Quick Travel: the Younger NPC Turns Out to Be a Heartthrob

Super Invincible looks great, especially the first world! It's really good-looking, but a little bit sadistic (PS: I don't abuse the main character, but slightly abuse the secondary protagonist). I really love Gu Puppy to death! Everyone says he doesn't understand love, including himself, but I think he understands love, and love means letting go! You have to know how rare it is for a paranoid person to know how to let go? ! His love for the protagonist is simply amazing!

It's pretty good😋😋The plot progresses really quickly, and it doesn't drag at all. I like to go through it quickly😋😋I hope the protagonist can continue to be unique and beautiful. (Just kiss her on the mouth, but don't let them really eat it😓) The main text is short and concise, and the extras also take care of every supporting role. It's great that everyone is participating in Xiao Bai's story😭 However, the character side story feels a bit like an assembly line, basically retelling the plot of the main text. I hope you can write some stories outside of the story in the side story, and add a little bit of sourness that the protagonist's perspective doesn't have🙏🏻Of course I'm not teaching you how to write a book! ! ! We all hope to see a more three-dimensional small world🥰🥰🥰🥰

I particularly like the first world. Gu Huanyan is really good (personal opinion) and the characterization is also very good. Xiaobai doesn't love anyone and just wants to find his own memory. I also feel sorry for some of Xiaobai's memory fragments. Also, the first two worlds are really good! ! ! DaDa is also very powerful. I feel great about the family ties in the third world. Come on, DaDa.

The first world looked better, but the follow-up was a little dull. I liked the way the protagonist didn't take the initiative or accept it. So in the fourth world, it should be that the memory fragments were unlocked, and he actually asked for a kiss. Although he didn't kiss in the end, I felt that the character connection was not done well, and then the personality gap was a bit big, like two people (similar to a kind of OOC feeling)

It's not bad. The plot of the quick travel story is very fast, about twenty chapters, and there is no messy and superfluous plot. The protagonist is very charming, but I hate you for being a piece of wood [face covering] Apart from tasks, I only know how to play games every day 😂, but this is more attractive. The photo of Xiaobai's real appearance appeared in the second world, which made me so excited. Who understands this paragraph. Some people's emotional lines are so obscure, I didn't even notice [face covering] In the fourth world, the appearance will be revealed, right? I'm looking forward to it later.

It's well written. I like the first world better. I think this book is really more suitable for non-CP, otherwise it would feel a bit OOC [Thinking]

I just finished reading the first world. I feel it is the best novel I have read this year. It is simple, plain and touching. My eyes turned into walnuts from crying [crying] I've read a lot of stories about Lei before. The protagonist looks ordinary and is mentally and physically unclean. But the first world is so awesome. It turns out that I'm not Lei. I just haven't encountered such good writing [crying] I hope Xiaobai will be the wise man who is unmoved by emotions in the end. Family ties are enough, and no cp until the end. These men are too dirty. Apart from the author's writing style, the only thing that can make me watch these dirty men is Xiaobai's calm and unmoved heart [crying]

There is a kind of ordinary life. Although the feelings come out of nowhere, they are unexpectedly not annoying. The feelings are so unreasonable and overbearing and shameless. (Because a lot of details are missing, it will make people feel inexplicable. Also, it is narrated around Xiao Bai. This is a matter of perspective). Xiao Bai is a straight man and a quick wearer. What should he do with the feelings of those people towards him? So be is the final outcome. The character's autobiography in the extra chapter is a little one-sided and has few words. It has a simple feeling. There is no too many plots and stories, but a simple narration of the inexplicable feelings and thoughts. (I can't tell you how I feel about it. In fact, I prefer this kind of style with fewer words and less embellishments, but it's too little. I suspect the author didn't want to code the words [laughs]) The charm of straight men is unmatched [laughs]

I have finished reading the first world. The author's emotional expression is very good, but the writing needs to be improved. It is not excellent but not bad either. I think the first small world is just three words "too fast". Their liking and love are too fast. The author should add some scenes to these. It feels weird that the villain and the protagonist like each other so quickly. I think I like Lan Zhubai because of his aura. Generally speaking, it's okay.

I feel good about myself. After watching the third world, the protagonist did not do anything excessive except being kissed. It is very good, very good. I hope the protagonist can stay alone for the rest of his life and not give me a partner. It's okay to pass the time, it's pretty good-looking, and the ending is pretty good. It's neither sadistic nor sweet. It's just plain enough, but it's a bit regretful. But it's still good~

Gu Hua said that he would be happy in his next life. I was very moved after reading the comments. There are many, many people who love you. Your charming character really makes people feel sour and bitter after reading it. I feel regretful and feel that this is just right [crying]

The third world is very well written and deserves a high score. Shen Yaoguang's character design really impressed me. It can only be said that the other worlds are not to my liking, especially the world that is not Bai Yueguang. I don't really like the setting of forcing the plot and forcibly torturing the protagonist. Moreover, the protagonist's heartthrob is indeed a bit unclear. It feels like other people suddenly fall in love at first sight when they see the protagonist's face.

Pretty good. I feel that Fu is in need of love. Lan's service to him can be done by others, but the way he cares about Lan is like a possession is somewhat different. I don't have deep feelings about love, and I can't quite understand why the original male protagonist fell in love with Lan and why Fu cared so much about Lan because of a kiss. The original heroine is quite good, she doesn't like to refuse directly and has her own bottom line. Big cheers.

It's very good-looking, very good-looking, and it suits my taste. The fourth world is really cool, I like it so much, every world is very good~ Author, I declare that your articles are my food. Can you bear to watch me starve? (∩ᵒ̴̶̷̤⌔ᵒ̴̶̷̤∩) Highly recommended!!! The writing is good, the characters are also very good, and Xiaobai is also very cute~ Of course the author is also very cute, and I am cute too hahaha (I am too narcissistic (っ-) .｡) (~~~Chewchew(๑´ㅂ`๑)chewchew) Be sure to work hard!

It's good to read, and people who read this book are very classy. This book has no cp, 4 worlds, good writing, recommended, the protagonist is a bit of a heartthrob, the only interaction currently is kissing, sober handsome man [eating melon]

This book is so real, it really feels like seeing reality However, I suggest you try to skip the world where your appearance is exposed for the first time. That is the 4th world Because the style is a little different The first world cut me into a dog. To be honest, it didn't hurt that much in my heart, but I didn't know why I just cried. I felt very calm, but I didn't understand why I was crying. The first world is regret and regret It's best to have no cp, otherwise I might go crazy. After all, I feel like everyone is well matched.

Great author! I will always follow you! The writing is very plain, but it outlines the story of a character in just a few strokes. It's not too sadistic, just the pain of not getting what you want. It's just too little, other aspects are very good

After watching the first world, I felt it was pretty good. The protagonist has a faint human-machine feel. It's a bit strange in terms of relationships. After just kissing the original male lead, he gradually fell in love with the protagonist. They only met a few times later. A kiss to seal your love? [Maybe love is so inexplicable, right? Although there are two male protagonists, they are only ambiguous and do not have a deeper relationship. It's quite funny. I have a good laugh point, and I don't usually laugh. The people in the comment section are all talented people, and the comments they post are even funnier.

Xiaobai's character creation is very successful. Who understands that faint feeling of death? ! ! I think Xiaobai can be molded by Kapibala. Every story is great. I accidentally clicked in and tied it. It's very interesting. Each character has his own extra story. This is very good. I highly recommend it! Could the author suddenly release hundreds of chapters and scare me to death?

It's so good to watch, I really like the plot inside, the author will do more and more🥰🥰

Very nice! Many people are also very good. I like Baibai the most. I want to be happy and carefree all the time. [Cry] [Cry] [Cry] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I love you. The author is great [Send heart] [Send heart]

I like Xiao Bai's character very much, and the author's writing style is also very good. It has a feeling of time passing by, which is very reassuring and makes people feel safe, and makes them want to keep reading like this.

The author's family line is very good. As for the first three worlds, the writing is quite excellent, especially the first world and the third world. This is really worthy of praise. The fourth world is also quite unique. To be precise, it gives me a very unique feeling. I can travel to various different worlds and experience different things. Of course, it's quite nice to experience it from the perspective of a bystander. The author made it very clear from the beginning, so I didn't offend him very much. I don't feel sad, I feel okay, I just feel very bitter, sad, and distressed. It is a very good book. It is participated from the perspective of a bystander, and the development route is centered on the protagonist's world, but each secondary protagonist has his own path, and each small world has a side story that is quite clear. What I really like is not his CP line, but his family line. This aspect is really great and relatively delicate. The ordinary life is mixed with the ordinary and inevitable things of ordinary people. Very bitter, astringent and warm

The first small world is really beautiful つ♡⊂Especially Gu Wangyan at the end, Fu Junhan's autobiography is really touching ꒦ິ^꒦ິ, I hope they will be happy in the next life and can achieve their wishes ˋˏᰔᩚˎˊ˗ (You can listen to Time Machine or Yun Shang Yuyi's music while watching) The third small world is also very beautiful, and they are all very nice people (except for the one with the surname Jiang) (づ-̩̩̩-̩̩̩_-̩̩̩-̩̩̩)づ The fifth small world (the small world of punishment) is so beautifully written that I shed tears. Xiaobai didn't wait for grandma's medicine. Grandma froze to death that winter while holding the medicine. My sister also tried her best, but there was still no happy ending. Everything was destined to be fine. ๐·°(৹˃ᗝ˂৹)°·๐

The first world of DaDa is very well written. There are no ups and downs in the plot, but it is thought-provoking and hard to put down. I have read a lot of sad stories, but they may be too samey, so I don't have any feelings. Da Da writes about abuse. It is quite sad, but it doesn't feel sad. There is an indescribable feeling, like a long stream of water, slowly seeping into people's hearts.

To be honest, I cried all my tears for a week in just one day. . . The teacher's writing style is very good and the emotions he wants to express are also very delicate and really impressive. I didn't read BE articles before, but this book directly cured me. Anyway, it is a delicious meal. Personally, it is a book that I like very much. The teacher has become my goddess. I am lucky to see such a article. I originally just found it while I couldn't sleep in the middle of the night while scrolling through tweets. I just fell in love with the first small world after reading it❤️❤️❤️

It's pretty good, I like the first world very much! I really like the relationship between the male protagonist and Gu Huanyan in it. The male protagonist is very interesting to get along with. Especially when I saw the last part, I almost cried, especially his self-narration. The second world is also very interesting. In this world, I also like the interactions between the male protagonist and Yu Shaolin, Jiang Yinxing, Su Yuchuan, Shen Che, and Yu Yichenyi. Although some of them are unclean, it doesn't matter to me, because I can accept them whether they are clean or not, not to mention that none of them were able to have in-depth communication with the male protagonist, and some of them didn't even get to kiss each other. The third world is also quite nice, but a bit too bland for me. Maybe I prefer something a little more exciting? So compared to the first two worlds, this world is a bit boring to me. Shen Yaoguang in this world is a very good person, and he is very kind to the male protagonist, so the male protagonist's relationship with him seems very warm. I didn't watch much of the fourth world, I only read the first few chapters and then stopped watching. I don't think it's because the character of the male protagonist has changed. After all, the male protagonist now is smarter, which is good. He is not as dull as in the first three worlds, and he is more active instead of passive, so it is actually quite refreshing to see it that way. Because I particularly like protagonists who are very smart, and I prefer protagonists who can control the scene and take the initiative in their own hands. But I didn't say that I didn't like the character of the male protagonist before. I quite like it. It has a silly and cute feeling, but also has a human-machine feel. It also has the taste of a social animal and an honest person, and is also a coward. The inner drama is also very cute. That's why I haven't finished reading the fourth world and the rest because I read this article just to see the male protagonist acting as the younger brother, because this kind of protagonist acting as the younger brother is very delicious. So I saw that it was different at the end, so I stopped watching it. But that doesn't matter. I think this book is quite good, but there are a few typos.

It's good to read\(//∇//), but the score is low, and there are few people to criticize it. I suggest everyone who likes to read this book to write some reviews and raise the score a little higher, so as not to make the book a dead end. If the score is higher, the author's commission for writing the article should also be higher.

I went to see what the teacher wrote. It was a bit scary. How could it be so beautiful? I really doubt whether it could have been written by a human being. Why is it so satisfying to me? I'm scared to death when I think about it carefully. I'm also scared when I think about it roughly. When I think about my nostrils again, I know. In fact, the author secretly monitored my reading habits and then wrote this novel, right? It's kind of interesting [Like]

It's great, it's great. The first chapter was particularly annoying, especially when I watched and listened to The Lonely Patient, it almost tortured me to death [crying]