Double Repair*************

This is the author's fault. First of all, thank you readers for your support. I love you~ [Blow kiss] This is the author's first attempt at writing a fantasy novel. There may be some imperfections in the novel. Everyone is welcome to discuss below. The author will refer to the reasonable suggestions. I hope everyone will be merciful ~ [Sending heartfelt wishes] Thanks again to all readers for your support! Orz

It is non-toxic and slightly sour. The male protagonist is a bit literary and wants to be a gentleman, but overall it does not betray the male protagonist. As long as the subsequent portrayal is not too sloppy, it will be an excellent novel.

I recently discovered this new book, which not only creates subversive innovations in the character design, but also scientifically clarifies the dual cultivation method, changing the traditional image of the Hehuan sect. The most important thing is that the "husband and wife interaction" is written with the texture of a spy drama, which is very amazing.

So far, the whole process is non-toxic, the emotional lines are well written, and the characters are well developed and have their own characteristics. I just hope that when the heroine takes in more and more, the character will not be marginalized. Each heroine must be carefully created and the presence of other heroines should not be too reduced. I have read many harem stories, and most of them are because the heroine takes in too much, which leads to the marginalization of the characters, and in the end I can't even remember their names. The current rating of this book is too low because the number of words is too small. If the level remains unchanged, it has great potential and is estimated to be 9 points. Come on! If the author writes the plot well, maybe it will become popular [punch out]

A yellow bomb at the beginning must have five stars

Get married in Chapter 2 Don't waste your brothers' time Good reviews

Not bad, not bad. The author wrote it very well.

It's quite interesting. It feels a bit like reading novels in high school class.

Okay, I saw the latest chapter

It's well written and I think the plot is very interesting.

Very beautiful, deeply joyful

The woman looks [smile][admiration][smile] @ Tang Wushuang Okay

Not bad, wrong, wrong, wrong

It's okay, that's right. Some things can be simplified and some things can be written in detail.

It looks very cool, and I am very pleased with it [admiration]

Not bad. You can read it. [Laughing] The description of emotions is also very good. So everything is good.

The story is fascinating and the writing is great!

The plot is exciting, the writing is good, and it's fun to watch!

It's okay, keep working hard, come on⛽

The story has a compact structure and a touching plot

It was very interesting and smooth to read. Great cheers [shy]

You can see it, but the combat power increases slowly, and the protagonist will still be deflated.

Yes, the characters and plot are okay. I hope there won't be any plots in the future where the White Dragon Guard or the emperor uses the heroine to threaten the protagonist.