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I know why there is no rating. The author uses a lot of repeatedly modified words. Everything about the protagonist is described in detail. The rhetorical techniques are also very similar. After reading it for a long time, it gives people a very dull, tasteless and boring feeling. I recommend that people with patience read this article. There are no other problems. The writing is okay, but the progress of the plot is a bit slow.

The subject matter and content are okay, but it's too wordy and repetitive. As long as you say one thing, there are more than two modifiers. Is it a little wordy to make up the word count?