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I have read Qizhang three times and I don't know how to describe it. Bao Bao's writing is really good. He has a strong sense of immersion. The feeling of being hesitant and trapped deeply makes me feel trapped. I feel that if it continues, it will be a very good book. The author's writing style is also good.

A book that particularly suits my personal taste 🥺... Very beautiful writing... The injuries suffered by the heroine in the past have resulted in a character as fragile as a cub. There are no particularly gorgeous sentences, but I can feel the emotions the author and teacher want to express. The heroine is as sad as drowning in the deep sea and suffocating, and the male protagonists are attracted to the heroine and are more careful in their care and love. I hope the writing will get better and better, and the heroine will also get better and better!

That's awesome, who can understand! , So beautiful, the writing is superb It made my nose feel sore during the show several times😭 The lingering sadness in the heroine is so heartbreaking to watch. I was disappointed with reality and myself. The constant pain drove me crazy. In order to escape and stop suffering, I tried my best to leave. Superficial concern and sight will not only fail to heal, but will also deepen the pain. But at this time, my brother appears. I have never learned to care about others, but I know how to care for my sister, and I will put aside my dignity to learn. I feel like that It doesn't matter, please rely on me to your heart's content, please feel free to be angry and coquettish with me, please ask for anything from me willfully, I will accept everything from you, I will always be by your side, I love you Brother and sister are so delicious, authoritative brother and sister✊

Teacher, don't give up. It's really good. It's the first time I read this type of novel. I like it so much. Don't give up. You must let the heroine have a lot of fun and have a good ending. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Wow wow wow, the writing style is so great, it has the feeling of being clear and elegant, like a single flower after the rain in early spring! Not greasy at all! The overall concept is also very novel, it is reverse redemption! Baby, baby, I'll give you a kiss, mom, mom, I'll give you a kiss twice

I like my sister so much, it totally blows my mind. The author writes the sister baby very vividly🥹

The subject matter of this book is very novel. The heroine is an ordinary or even dishonorable character. (There is even a tendency to be depressed and seek death, which is in line with the current state of young people.) Being able to relate to those aristocratic figures from top wealthy families, and even seeing the bright moon in the sky, it is like trying to run into the ditch. 😊😊😊

It's really, really beautiful. How can you write such fluent and fluent prose? It's really comfortable and comfortable to write, especially the heroine's thoughts. It's not stiff at all, it's easy to understand. The setting is also very interesting. You must work hard, author🥹🥹🥹

Super beautiful article, so delicately written. I kept crying when I saw it. I hope my sister will get better and better.

Wow wow wow, this is simply a fairy tale. I am craving for the men in it. The writing is so touching, but there is just a bit too little and not enough to read. Why does such an immortal product come from Zhou Geng? This is the first time I read a story about the male protagonist Nv Ning. It's really not vulgar at all, and it doesn't deliberately dwarf the male character. It's really well written! Highly recommended, no surprises at all

It's not enough to watch, but it's really beautiful! Teacher, in addition to eating three meals a day, getting enough sleep, and being in a happy mood, you can write for me and write hard. [Adoration]

This theme is really new! ! ! ! In fact, I was secretly attracted by the cover (poke finger) What the teacher wrote is really good. I will follow it forever. Wubao is really cute, she is a completely cloud-raised daughter! I can understand the entanglement in her heart, so when she encounters love, she will be terrified and will use hurtful words to avoid help around her. However, she needs love but dare not love again. The hurt she received when she was a child is too deep, thick and mean. When facing love, she will feel sad that it is just a dream before the match burns out (⋟⋞) And each character creation is really delicate. Teacher, I can't get enough of it! I hope Wu Bao can be filled with love and fill his heart ~

Wu Wu and brother are so cute (*/ω＼*) brother and sister are so delicious😋😋 Brother guides the younger sister to pamper her step by step, making her dependent on her, and discovers that the bossy young men are as scary as sugar beets! The author's writing style is very delicate, and it always gives me an indescribable feeling when I read the book. Everyone can enter with confidence (clearance🆙‼️: The pace of this article is slow, the heroine's mood is very unstable in the early stage, and sometimes her attitude towards people is very bad, 🈲It's rotten, if you can't accept it, just leave it, see the end of the first chapter for more clearance‼️) I wish you all a happy eating [Blow kiss] [Love]

Demining: I only watched a little bit, and I feel like the protagonist has control over it. The demining point is that I personally don't like that the first kindness (a large proportion of characters) received by a protagonist with a mental illness after coming to a different world in an abnormal mental state comes from a male character with a beautiful appearance and a similar age. Of course, things have two sides. The protagonist is in a bad mental state. It is understandable that the author does not want the female character who is always rescuing and rescuing in various novels to play this part. But equally, once written, it is indeed at the level of Bai Yueguang. Ps: The author's introduction is about full redemption, so what I am thinking of is a strong same-sex friendship, kinship, and sexual relationship (it does not mean that the relationship between a woman and a man is not strong in the novel world written by the female protagonist. The author wrote about dog training, so the master-pet relationship is also very strong!) If I understand it wrong, then I am in the wrong place. (My understanding: If the title says "heartthrob" and the introduction says "love at first sight", then there will always be a reliable girl among these dozen)

It's so beautiful [crying] There is a very peaceful feeling when reading a big book. Baby Xiaowu is so pitiful. Brother and sister must always be together [crying] Brother is like a beam of light, giving hope to sister. The few men who are currently on the show don't have any surprises. They are all suave and handsome. I like brother very much. I hope that sister will no longer be so inferior and cautious in the end [crying] [crying] [crying]

It is a rare heroine setting, but the description may be a bit boring and depressing for many people. At least in the later period, I saw a little change, and the heroine started to become lively. I also read it in several chapters in one day. I felt that the heroine's baby was actually great. However, it is normal for people with severe depression to be unable to recover and even need to rely on medicine throughout their lives. It's just that the progress is very slow at the moment. Maybe my brother kissed me after 59 chapters🤔Then the other small percentage, if we want to collect 15, according to the current progress, it will have to be at least several hundred chapters😂 Come on, author! ! ! !

Very gentle book The heroine, who is not perfect or even has serious mental illness, is actually just a person who needs sunshine and rain to grit her teeth and survive. It's just that she is tired and wants to take a nap, but she still has a little expectation, hoping that someone can wake her up gently. I don't know how it will develop in the future, but I like the heroine very much. I hope she can be "redeemed" and gain happiness. Every girl has the right to happiness. I hope you will always smile. All in all, it looks great! ! !

I think the author's writing style is quite good in Tomato. But one thing I don't quite understand is that the heroine sometimes thinks about keeping a distance from her brother, knowing that she may have a sister-in-law in the future, but in the next chapter, the heroine seems to have completely forgotten this psychological activity, and still hugs her brother at close range (I know that the heroine may be longing for someone to accompany her due to psychological factors), but this is also very contradictory. I don't see the "entanglement" and "psychological pull" that the heroine has before hugging her brother. So what's the point of arranging the previous psychological activities? Including the subsequent plot development, the heroine hugged the wrong person. The heroine knew that it was not appropriate to hug her brother in front of a third person, so the heroine decided to hug her brother in private when no one was around? From this perspective, it really makes me feel a little inappropriate. I feel that the heroine also knows that there must be a sense of boundaries between step-siblings, but "I" have depression and I long for company, so I can boldly post in private when no one is around? So what about the previous psychological activities in which you agreed to keep a distance from your brother? I feel like the logic here doesn't flow, and my thoughts and actions are a bit contradictory and disconnected [eating melon] Of course, the above are my little thoughts and opinions. I'm not denying Quan Wen'ang, the author's writing is pretty good, and the description of the male characters and the heroine's tangled, sensitive and fragile character are very well written [Sending Hearts]

So pretty. [Crying][Crying][Crying] Forgive me for my poor words, I am a very picky person, but this book is really good to read, believe me The author must not give up. I don't know how many times I have done this. I would be really heartbroken when I encounter such a beautiful book and it will be discontinued immediately. [Cry][cry][cry]

It can be seen that the author really writes with great care, the writing style is delicate, and I feel that every word I read is the essence🥰🥰The book cover does not use AI pictures, and it is highly praised [send heartfelt][send heartfelt] Goddess, have you stopped writing? I can no longer comment. This book is no longer displayed on your homepage. You wrote well. Thank you for writing this book. I was really happy when I read it. I wish you happiness every day too.

It's so well written, every character is very three-dimensional. Baby girl is in so much pain, happiness please fall into A Wu's hands Why is it necessary to design a plot where the heroine is caught doing handicrafts? It's so suffocating, scary, and uncomfortable. Why is it like this? I don't understand. It doesn't need to be used. It's obviously better.

The heroine is different, that is, the male protagonist appears too little now, and even more so when the number of words is so small, I encountered it. The days of waiting for the update are so painful [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry], come on, the writing is very good ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з

I go, I really like the male protagonist created by the author, and the female protagonist is so cute and cute [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart], the author must not stop updating it! ! ! , I really like it! ! ! !

Tasty. (Although there are only two short words, it reveals a hint of aloofness and insouciance. The full stop at the end is polite and alienated, which appropriately shows the noble and elegant temperament) Other reviews will be posted later! 😘 The heroine is wearing it! All the male characters are clean! In the original plot, the male protagonists had no emotional connection with the original female protagonist. The main reason is that I feel a little uncomfortable when the author stops updating. Last time, I said it would be updated by the end of January, and now it says it will be updated on February 10th. OK! As long as you don't give up. + He talks about abandoning the pit in such a high-sounding way, haha

Good-looking and good-looking. Compared with another book I read before, this heroine's behavior is at least consistent with that of a heroine with depression and world-weariness. It can be seen that the author is very careful in shaping the character of the heroine, instead of treating the heroine as a decoration to seek death, only to use it when necessary. The only drawback is that it is too slow, and sometimes it is easy to get the chapters wrong.

It is rare to find a common female heartthrob. Generally speaking, it focuses on describing the emotional line. This book repeatedly emphasizes the mental problems of the female protagonist. It is so real that it is like personal experience. The plot is slow but the flow is long and the writing is good. The male protagonist has a total of 15. God, even if you eat every day, one male protagonist can play 24 times in a year. Speaking of 1v1, it is still a happy reunion. It's a bit too slow. I keep talking about the heroine's various ways to seek death, jumping off buildings, hitting walls, going on hunger strikes and drinking medicine, hurting herself and hurting others. It's too depressing to watch. Although the author said the intention is redemption, it makes people uncomfortable when watching it. Goodbye

It's so delicious. If you like to dig into the details, you can just jump in. The logic, plot, and characters are all so exciting! I love the pulling scene so much! ! ! !

I can really sympathize with the heroine's repeated conflicts and sensitivity to some small things. The author has grasped the psychology of many heroines very well! ! And my brother's setting is delicious! ! ! ! ! It smells amazing [shy]

It's simply a fairy product! ! ! So pretty! Hope there will be more posts! Totally not enough!

Holy shit, it's so, so, so beautiful. The writing is so good. I can't usually describe the feeling. I felt it when I read this book. It's really good. The plot is also very good. It's not unconventional at all. Holy shit, I really want to give this rating a thousand. Ten thousand stars, very, very attractive. I have been reading books for a long time. I have been short of books recently. I accidentally saw this book and read it for a while. Who knows how happy I am? I love it so much🥰🥰🥰🥰 Author, I will support you all my life! ! ! ! ! ! ! I love it so much, come and see it! ! ! ໒꒰ྀི ´ ꒳ ` ྀི꒱১