At the Beginning of Vishdale, My Eyes Were Glazed Over!

Well, first of all, the writing style is definitely above the average level of Tomato (nonsense). From the mastery of the climax, it can be seen that the plot is carefully designed. And most importantly, the positioning of this book is different from other Ark Advent novels in that it focuses on the protagonist and a few scattered operators. The fact that this book focuses more on the interaction of a large number of operators shows that the author is very confident in controlling the plot of his characters. At the same time, it describes a large number of operators and brings a more magnificent plot. What you can see is the doctor commanding (emphasis added) Rhode Island to stir up troubles in the other world, rather than attributing all the power to the protagonist. In short, it is very beautiful.

The author's writing style is really good, and the characters are very consistent. No poisonous points have been found yet [Of course, the beginning is a bit (can only be said to be cliché)]

Okay, as long as there are no poisonous points later, I think it will be at least 9.2 Points or above It gives me the feeling I had when I was a freshman, watching Douluo and Douluo. There is no big problem, the content is novel, there is no running account, and the characters are also relatively prominent. (The above comments only represent my personal views, and I have not read them all)

It's good to read, and you can tell that the author is an old doctor, and the composition is complex and covers everything. It's very suitable for an old person like me. On the other hand, there are no common pull-and-fight links. It's a novel suitable for cute people and gamers.

I must admit that this is extremely clever among us Vishdale players.

To be honest, the subject matter is very good. Many of Tomato's boat stories are developed step by step through traveling into the Ark, or else it is the flow of all realms, and usually it is only in the middle and late stages (after all, there is a pre-human civilization, and an unknown extraterrestrial). Although the parents and brothers of the original owner are composed of poison points, it is still readable. But slowly, especially after the doctor disappeared and started again and slowly recovered the operators, except for the special characteristics of the operators, the more it looked, the more it looked like the old articles from the past, with the assembly line flavor of fighting monsters and upgrading.

Good looking (♥∀♥) has the following three purely personal suggestions (please don't comment if you don't like them) 1. Can you write down the branches when reporting new operators, mainly for those operators that are not in the game, such as Patriots? 2. Although there is no obvious OOC behavior at present, I still hope that the author will not add some strange words or jokes. Here I will focus on naming Ulbian. This may have a program effect, but I still hope that it can be restrained and don't suddenly say "Are you scared?" [Laughing and crying] 3. Three updates a day is still too few. Can you try your best to update ten times a day [face covering] [OK]

Those who have played Ark Tomorrow feel great, and many of the jokes in Ark are reproduced. To be honest, the dialect aspect, if you switch to Mandarin, it will not be restored. For those who have not played Ark, it may look a bit weird. After all, there is no way to compare with those who have played Ark. It is difficult to sympathize with the memes or famous scenes [Chigua]

Overall, it's good, but there are still some minor flaws that all good novels have. For example, the characters are too rigid, and there is almost no reversal of positions. The good guys are always good guys when they appear, and the bad guys are always bad guys when they appear. The villains who appear basically have a look of death on their faces. You don't have to guess to know that they won't survive more than three chapters [laughing] I hope there will be some plots with more ups and downs in the future. I feel that the Kraken tribe is a good starting point. For example, it would be good to write about the rebels who are dissatisfied with the decisions of the middle and senior leaders of the tribe. However, I don't know what the author's subjective wishes are. I hope it's not the kind of theme where people who are not my race must be punished no matter how far away they are. After all, the Rhode Island organization is a very tolerant setting and is willing to accept no matter what race it is. I remember it was mentioned at the beginning of the article that humans have cooperated with many races, and I feel that we can also work hard on those races in the future. I have already imagined the scene of Miss Sarkaz going to the demon village to hang out [laughing and crying] By the way, I originally had high hopes for the octopus-headed mermaid lieutenant. Because when the author wrote before, he mentioned "trust" in the octopus leader's evaluation of the adjutant, I originally thought that this trust would be a foreshadowing. Besides, mermaids are a race of good people in most novels, so I thought they would be whitewashed. Give that octopus leader a wave of betrayal or something. For example, the mermaid saw that the incompetent general ruined the army in vain, and was disappointed with the octopus, so she chose to betray... I didn't expect that it would directly turn into a speed bump and be crushed to death [face covering]

Ark fanfiction is really difficult to write, so I support the new Ark book. Don't be too cliche and embarrassing, and try not to be OOC. Ark operators have many difficult points to write about, so just try your best. One less bad point will give you more motivation to read on. The author is also more obedient and will correct any problems, so I will still support this book.

Finally there is the traditional cool text of Arknights. It's not easy to read, but it is indeed easier to read than Meng Meng Eater and Eat Knife. In New World, you don't have to worry too much about being backstabbed by Yin Jiao's plot. 5 Stars for now, will look at it later.

Well written and logically clear. The doctor's command ability is almost the same as in the original plot. Among all the Arknights fanfics I have read, this one is the best one. I read it all overnight.

It feels pretty good. There is a description for each operator, and you won't deny them just because they have low stars or low strength. There is no personal heroism, and the author's composition is quite complex. I don't know when the Doctor will be able to hold a knife. I want to see the Dotac version of the Doctor.

The narrative is straightforward and refreshing, and there are relatively few descriptions of specific actions and environmental feedback. The character creation is also more templated, and the entire world is more like a game than reality. . If you like this, you can watch it

It can be seen that the author has indeed made little progress, although it does not have the strong feeling of refreshing writing. As for the map change, although I will understand the reason later, I have to say that there are indeed some flaws and the sense of fragmentation is a bit serious. Most of the character settings are relatively reasonable. If you must follow the original work and cannot accept the OOC, friends who cannot accept it may consider it. But I have to say that the arrangement of the emotional line is a bit weird. Although I like the protagonist, there is actually not much description in the writing. It is similar to telling you that she likes you. Can you understand this arrangement? It should be that the author does not want to write too much in this aspect? I also have some personal thoughts. I personally still like happy endings. After all, their background stories in Terra (no matter which Terra) are heavy. If it is in a second creation fanfic, let these characters have a happy ending. Finally, update quickly, it's almost the finale, please give me more updates!

It's good to watch, but the low rating means fewer people watched it. As an Arknights fanfic about summoning operators to another world, it is much better than other novels. This one can summon many operators at once. In other novels, you can only summon one at a time, and you can't see your favorite operator appearing at all. When will Piggy appear?

As an outsider who does not play Ark, the author and book friends have provided some common knowledge about the game that outsiders do not understand, which makes the reading experience very good. At the same time, it has also done well in other aspects, which will be described one by one below. 1. Character creation: Everyone has a different image and personality. The details are very well drawn, making the characters vivid and lifelike. 2. Plot: The plot has ups and downs, which attracts readers' interest, and at the same time, humor is reasonably interspersed. 3. Update (the most important thing for readers): At present, it seems that there is no thought of running away with a bucket, and I hope it can be updated until the completion. 4. Setting: It can be seen that the author is very good at writing emotional lines, and many settings have also been explained, especially the comments about the characters of Arknights. Special thanks to the author and book friends for their comments and explanations to others. Summary: In fact, this is a book that I have read that can be ranked T0.5. If you are interested, you can read it.

The writing is excellent, the plot is slightly dense, the plot is super big, the world view is huge, and the intelligence is a game. It is rated as super~big~cup~

How should I put it? This is my second account. The first one was a thousand plus hours long (Jiuge Fumou remembered correctly that it was called this). I have watched the main plot of Arknights Ark. Now I feel that it is very interesting to see this kind of time traveling to another world, because after watching the same basic plot too much, I will always feel a little tired. Furthermore, the author's writing style is quite good, at least it can be used in online novels. The plot development (for me) is neither constipation nor premature ejaculation, and the character setting of Porridge is almost intact (I haven't read some of the operator files carefully, so I am not completely sure)

It's beautiful, especially the world view. It's the first time I've seen one with a map on Tomato for so long. I highly recommend it.

It's so enjoyable to write, it's interesting, and the writing is smooth. It's everyone's masterpiece! What I want to see is this mouth tooth! ! Fighting is fun!

"True and objective, multi-dimensional description, clear structure"

Very good, Laozhou P recognizes you (I hope you can achieve similar results to Li Yunlong's)

The corners of my mouth have never come down Very beautiful

I have read Chapter 265 so far, and it seems pretty good so far [laughs evilly] But it's just good. I originally wanted to give it five stars but because of the information revealed in Chapter 265, I can only give it four stars [awkward laugh] Finished reading it too The ending alone would give me five stars, but they say that combined with the previous chapters, I can only give it four stars. Here, I would like to remind new readers that this book has not been enjoyable since the last volume. The author here is solely responsible for wanting to write something sublime and profound, but it does not conform to the previous tone, so it is limited and fragmented. If you don't write a summary of the book, you can give recommendations [laughter]

It's quite fun, the characters are a bit OOC and I can't accept being cautious. But isn't it too crude for the protagonist to be kicked to death by Amiya?

There is a bit of criticism at the back, but that doesn't stop the book from being written really well. Those who can bear the criticism can read it. Anyway, I gave it five stars and it's all over. I hope the author of the extra chapter can make up for his regrets.

Not bad. I hope to see more operators, such as the Undertaker and the Tutu siblings, so that Blue Star can see the ultimate man-machine and the power of the Chaos Evil Fun Man.

A very good book, it made my eyes look dull. It is comparable to Brother Jiaofeng's rice. It is recommended to eat it.

It looks good. I just want to know when my baby Zuo Le will show up. Little Thirteen is so cute [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]