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It's really good to read. Except for the fact that the male protagonist is a little grumpy at the beginning, which may be because the author is immature at the beginning. Later, the author's writing skills are getting better and better, and the male protagonist turns into a little snake. It is really a book worth reading. It has a positive outlook and good writing. It can be said to be an enjoyable book. Everyone's characters are also maintained very well, the outlook is also very good, and everyone has their own characteristics. It's really nice [thinking] But I still hope that the female protagonist will be more authoritative [shy] and the male protagonist will be more obedient to the female protagonist. I have read it all at once. I hope the author will read more. I really want to read more and I am very hungry for your articles.

It's very beautiful. Su Qinghan and Jiaoyu made me want to cry when I saw it. Especially when Su Qinghan said she would sacrifice herself voluntarily, I felt very sad. I beg you that the ending won't be like be. Say important things three times, no! Don't want! Don't want!

It's really good to watch, and it doesn't deliberately criticize a certain character. Although I watched it as someone who hates characters, to be honest, I felt really uncomfortable watching it, because in my perception, no matter how you say it, it is the work of the original author. The result is because of your dislike, and then what was originally said. The so-called decent characters will turn into villains in your book. I don't say how annoying they are, but they are very unpleasant. However, in the author's book, there are no bad characters. Oops, there are too many to describe them. Anyway, they are good-looking and good-looking\(//∇//)\

It's very good-looking. I have high points. It's worth updating. It's really good-looking. I've read a lot of Douluo fanfics. This is the first time I've seen such a new setting. The writing is also good. But I hope the male protagonist doesn't sacrifice himself and then the female protagonist is resurrected. Otherwise, it feels like the original Tang San Xiaowu who changed his gender. But it's really good-looking. I don't quite understand why the latest chapters I read have nothing to do with Douluo. Another story suddenly appeared. What's going on?

To be honest, I don't really like this mother. I don't really like my mother's behavior or anything like that, I just don't think she understands me very well... It just makes me feel a little bit uneasy, ah, yes, it is uneasy. It's either that I [personally] can't eat knives, or [personally] I don't understand it very well. I [personally] still hope that the author can change it. In addition to this book, it is still very good, especially the characters and CP of the male protagonist and female protagonist are very good! The writing style of the characters is also very good! The anchor also likes it very much, and finally let me see this beautiful new book in this circle! The author is great, come on! (The above summary is all expressed from a [personal] point of view. Please do not bring it in on your own! If you don't like it, don't criticize it! It is all from a [personal] point of view. The main reason is that the anchor is afraid of being exposed by the Internet.) Also, I [personally] am very, very picky about books. Just a little bit doesn't make me... Hard to accept. I will delete this book because I [personally] am very, very picky.

Nice! ! ! Please give me a boost, the author. It's been a long time since I've read a novel that discredits the original work and doesn't dismantle the original CP. [Sending heartfelt messages] [Blowing kisses] Help score points

Very, very beautiful! ! ! ! ! I finally met a great heroine. I don't criticize or flatter Tang San. The author quickly coded [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] It's really good.

It's so good. Who understands the feeling of wanting to read it? [Shy] The plot of the teacher is so exciting. I'm really stuck in this book and can't get out. This book will definitely become popular if I recommend it more. Don't worry, teacher. I haven't read such a masterpiece for a long time.

Wow, this book is really beautiful. It didn't dismantle the original CP. The plot is very interesting and the author is also very nice.

Very very beautiful! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] Both the characters and the author in the book are very, very cute! I like [love] [love] [flying kiss] very much. I hope the author will update more often. He will neither be too tired nor idle [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [please update] Come on, author! Love you! [Love][Blow kiss] Author, do you dare to suddenly update a hundred chapters and scare me? The kind that will shock me for ten lifetimes! ! ! [Sending Hearts](っ◔◡◔)っ ♥

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my gosh, it's really, really beautiful! I like it so much! This is the first time I've been looking forward to an updated novel so much! Ahhhh, I really want to read it all in one go, but I just haven't finished it yet. Hehe, I like Jiaoyu & Su Qinghan (soft and cute & doting on my wife as much as she lives), I must drink it! Strong push, strong push, strong push, strong push, strong push, strong push, strong push, strong push! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Shy][Shy][Shy][Send your heart][Send your heart][Laugh][Laugh][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart][Send your heart] Heart][Sending heart][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Significant laughter][Devious laughing][Devious laughing][Devious laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Laughing][Send heart] Very nice! I like! ! ! ! !

As the female protagonist, this novel is very friendly to me, and it does not split the official CP. As a person who loves CP, it is also an original male protagonist. However, I may not like the role of the heroine's mother. Her desire for control is a bit too strong. I may prefer that the heroine can grow up on her own, and then in the confused period, the heroine's mother can provide some help to the heroine. But overall it is still good. The author will work hard to complete it!

It's so beautiful, the heroine's baby is so cute [blowing kiss]

Beautiful! ! ! [KISS][Love] I like the heroine's character very much I would like to ask where to send gifts from? [Hold face] I could still give it to you last time [Hold face]

The writing is still very good, but I feel that the male protagonist is very yandere. I haven't read it all yet. If you like yandere novels, you can read it. I have read many Douluo novels, but this one is the only one that does not criticize the characters in the book. Still quite satisfied.

It's quite interesting. It's a fanfic about Douluo Dalu. The plot is not too deviant. The male and female protagonists are super sweet, and the girl is strong and the boy is strong. Some of the scenes are super touching. I re-wrote a pair of CPs. It's very interesting. They are Shuang Jie. I wish Su Qinghan and Jiaoyu to be happy forever! ! !

It looks good😄 but don't sacrifice, don't sacrifice, don't sacrifice, please author [cry] [cry] [cry] I will cry to death [cry] [cry] [cry]

The plot is reasonable and not brainless. I finally found a good book in the Tomato Douluo series. The author is very grateful. Seeing it now, I feel like reading the main text. The protagonist's growth line is clear and his language expression ability is very strong.

Not bad ᕕ(ᐛ)ᕗThe heroine's strong identity has the entire Wuhun Palace behind her The heroine's mother is even more powerful It's so hard to have CP

The writing is so beautiful that the author is dying? I obviously saved up for a long time and finished reading it in one afternoon. Who knows the sense of redemption when I scroll back and see the yellow button [crying] [crying] [crying] It's gone. I'm going to be angry. The author please update it quickly. Please

The plot development space is reasonable and well-founded, and there is no contradiction at all. The plot is rich and colorful, and the description is very detailed. I like it very much. The male protagonist is very straightforward, has a mouth, is a little perverted, and is thoughtful. The female protagonist is very shy, but very soft-hearted. As long as the male protagonist is not too excessive, he will basically agree. The author's writing style is very good and very cute. For example, at the end of this chapter, you will see the author's lovely speech. Very beautiful, I like it very much🥰

I like that the heroine is invincible and strong. No one feels as strong as her. The hero and heroine are a bit weird and clingy, but that's okay_(:з∠)_At the moment, the whole book is quite interesting. I hope it won't be unfinished in the future (›´ω`‹) and can the author update it more quickly? [Blowing kiss]

Originally, I had never read anything like Douluo Continent and Fairy Ye Luoli. This time I wanted to read it on a whim because I found this book to be quite interesting! [Admiration][Admiration][Admiration] The heroine's martial soul is a mirror, and the background is very powerful. She is a Douluo enshrinement hall. The heroine's mother is a Narcissus enshrinement. Her biological mother is Bibi Dong. I don't know who her father is yet. Like Xiao Wu, the male protagonist is a 100,000-year-old soul beast, and his true form is a snow snake. He dares to pursue love and kisses and hugs the female protagonist every day. [Shy][Admiration] In summary, this book is very interesting, and I plan to continue to read more [Shy]

It looks good, it doesn't have the original CP removed like others, it looks so good [top post] Teacher's article must become popular

It feels pretty good and looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author.

The author's writing is very beautiful, the heroine is very strong, and she has CP. It looks really enjoyable! [Sending my heart]

It's a super, super, super good-looking article. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are very well written. Each person's character is very special. I strongly recommend this article (I haven't read a lot of it) [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

Looks good, keep it up, remember to kick me when it's over [laughs]

It's really great. It's the best book I've ever read.

This is really good-looking. The characters added to the original plot are not obtrusive at all, but more interesting. The original CP is not removed. It is really good-looking. However, I am a little curious about San's reaction when he sees that Jiaojiao is the young highness of Wuhun Palace [smirk] [smirk]