Long Aotian's Junior Brother? Not Even Dogs!

It feels okay The character of Protagonist 1 is quite likable. Except for the few paragraphs that describe 0's shocking appearance, which are a bit uncomfortable, I think the rest is okay. The emotional drama progresses relatively quickly, so it can be eaten as a cookie filled with ups and downs.

It's okay, I hate amnesia jokes The two protagonists do not complain about being bullied by others or by scumbag men and scumbag women, and they retaliate on the spot. This is very refreshing and does not feel aggrieved. But it's a bit frustrating to have to attack the entire amnesia episode. This amnesia episode runs through about a third of the entire text. Another point is that Shou is a time traveler. When I read the introduction and first read the film, I thought Shou was a funny and interesting character who would not be bound by heaven, earth, worldly morality, etc., And would always be a special existence in this world of immortality. The result... Well, let's look at the character of the immortal cultivator in ordinary immortal cultivating novels, and the time-travel setting does not play a big role (I think). It just plays a role in thinking a little bolder sometimes, and sometimes giving himself a sense of superiority (because he knows the plot). Even if Shou knows the plot, but there is no change in the plot, I feel that the difference between Shou and this world is that the protagonist is given a lover on the original plot route, the protagonist should destroy the spiritual root, the protagonist should leave the sect and go out to upgrade and wander. Upgrading and wandering does not involve Shou. The original plot has not changed at all, so even if Shou knows the original plot (Shou does not care about it after knowing it in the article), He didn't take any measures. Sometimes he seems to forget about the original plot [face covering] [thinking]). He is a time traveler. In fact, it is just a fantasy. He has almost become a native of this world. The original plot means that he knows what will happen in his future. He knows it and follows the plot step by step. So what is the difference between knowing and not knowing? In fact, if Shou is a time traveler who knows the identity of the plot, and I write it as if Shou is a native of this world, I don't think there is any sense of violation. It's just that the setting of time travel is more attractive [face covering] [thinking]

It's very good-looking. I hope my brother's 20th birthday will go well and not be too cruel. I hope that the brothers and sisters can be together smoothly. The elders in the sect are very righteous, much better than the elders in the sect in some novels. Come on author

It's really beautiful, I feel sorry for Xuan An, I love you cautiously, but in the end it turns into a sword, and it also stays with Jiu Jiu in another form. All the holes have been filled, the premiere is echoed, recommended and recommended [crying]

It seems very good so far. I thought the writing would be awkward but it's not. I'm really looking forward to the plot. The cool cat must be licked wet by Xiu Gou.

It's beautiful. Xuanyang fell in love with our little Jiu at first sight, and the rest of the writing was also very smooth. There was no awkwardness, but the exhumation of the spiritual bones was really caused by his inner demons, which shocked me [Thoughts]

It's really great. Three chapters a day is not enough. I hope Xuanyang won't get too carried away and don't torture me. [Crying] It's really painful to have my spiritual roots dug out. [Crying] Although it seems to be the pain borne by the inner demon, it's still very uncomfortable. My feelings for the inner demon are also a bit complicated. I don't remember when the inner demon started to be interested in Lin Jiu. Did I miss something? Looking forward to the update. Can you please give me 10 chapters!

Super good-looking, the cool beauty and the genius Sunshine Sword Cultivator are super cute [laughing][laughing][laughing][admiration]

It's beautiful, very beautiful, and the author's stream of consciousness is also very powerful. Please see Chapter 67 [Adoration] for details.

The material selection is very good, and the plot is also very attractive. The only flaw is that some of the descriptions of the protagonist are a bit off-putting, but the rest of the writing is very good. At the end of the writing, I felt like I was really falling apart. At the beginning, it was very good and attractive, but then I became less and less interested in reading. I was really looking forward to it at the beginning.

Personal remarks, don't comment if you don't like it. On the whole, it's still very sweet, but in the middle and later stages, what I saw was that Lin Jiu was always paying for maintenance, while Yin Xuanyang was dispensable. I prefer Lin Jiu and Xuan An as a pair. Yin Xuanyang has been dragging Lin Jiu down, whether it is good or not, but it just feels boring. It is Lin Jiu who is always doing the work, which is not worth it. Especially looking for the stone tablet in the middle is very awkward and weakens Lin. Jiu's ability, and forcibly increasing Renault's role, weakened Lin Jiu's behavior, and Tiandao has been targeting Lin Jiu, which is very double-standard. The whole book feels very unfair to Lin Jiu, like an object, and does not describe Lin Jiu's value and senses. Most of it revolves around Yin Xuanyang. If it were not viewed from the perspective of the master and the slave, I would have thought that he was assisting the main attack. It's okay, like [Like]

I think it's okay. It's pretty good at the front, but there's a little bit of abuse at the back, which is just like an ordinary amnesia novel, but overall it's pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard! I look forward to your next content! [Shy] Another point is, I really feel sorry for Xuan An, can't we really have sandwich cookies? God, I feel so distressed, so distressed. Is it because I can't love you? Still don't know how to love? I feel so distressed! [Crying] I hope Xuan An will have a good ending. [Sending Hearts]

It looked pretty good in the beginning, but in the end, they were going to become a Taoist couple, but the inner demon showed up and dug out Gong's Dantian, which was a bit sadistic. However, the two met again within a few chapters, but Gong lost his memory, which was not very acceptable. Even though I lost my memory, I still fell in love with you at first sight. Haha, even though I lost my memory, my heart still recognizes you when we meet again. The inner demon is because he likes to be envied by Shou, jealous of Gong's companionship, and loves his family and friends (I feel sorry for him when I see him [face covering]), so he teamed up with another vicious female partner to dig out Gong's Dantian and then separate his body, in order to be with Shou (However, Gong did not bear the pain of digging his Dantian. His body was occupied by the inner demon, and the pain was borne by the inner demon, but it was also very painful during the treatment later) They finally had a baby who was not born by themselves. The elder gave him an egg and it hatched into a cute little dragon haha. I watched it in the back, but I didn't really like Amnesia + Slicing. I don't know if there will be more abuse later, but it probably will. Anyway, the relationship between the two young lovers is very sweet.

"Senior Brother Long Aotian is Very Different" is really amazing! The protagonist's character is counter-conventional and exciting, the plot rhythm is so tight that you can't put it down, the world view and characterization are very online, I laughed and my blood boiled throughout the whole process. It is the kind of treasured novel that you want to stay up all night to finish, so book lovers should close their eyes and read it!

It's not bad. The amnesia plot is a bit irritating.

It's a nice little sweet story. Except for a bit of abuse in the middle, the characters in the plot are still great. I felt a little distressed when I saw the end of it [Thoughts]

I have read Chapter 160 so far. The following contains spoilers and represents only my personal opinion: Indeed, as the review said, there was a bit of a collapse in the middle and later stages, mainly because the feeling that Xuanyang and Xuan An were the same person was not written out, but it also made Shou feel distressed, so there was that sadistic feeling, and I always felt that Xuanyang's amnesia should not take the initiative to get involved according to Shou's character, even though he was angry as promised before [covering his face] (of course I know it's because I feel sorry for my lover, but I always feel unhappy). Although Xuan An has been sealed before, and his father also knows about his existence, he does not distinguish between good and evil, which gives people a strong sense of separation. And the identity of wearing a book doesn't feel like it plays its role very well. The early stage is quite good, giving people the feeling of an updated novel. She almost avenges her on the spot, but she is also a pretty ordinary brainless female supporting role. As Duan Ping said, it gives people an ancient feeling and a sense of routine, but it is still worth a try.

If time is a flower Please weave time into gold If life should be burned to the ground Make farewell more beautiful Lies are floating in the air May the rainbow light stay in the sky forever Blood and fire burn the road ahead Dawn is burning like this

It's quite good to read. The book was really comfortable and enjoyable to read at the beginning, and the characters of the two protagonists are also very attractive and interesting. However, when I read almost 200 chapters, I couldn't see clearly Lin Jiu's attitude towards Xuan An, and I didn't want to continue reading. The author has made Xuan An so flesh and blood. He is essentially kind and has a good heart, but he is misunderstood and hurt time and time again. It is extremely heartbreaking to watch. I really feel sorry for him. Xuan Ming and Xuan An were originally one. When they first became one, Xuan An was obviously more innocent and immature in feelings and actions. But even so, he was still not tolerated by the world - even his biological father still chose to seal him when he saw him. This made Xuan An feel that his father did not love him because he was just an inner demon, paranoid by nature and unable to court love. Perhaps his original intention in doing all this was just to be a real person. He longs to get rid of his inner demon identity and no longer be restricted by it, so that he can love and hate openly. Because of this, he would later seize spiritual bones to shape his body, and even go to the demon world to subdue the demon generals and demon lords, regulate the demon world with the rules of the human world, and establish himself as a demon king. What makes me most upset is that when Mingming was in the demon world, both Lin Jiu and Xuanming knew that Xuanan would never hurt Lin Jiu, but in order to gain a chance to reunite with Xuanming, Lin Jiu still chose to stab Xuanan. Even though he was seriously injured, Xuan An still took the initiative to take out the power of the blood source (blood core) in his heart. This kind of unconditional dedication is really touching. I was so tortured that I cried all the time.

It's good to watch, but it falls apart a bit in the later stages and the plot is uncomfortable to watch. The emotional line is very sweet and difficult to comment on. Not to mention the finale, but only when it comes to the battle, the time the two spend apart is several times longer than they spend together. There is also Xuan An, who has been experiencing great ups and downs. . So distressed. The ending is okay in the end

The content is eye-catching, attracts readers' interest, and the protagonist has a well-developed character. I am looking forward to the next content more and more!

My heart is really dark and mysterious. I hope the author can give me a good ending. It's really not possible for two people to do it together.

There is a feeling that spiritual energy is scarce at the end of cultivating immortals. The writing style feels a bit immature, but the concept is very good.

Come on, baby, write well and take care of your body at the same time.

It's particularly beautiful. The character Xuan An is quite complex and not completely bad. When I wrote Xuan An in the early stage, I found it a bit annoying. In fact, in my opinion, Xuan An is just Yin Xuanyang with different personalities. Their personalities are the same, a bit like Master Erhamo and Ta Xianjun. They are both Yin Xuanyang, and Xiaojiu's love has always been Yin Xuanyang. The author simply wrote it so well [shy]

Good reviews, good reviews, good reviews, good reviews Yin Xuanyang, you'd better restore my memory as soon as possible Otherwise, it's not impossible to look at my Xuan An. Good review! The Shura field is in order (≧∇≦)

It is true that Xuan An did not do anything before, but it is really distressing later on. Should the author consider sandwich cookies? Or a fusion of the two?

Super pretty The character of the protagonist is very, very attractive. I haven't read this type of article in a long time┭┮┭┮

Unexpectedly, I read it in two days just to catch up to the finale. It's also pretty perfect. It just so happens that today is the last update. Although there is no particularly sweet love, sometimes it is ordinary and happy. Better than anything else. Also, it's best not to get too into the drama when reading this kind of article. Because if there is a sense of substitution, it will feel very uncomfortable if there is sacrifice. Really, if there is the kind of person who sacrifices for the sake of justice, is it someone else's compulsion or a willing choice? How many people really want to die? I want to sacrifice myself for the so-called righteousness. Are there really people who don't want to live well? This is all forced by necessity and righteousness. Originally, the sense of immersion in reading was too strong. Every time I watch this kind of sacrifice, I feel more uncomfortable. Maybe sometimes it's not that the person involved doesn't have that deep experience. But it's just like reality. Do it knowing you can't do it. It seems that he will not change his fate, but in fact it is difficult to do so. Even if Xuan An is not resurrected in the finale, it is good to retain his meaning in the magic sword. But it can be said to be barely done in the article. It feels pretty good too.

Believe me, it's really good, but the updates are so slow. I think the author is being lazy.