The Poor Ghost's Cultivation of Immortality Record: Senior Brother, Don't Do This!

I like it very much. I have read it before with a similar setting, but the writing was so suffocating and heavy that I couldn't stand it. Although the setting of this one is also very hellish, the protagonist is both stubborn and optimistic, and the interactions are very loving. It has a feeling of vitality in a difficult situation, which is very to my liking.

Oh my god, it's so good. It's been a long time since I've seen a double male protagonist in this style. Originally, the golden finger system was used to rationalize the plot. If it's not implemented or not reflected in the early stage, it can better reflect the character creation. Moreover, the main purpose of this book is to give priority to improving yourself. It is not obsessed with love and love. The characters are also full and comprehensive, not the stereotype. The author also has a plot. Can there be more? Oh my god, I really like this book. Can anyone recommend other similar double male protagonists to me? [Send heart]

It's getting better, starting low and moving high. The beginning was a bit jerky, but the writing became smoother. I like the emotional lines written by the author. The plot is similar to the book "Bear, Wolf and Dog", with epilepsy. It suits my taste~ but the update is too slow TAT

The self-defeating Makino and the hugging Jiang Yang are really easy to get along with, but I don't know if they are two male protagonists [laughing] It's nice to look at, it's interactive, it's interactive! Love! Like! Pass! Procedure! I give this love line 98 points, 2 points less because [love] [love] [love] cannot be concluded in the series.

It's really good to read, except for some minor flaws, but I think it's all acceptable. This is a book about two men cultivating immortals that I find more acceptable on Tomato. It's really well written. I don't know why the rating is so low now, so I want to support it.

It's a very good novel. It has a strong male flavor. The background of the novel is dark and dark, but the author's writing is very silly. It looks very good and does not have the suffocating feeling of dark novels. The two protagonists are also very cute. Makino's brain teaser is really funny and he is also a tsundere and he is duplicitous. Jiang Yang also feels a bit duplicitous. Moreover, both of them conform to the straight male character. When they are not enlightened in the early stage, they are normal big brother and little brother. There is no feeling of being in the closet at all. Later, Makino realized that Jiang Yang liked his own psychological description, which was really cute, with the feeling of a young master's tsundere. I rarely praise men's cuteness because I am a man myself, and I don't think men are cute. But Jiang Yang and Makino gave me the impression of being cute. I almost got bent over when I read it. In short, the plot and emotion of this novel complement each other. The characters of the two protagonists are very good, and the writing style is funny. It is a very good novel [like][like]

It's a particularly good-looking novel with a novel theme about two male protagonists cultivating immortality. I clicked in accidentally at first, but it got out of hand. This author writes each character in a very three-dimensional way. Each character has his own personality. He is not a brainless villain or a brainless protagonist. The combat power of the protagonist is also designed very clearly. It seems that the combat power has not collapsed so far. It has been tied in two days. I really want to see the follow-up. Madam, please update.

Very good! The characters are very specific. I just really feel for the protagonist... Sometimes I think this Mu is too narcissistic! Think that the protagonist likes you, and then reward him with work... I can't do it anymore... I'm so angry

Nice! Only the first few dozen chapters make people feel too realistic, so poor that it makes people uncomfortable, and they have to spend money everywhere, but the more they read, the better it gets! It attracts me so much, and the relationship develops slowly rather than suddenly falling in love at first sight, which is great! All in all, I love it, love it, love it! The author writes well, and the volume is large but still filling. I hope the author can continue to persevere and the score will definitely reach 9.0 Or above over time! Come on, author [love]

It's a good-looking and novel novel about cultivating immortals. The characters of the babies are also very unique and they are all super cute. Xiao Mu: What is he doing in the early stage? Stay away from me. In the mid stage, he loves me too much. Give him some rewards. In the later stage, seduce me and break up with him. Xiao Jiang: In the early stage, I have to work hard and please him. In the mid stage, what does he do? Seduce me, kiss me, disgust him. In the later stage, I don't seem to be straight? I don't know, practice hard I just like to admit that I am a curvy person, and go around and around with me, hahahaha [blowing kiss] delicious

It's very good. The protagonist bends down to hug his thighs and conquers his own thighs. However, the protagonist is kind-hearted and will spend money to save his former friend (original owner). The world described by the author is a world of immortality where everything requires money. The relationships between organs, relatives and friends can all be divided by money, which is a bit novel. After reading the whole story, I found that there were not many poisonous points, and it was very smooth to read. The protagonist is more humane, at least compared to the people in this world.

The rating should be higher. It is a novel about two male protagonists cultivating immortality. I haven't seen it in a long time! I am tired of the cliche plots. Many of the plots in this book are not only innovative but also very logical. I also like the emotional scenes. The supporting characters are also very vivid in their characterizations. It has the potential to become a hit! Too bad it's not fat enough. I have to wait for the update. The progress is still a bit slow. How do I use the golden finger?

This book really suited my taste unexpectedly. I found many 9:00 books unsatisfying. This one is really rated too low to match the plot. The setting is very novel and interesting, the emotional lines of the characters are also very delicate, and Makino's self-reflection is also super interesting.

Why is the rating so low? The writing is very good, sophisticated and mature. The development of the plot is very novel and interesting. There is a straight man who has no intention of time-traveling and a handsome guy who tries to conquer himself. It is very, very good to watch, but it is not over yet. It is so hard to follow every day. Please update more.

I give this book a high rating. I really enjoyed reading it. The world of immortality written by the author is very dark, but it is indeed refreshing. The relationship between xql in the early stage, the ambiguous relationship in the middle stage, and the old married couple in the later stage (maybe the summary is not very good, you have to read it yourself to know) is really sweet. Whether it is Makino vs. Jiang Yang or Jiang Yang vs. Makino, this pair makes me feel comfortable inexplicably. The collision between a money fan and a contrasting monster is so cute. I hope the author will continue to follow the writing style in the future. I like the occasional interactions. I just feel that the plot is a bit messy, and some plots jump a little too fast, but maybe I read the book too fast, so I just flipped forward and read it.

Give a good review. I have never seen this type of dual male protagonist who cultivates immortality. I hope there will be more updates. The male videos have many good memes and genres, but there are very few that feature dual male protagonists. There is also a kind of family cultivation stream similar to Xuanjian which is also very rare.

It's quite good-looking, and the writing is not a novice. Many Tomato novels look like milk burps, but I'm not very good at it.

I love watching it so much, and I get three ads for every double update every day! What I like the most is writing about cultivating immortality, and also having two male protagonists flying in to love each other, and writing self-guided strategies, hahaha, I like the author, keep it up!

The writing is very good, and the plot development is also good, but the emotional line makes people feel astringent. In the early stage, there was quite a love affair, and later they got married, so they are in love. Xiao Jiang has always been inconsistent. There are too many fake straight man plots, making it feel like forced love, sour, and neither of them is sweet. Maybe the plot will look a little dull if you just give out candy directly. [Crying] I'd better give you a good review.

Hahahahahaha. It's a very interesting book. When I first read it, I thought it was a non-CP novel. Later, when I saw Makino's step-by-step self-guided strategy and explained myself clearly, I wanted to laugh (ᕑᗢᓫ∗)˒

This book is still interesting. The entire setting of cultivating immortals is very reasonable, and the plot is neither too fast nor too slow. The pace is appropriate. The shortcomings that are not considered shortcomings are the slow advancement of the emotional line. There is also the worry that the world setting is too "random". All the organs, skin, bones, flesh, and eggs can be bought and sold with one shot, and emotions are all linked to interests. How to ensure the uniqueness of the emotions between the protagonists? Just wait for the good news.

Awesome Claes! ! ! ! This is so beautiful, madam, where can I find such an awesome capital cultivator to show it to me? Madam, you must be fine every day. How many chapters will you read? How many chapters will you read when you go to bed? When you wake up, how many chapters will you read when you eat? ! There is no meal replacement in the whole network. Such delicious straight male dog zero and self-guided male fox one are really shocking and delicious! ! ! ! It's simply not enough. I've been holding back for two weeks and I still can't help but finish it in one sitting. I have another account, and I finished reading this one. Now this account has less than 100 minutes, so I can't add fans, so I have to re-update it. Author, you must work hard and don't give up on this book. I will keep reading it. It is simply a niche masterpiece! This is my first time to write a long review for someone. For my sake, the author will write more. Please, two chapters a day is not enough. I want to recommend this book to everyone I know. It must be so delicious and sexy. It has written a perfect combination of male videos and dual male protagonists. It makes me, who watches both male videos and dual male protagonists, very happy. Author! ! ! ! ! I will follow you all my life! ! ! ! ! !

It's so good to watch. The capitalist cultivation in the first part is very exciting and makes people laugh. The emotional scenes in the back are even more exciting. If the communication between the two people is not well written, it will easily appear artificial. But this book is really well written. There are only laughs and no reactions. It is about to tie the knot. I am very worried.

I stayed up all night and finally read the latest chapter. It's really good. I don't understand why this book has such a low rating. The previous one I read had a rating of 7.9. This one has a lower rating, but I really think it's good to read. Instead, it's those books with a score of 9 or more, many of which have various flaws... I've never read books with more than 300,000 words but no 8 points before. As a result, due to the book shortage, I read two books with a score of 7 or more.

It's good to watch, but I feel like there are too many chapters. It's easy to get tired of rambling on. [Grief] The characters have distinct personalities, but in the end I skipped chapters to read them. [Almost crying] No matter how straight you are, you can't have more than 200 chapters. Are you still impressed? [Almost crying] Seeing that now, I think it's almost the same, the two of us are together. I don't know what I can write if I want to write more later, but the Crown Prince has always played a little role in promoting the plot. Overall, it's scattered. Is the main plot about two people getting stronger? I don't want to write about them ascending to the sky, right?

It is a very interesting story with two male protagonists. The world framework and story direction are also very interesting. It has both emotions and ideals. It is very good to develop relationships on the career line. The future is the more important line. Although the male protagonist is relatively weak now, it is more interesting to upgrade the flow. Come on, I look forward to the male protagonists developing into big guys, and it feels like it will be a long story. I look forward to it.

It's super good-looking, and Makino's underclassman has a crush on him. When I watched it, I found it funny but also felt embarrassed for him. Overall, there is nothing surprising about this article, and I find this book particularly interesting now that I have read it. (These are all my personal opinions. If you think I'm wrong, please don't scold me)

It's really nice. I rarely come across this kind of book. The character design doesn't make me very cold, but I think the background and the development of the plot are very novel. It is similar to the fairy tale of male videos with a little emotional line. However, the emotional line follows the plot. If the emotional scene is enlarged, it will make people feel a little uncomfortable. I can accept that this book has millions of words. It develops slowly and slowly. When I look at Jiang Yang now, I am not tempted, or there is a little emotion, but not much. Author, please keep writing [laughs] If I don't have money, I will also come up with a power generator for love. It's so good. I've read more than 500 chapters now, and I'm a second-time reader. Did the author stop updating for a while? A little while ago, I watched it again. It was so beautiful.

This is not a traditional fairy tale. The subject matter is interesting and the characters are three-dimensional. In this fairy cultivation environment measured by money, everyone's choice corresponds to their character. There is a way that it should be like this, but when you think about it, there is no room for more choices. The decision made by the protagonist does not violate his own conscience, which is one of the few red spots in that era.

It's a very interesting world of immortality. Although the environment is relatively depressing, even the first place has to borrow money to cultivate immortality [face covering]. I hope Jiang Yang and Makino will develop faster in the future and quickly surpass that prince. I feel like Makino confessed first, and then Jiang Yang agreed in order to continue hugging her thighs [Thinking]