.

It looks good, you love watching it, and that's it.

Give a five-star support!

So far it's all good, I just wonder what the plot will be like in the future. If there isn't any special plot or world travel, it probably won't take long. After all, it can be said to be invincible.

Yes, it's quite fun to learn. He doesn't overwhelm his fighting ability.