The Unexpected Person in the Red Mansion

It's very interesting, there are no cheats, and the writing is very realistic. From the beginning when the heroine and his wife had no choice but to ask Lin Ruhai for help, to the series of arrangements Lin Ruhai made after learning about Daiyu's experience in Jia's family, we can see a father's love for his daughter. Xue Baochai and Shi Xiangyun are just as annoying as in the original work. I didn't mean to discredit them. They are just like that. Sister Lin's official matchmaking arrangement is also very good. I hope to write less about the Jia family. Daiyu doesn't live in the Jia family anymore. The Jia family's affairs can be mentioned in one sentence, focusing on the Lin family and Daiyu. Who would know that I would be happy to find out that it was updated, and when I saw it, it was the Jia family again. . . . There used to be a similar article next door. It was nominally based on Daiyu. I had to spend money to buy it. It also described the affairs of Wang Xifeng of the Jia family in a large space. The readers stopped and the author finally wrote the article.

There are not many chapters in the new book, and it seems very comfortable at the moment. It is not influenced by the TV series Red Mansions and whitewashes Xue Baochai. This is very rare as a derivative book of Red Mansions. Mo Wan, a modern time traveler, does not have many roles. If more mother and daughter get along, interact, and the delicate aspects of family life will be more interesting, it will also fill the regrets and gaps that Daiyu lacks in the original book ~ Give it a try, and I am very much looking forward to the new chapters...

It's really well written. The author really looks at it from an outsider's perspective. It's difficult to write Red Mansions, and it's even harder to write it beautifully. Many people who write The Red Mansions like to make their protagonist compete with Bao Dai. But this article is different. It can be seen that the author loves Daiyu very much. She does her best to take care of Sister Lin, and does not stand out or challenge. Sister Lin is her mountain of admiration and her fairyland. She is willing to be a member of Sister Lin's family, give her the affection she needs most, and work hard for her lifelong happiness.

It's beautiful. It's a very standard fanfic and gives Daiyu a good ending. Some people say that Xue Baochai is smooth. Don't tarnish this word. A smooth person will steal someone's boyfriend, embroider bellybands or underwear for other boyfriends, spread out clothes to show men the locks, put labels on friends, and spread rumors everywhere to smear friends? Showing motherly love in front of orphans? Stabbing in the back and turning the crab feast into his own, walking 10,000 steps a day and hooking up with other people's boyfriends day and night? There are many things that you can only understand when you grow up. . If you really become friends with her, you will be cheated to death, and you will be betrayed without even knowing it [smile] This is all in the book, not the TV series that does not praise the beauty and belittle the daughter. Only the first 80 chapters of Cao Gong are original works, and the last 40 chapters are also fanfics, which is no different from this kind of fanfiction. In the Spring and Autumn writing style, Cao Gong hated this character so much that he wrote it opposite to Daiyu. Unfortunately, most people have been brainwashed by the magic-reformed TV series. They say Lin Daiyu is short-tempered every day, but in fact, she doesn't show her temper to other people at all in the book.

What a great book, why is the rating so low? Thanks to the author for changing those regrettable people and things in the Red Mansion; thanks to the author for not letting the time traveler become the protagonist, but silently guiding Daiyu. The butterfly effect has made more people change their destiny. The adaptation is reasonable, the writing is wonderful, the plot is not sluggish, and the description and evaluation of the characters in the Red Mansion do not deviate from the original work, but it gives them a better and more reasonable ending. I only reviewed it after reading it. I saved it and thanked the author.

I think this book can be rated above nine points. After reading so many Red Mansions fan novels, different protagonists have different positions, but the ending of this one can be said to be just right. There are no regrets, and not everyone is very happy, but they have their own endings according to their personalities, as if their endings should be like this originally. The time traveler Mo Wan is very ordinary. She is really an ordinary person. She is not as sharp and smart as the time travel girl occasionally. If you don't know that she is a time travel girl, you will think that she is really an ordinary ancient woman. What I like most is that Tanchun did not go to get married. The one he got married to was Nan'an Prince's own daughter, who was then sacrificed. Tanchun relied on Daiyu to fight for a good marriage with himself. Daiyu's daughter finally married back to the Lin Mansion, which is equivalent to Lin Ruhai's descendants not being adopted nephews, but eventually returning with his own blood.

The writing is very good, and it is not like the coaxing of those time-travelers, nor is it like those in the Red Mansion who said they were saving Daiyu, but ended up turning Daiyu into a useless vase. This feeling is more in line with a time-traveling woman, and it is more of a rescue, and it does not forget that Daiyu is the protagonist who changed her life.

This angle is very novel and interesting. I first read Red Mansions when I was in junior high school. I was too young to read the poems and the intrigues of the characters in the book. I only read Bao Dai's love tragedy from the most superficial perspective. At the time, I also felt that the characters' language in the story was a bit strange, but I only understood it as the difference between the times and dialects. I did not understand that these strangenesses are the author's truest expression. Fortunately, this story angle peels away the surface that Cao Gong hides with nobility and reserve, and directly displays the true side of the character in front of the readers, [Like]

I want to give the author a big ten stars! Thanks to her for giving my favorite Wang Xifeng and Lin Daiyu a perfect ending! When I first watched The Red Mansion, I wondered why Lin Daiyu fell in love with Jia Baoyu, who was so affectionate and irresponsible, and why she died for her? He is simply unworthy! Moreover, with such a high official position as Lin Daiyu's father, it is impossible not to pave the way for the only bloodline! There is also the spicy Phoenix Wang Xifeng. I think she is my ideal work partner, with strong mobility and high emotional intelligence! The Lin family and the eldest princess' family in the article are really good to Daiyu and cultivate her lively and cheerful character! The male protagonist's first love scene is really very graphic, and I can't help but laugh out loud every time I watch it! It's great to be young!

Personally, I feel that compared to other fanfics, this one is a very good and detailed description of the plots against Daiyu in Dream of Red Mansions, and Daiyu has also gone from "relying" on Jia's family to seeing the true face of everyone in Jia's family. Anyone can love Jia Baoyu. Daiyu's character has not been significantly changed, and the good plots that will happen to her and the poems she speaks The clips are all there. I hated the character "Xue Baochai" before reading the clips of Dream of Red Mansions. At that time, I never understood why I didn't like her. In this book, I saw that she was targeting Daiyu and wanted a good reputation. It made me see clearly why I hate her. It turns out that I hate someone so intuitively. Daiyu is well-versed in the world, talented and vigilant, and her love for Baoyu is limited to etiquette. If her mother and father were still alive, she would be very happy.

The characters' personalities are very consistent, and the official couple is also restrained and polite without forcing love. This is the best step in adapting Red Mansions so far. The author is also very humble and polite. I recommend it. If you completely break away from the unrealistic ideas of the four major families, break away from the characteristics of the times, and write fan fiction with an unbridled disregard for etiquette, it can only be said to be very low-level. Therefore, I am very happy that the whole book does not allow Daiyu to develop into a completely out of character person, nor is there a domineering CEO in ancient clothes forcing love. Under the trend of feudal ethics and the collapse of the building, the beautiful character has achieved his own righteousness. It has nothing to do with golden fingers or heaven, but only objectively and best protects Daiyu's growth when possible and in line with the common sense of the times.

The novel has the author's unique insights, and his preferences for each character are obvious. Readers who like to see group portraits should be mentally prepared. Basically, it is written around Daiyu, the original plot, and the direction of changing the endings of each girl. The male and female protagonists (referring to Lin Mo) basically have no sense of existence. But the writing style is very good, and it fits the atmosphere of Dream of Red Mansions very well, but it is not literate or pretentious. The full text is short, and the main plot is written concisely and concisely. It makes a lot of things come true, but it is a pity that each character is not fleshed out enough. It would be better if the text were longer, the male and female protagonists were more three-dimensional, and there were more stories.

Not bad, the Dream of Red Mansions fanfic is very good, warm and daily-oriented, not so many things.

This is really the best Red Mansion fanfic I have ever read. It's not that his writing style is so thoughtful, but his character and logic are very consistent with the original work. The time traveler who seems to be the protagonist actually only guided Daiyu and helped a few women in a small way, but under the general trend, he gave them the best ending. The last little easter egg is even more surprising. Lin Ruhai's bloodline has returned to the Lin family after being adopted for two generations. Each of the author's arrangements reflects the author's respect for the characters and his cherishment of Sister Lin. And it can be seen from many of the author's plot descriptions that the author has at least read a lot of interpretations of Red Mansions, so some plot descriptions are more straightforward than the original text, making it easier for readers to understand.

Very good, the heroine does not have any golden fingers. Instead of always writing about the heroine, I also wrote about other characters in the Dream of Red Mansions. It is very consistent with the actual situation in ancient times and changed the tragic ending of Lin Daiyu and Wang Xifeng. This is a rare article. The author is very good in writing and knows a lot about the Dream of Red Mansions.

A very nice novel that changes the destiny of Dream of Red Mansions. The characters remain the same. It really changes the destiny. The ending is very good [like][like][like]. It is not like other books that write nonsense about Daiyu's scientific research, Daiyu's martial arts and superb medical skills. It's all nonsense.

Many of the views in this book are very close to what I understand about the analysis of Dream of Red Mansions. There is no excessive misinterpretation of a certain person. In my opinion, it restores 60% of the personality and interpretation of each character.

This is a book that is rare to read in one sitting without interspersing other novels in the process. The author is very good at telling stories. Although the heroine has traveled through time, she does not have the arrogance of modern people to interfere in the lives of the characters in Red Mansions. Most of the time, she is just a witness. She does some things within her ability and builds good relationships. These little kindnesses can become new ways out in some difficult moments. She can be said to be the most down-to-earth book traveler I have ever seen.

The author's writing style is good, and he does not convey his own opinions with personal information. It is a pity that some parts of the article are short and not described more. This rating is a bit too low. It is actually better than many articles with more than 8 points.

I finished reading it without skipping chapters or procrastinating. The endings of Daiyu and Wang Xifeng are quite satisfactory. The endings of Jiao Da and Ning Fu, as well as the actions of the monk and Taoist, are all very reasonable. It is a rare good article, five-star praise [like]

Well written! Why didn't he score even 9 points? It is one of the most beautiful among so many Red Mansion fans! I haven't read the original work, but I feel that it not only changed Sister Lin's fate, but also echoed many plots of the original work. Great!

Yes, there are only a few chapters that are not shocking, but everything that needs to be explained is explained, and there are no schemings. It is plain and warm, especially when Wang Xifeng is imprisoned. I cried to death [crying]

Very well written, it's rare to see such a reasonable Red Mansion fan. It seems that the author has a relatively deep understanding of Dream of Red Mansions. It is very interesting. Come on.

The plot gives people a very comfortable feeling, and the atmosphere is also very good, and it is not a blind change of Daiyu, but a guide. The starting point is very novel and interesting [laughing]

Anyway, I finished reading it in one sitting. There are no big logical holes. It's worth watching if you don't mind Daiyu marrying someone else.

Yes, it's quite interesting. It would be nice if there were more interactions between the heroine, her husband and her children.

Very well written, Red Mansion fandom ranks first in Tomato

The writing is very good. Why is the rating so low? The plot is reasonable. Let Daiyu in the original work have a good ending.

After reading so many spin-offs of Red Mansions, this one is the most consistent. The characters are basically non-OOC and the logic is very good.

Very nice to look at. The author's entry point is very clever and the characters are introduced naturally. The writing style is neither fast nor slow, neither sensational nor deliberate. It simply writes about the feelings of daily life, which makes it very comfortable to read. The support given to each sister in the article is well written and very reasonable. A book about Red Mansions that I like very much.