Beast Control: If I Get Picked up at the Beginning, I Want to Be the Roll King

No CP, no heroine, there are really too few beast-controlling stories! [Crying] Overall, it's very nice. The protagonist is abandoned by his parents at the beginning but is picked up and brought home by a giant beast. He takes good care of him. Everyone is a good person [Like] The friends I met when I went to school were also very good. The protagonist has two snakes, they have a good relationship, and the protagonist is very talented. The author is big and cute [shy] There are some emoticons in the text, but they have little impact. You can intuitively feel the mood of the characters and the characters are well created [like] I really like this article. Please keep it up, the author. Just keep it up like this. I love it so much! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Renew! ! It's quite good to watch, and the plot setting is okay. The description of the residences of Yunling and Jiuyou in the early stage is very rough. For example, Jiuyou cooks [How to do it, where did he get the tools, and how he did it without hands are probably shadows. But if I don't write it down, my first reaction is that snake has no hands, and the logic will be confusing] There are also sleeping under the quilt, and then the natural disaster of thunder on the door of the house and how to survive the natural disaster. There is also the appearance of Sun Taitan and Juliet. The first time I saw them appear, I thought they were soul beast cubs, but the more I looked at them later, the more they looked like human cubs. [Can't tell] What kind of contracted soul beasts went to human society. The reason is evolution. If they are humans, it is not a big problem, but if they are soul beast cubs, they will probably be caught. These lines can be written a little thinner, and the visibility will be improved. Some of the plot descriptions are rough and not very detailed, which makes the logic confusing. The descriptions of the body shape and appearance of the soul beasts (such as Jiuyou, Xiao Hong, Xiao An, and Earth Dragon Lizard) are also relatively rough [the appearance of the characters is also detailed, I hope the detailed description can help me imagine the face], and sometimes it is difficult to distinguish the size during battle. The quality, level, attributes and beast master level of the beast are not clearly marked, which makes people confused. The explanation of the world view is not complete, and I look forward to completing it. Because the combat power does not have an accurate level and quality indicator, it is not obvious. The combat part feels like there is no fighting. I hope that the combat power setting can be supplemented. Many plots can be written in detail to make them more watchable. How many chapters does the author have to write? The plot was pushed so fast that I didn't realize it. There are many chapters to be written, so you can actually write them slowly and carefully! Come on, author, five stars for encouragement

It's really good-looking, little Ayungu. I like this kind of male protagonist so much. He is the proud son of heaven, but he doesn't reveal his full strength. Then the male protagonist and their animal pets are very amiable and warm. The small system is also very cute and has no CP. The plot is also good. It's the kind of revenge that is immediately repaid without delay. It makes people feel comfortable watching it. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

You update, you should update it quickly, you don't think no one reads your book, do you?

I looked at the two children who went to school with the protagonist in a daze. Why are there two other children in the forest besides the protagonist, a human being? The child who was abandoned like the protagonist is still in the form of a beast.

It's very interesting. The daily life and interactions between Ayungu and his brother, Xiao An and Xiao Hong are very good! At the end of watching it, I actually felt that the ending was a bit rushed (in my personal opinion), and I felt that there were a lot of regrets in this ending. I hope the author can write that when Yungu goes to other worlds, he can finally find a home that belongs to Ayungu, and can live a peaceful and happy life with his brother, Xiao An, and Xiao Hong... Them. I also hope that Ayungu can meet friends like Tian Nanqiao, Sha Er, and Gu Zixin and elders like Grandpa Liu. In this way, in addition to his brother and his pet family, there will be people (maybe not people, yes) who will care about, care about, take care of, and protect Ayungu.

It's really nice. Each pet has its own characteristics. It makes you feel that there are so many pet beasts, not just one name. The atmosphere between pet animals and people is also very warm, they are all so cute! They are all good babies! [Shy][Shy][Shy] Please update quickly. It's already tied. Woohoo~

There are a lot of beasts sticking to the protagonist🥰And every beast is very well-behaved in front of the protagonist. The element dumplings are super cute. I still really want to see the protagonist's contract with Jiuyou. I can't help but chew on the protagonist's cp (biting the handkerchief)

It's very interesting. It's the daily chapter in the previous chapter. Well, I just had a dream and grew up. It moved too fast. I didn't say what the dream was. I thought the subsequent ones in school were the dreams of the protagonist. I was confused when I read it. The protagonist and Jiuyou feel very close to each other. 😍😍😍😍😍

Do I like Jiuyou? The handsome and shiny ink snake or the black snake?

The author's writing is very good, but it's a bit lacking. The author has worked hard to update it. At present, if it is not unfinished, the rating of this book will be at least 9.0.

It's quite surprising that it's only 6.2. Overall, it's pretty good, and there are some growth and fun points that should be made. I just feel like I could be a little more talented and not have to hide too much. I have been chasing Wah, and I really like the brotherhood between Jiuyou and Yungu (a little bump!). I hope the author will make more updates, huh.

It's a very good article. The relationship between Ayungu and Jiuyou is very delicate. Although the pets may fight with each other, they also care about each other and make people feel warm. Yungu's growth also makes people happy.

I like this kind of beast-controlling, there is no ambiguity with women or anything, just a plain and smooth feeling, Yun Gu is a good nanny, handsome, the fox eyes are good, looks like a growing type, the author's big words are so beautiful! 😍

It's okay, but I don't know the actual effect of the talent at the moment. I'll wait and see.

Like super cute! ! ! ! ! I love everyday life so much! ! ! ! ! Update soon! ! ! ! ! ! I really like it, I really like it, I really like the feeling of having two male protagonists without CP belt. I love it so much. What a pity, I feel like there is very little traffic, but it's really good. Don't give up. Please, please don't let it be unfinished for a long time. It's been a long time.

It's very well written. I've been reading it for half the semester and during the winter vacation. I've lost several books and have been sticking to this one. I particularly like Ayungu's character and the author's narrative style. I will definitely stick to it until the end! Every time I click on the update button and see only a few people, I feel a little sad. Why is such a good book not so popular?

The overall look is the style I like very much, very cozy and warm! [Shy]Every friend has his own style! All on my XP! [Shy] I've been following it since last year, and I'm so lucky to have discovered and read it! Thanks to Da Da and Ayungu, as well as all the book friends for their company! [Sending Hearts] Five-star praise, inspiring recommendation ❗️❗️❗️ I hope we can see each other in the next book [Sending Hearts]

It's okay if it's mediocre

Very pretty, very warm and cute

Why is the score so low? It's pretty cool! !

It's quite warm, but a bit bland. Please support me.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it's a little bit lacking, it's not enough [like] [cry]

The unfolding of the novel is a bit strange, but it's very interesting But this kind of early comparison (? Casual) is a bit boring to me, I'm sorry.

It's pretty good to watch in daily life. For the rest, I can only say that the author can still improve. Don't write plots that some people will drool over after reading it [shy][shy]

It's very interesting. The interactions with Jiuyou Xiaoan and their friends are very detailed and cute. I want to see the update!

It's all over. Why is no one reading it? Tomato's book pushing mechanism is really amazing. It's very interesting. It's over. Spread the flowers.

Very beautiful and warm [blowing kiss]

Very nice, very novel setting

Looks great, highly recommended