As a Person in Hokage, What's Wrong with Cultivating Immortality?

Green LV4, 24.75 Points Start + follow-up: 3+2 Writing + Creativity: 4+2 Plug-in + setting: 2+2 Rhythm + main line: 3+2 Details + logic: 4+0 Extra: green and below Feelings: In the 2.0 Era, romance novels that ignore the gap in combat power and put on the skin of Naruto feel full of malice to me! Calculation: 5×1.5+6×1.25+13×0.75=24.75 Seventeenth Edition Added (Test)

I can give full marks. The idea is very novel. The protagonists of the Naruto novels I read before are often from God's perspective. From the beginning, I know that there is a big boss behind it. Everything develops along the original plot, and they all like to turn the original bad guys into good guys and make the good guys go into darkness. Show, the perspective of the protagonist of this book is that he doesn't know what will happen in the future. Just like us who watched Naruto in the beginning, we watched Naruto grow up, get married and have children. Of course, there are some poisonous points in the plot. The cheats for cultivating immortals either set the threshold higher or the intensity lower, so that even if the protagonist intends to pass Broadcast, the combat system will not collapse too quickly, and the thinking of the islanders is a bit abstract. From the many Japanese comics I have read, I can say that their three views have some problems, a bit like diodes, either the extreme left or the extreme right. For example, if the protagonist spreads the method of cultivating immortals, they will view things because of their way of looking at things. If the style is different, it will turn into a demon or the like, so even if the protagonist wants to spread the word, he will consider whether it will cause any adverse effects. This is also an idea provided by me. After all, I think the method Itachi uses to solve the relationship between the family and the village is the same as 2b, which is not what people with normal views can think of.

See Chapter 26. The early stage is really good, the writing is interesting, and everything is very real. It was removed from the bookshelf after 26 chapters. The protagonist was a freshman in high school before time travel, but was under 5 years old after time travel, and ended up falling in love with a 5-year-old child [face covering] If you like the book, please continue reading. I'm sorry that I can't accompany you. Let's lower it a little bit

It is a breath of fresh air among Naruto cultivating works. It is a slow-burning type. There are no awesome plug-ins. The IQ is also online. It is worth watching. However, there are too few updates every day, which is not enough to watch.

It's really good-looking. The description of the growth of the original characters is also full, and the various sub-plots are also new and original. The most important thing is that the style is not dull or dark, and has the author's own rhythm. It is rare to see this kind of article on Tomato that makes me relax and enjoy it. This is what I think is a refreshing article.

It can be seen that the author is writing the book very seriously. There is a shadow of those sacred books at the beginning of the millennium. 🍅Most of the books in it are about the circuit, and I found a new circuit. The plot is as messy as a running account. There are few authors who polish the plot so carefully, without deliberately digging holes, without confusing suspense, and the rhythm of the story is very smooth. Don't rush the author, take your time, the edge of a sword comes from sharpening, and slow work comes from careful work.

It's a very nice book. The story also explains that "the development of things does not depend on human will." It is not too pretentious. In terms of strength, it improves slowly in the early stage and starts to fly in the mid-term. Nor is it like some authors who always think about being a traitor and have no feelings for their country and country. There are definitely people with scores above 8.5, Maybe it's because they weren't passionate enough in the early stages and the writing wasn't exciting enough, so the score is low.

It's quite distinctive. As for the author's pen name, which is similar to Shi Potian's, it's still worth recommending.

So pretty, so pretty. It's just that the plot is a bit too fast.

The heroine is very friendly, considerate, and self-sacrificing. She doesn't involve others when she has her own problems. Naruto is very capable, supports his brothers, endures alone, and will go to both sides for his brothers when trouble comes. The protagonist is very smart, comparable to Cao Chong. He thinks before acting and speaks clearly at critical moments.

Give me some encouragement and keep trying.

I give 4 points for the plot. It's pretty good. I don't know if it can continue to be maintained in the future. I just don't need eunuchs. [Punch]

A very good Naruto novel, not a novice novel, very interesting

It's okay, you can keep watching.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I saw what was written in Chapter 12: There is indeed the impulsiveness and recklessness of young people, and the character of the protagonist is reasonable, come on

Good books, good books, good books [like][like][like]

The story is good, worth reading

Not bad, very pretty

The plot is reasonable and not too toxic.

Wood escape, a blocking technique...

Hahahahahahahahahahahaha

It's okay, I can accept some flaws.

Why doesn't the protagonist know about monkeys? Everyone knows the Tiangang method, but they don't know the identity of the monkey?

Emmmm, I can watch it anyway.

It's okay, but the enemies in the back are a bit unsightly and can be strengthened.

Oh oh oh touch! Cuckoo quack! Brother's pressure! Brother's thunder pressure!

This intervention is quite novel and meaningful.

It looks good. The new angle is different from the previous books. Come on.

It's very pretty, [laughs evilly], you can become a little bit more awesome with practice.