Xingtie: I Have a Lot of Love Debts

This work has a base, so people who are familiar with the official main line will find it confusing and unfriendly to the character chef. The male protagonist has a honey background and is a top-level succubus, so the progress of the love line is a bit fast, and almost everyone has already conquered it at the beginning. However, in the Bengtie world view, this kind of fast-food love line is considered normal. It is better to say that Xing/Qiong in the official main line is only a few years old, so he has no idea in that regard [face covering] The character traits of each character are well understood. There is no OOC in general, and it is understandable that there is a slight OOC in some parts to promote the plot. However, the plot framework has been changed according to the official main line. There may be some places that make people feel like they are repeating the plot, but due to the insertion of the male protagonist, the feeling of repetition has been avoided as much as possible. Friends who are familiar with the original main plot should try their best to substitute the protagonist's perspective when reading. Although it is not easy to substitute the protagonist's honey background, but if you don't substitute, it will feel awkward, which will affect the viewing experience [face covering] The author's writing style is okay, but Beng Tie's worldview is too large and has too many characters. The control over the plot remains to be seen later. At the same time, some characters may be chosen, resulting in less plot. If you can accept the above questions, then this work is suitable for your entertainment after dinner, and maybe it can also satisfy your fantasies about some of your favorite characters [smile] Having said that, the purpose of second creation is to supplement the spiritual satisfaction that is rare in the official world, so you should fantasize hard [laughter]

The writing is really good, there is no sense of inconsistency, it fits the plot very well, and the relationship between the characters is well described. It is not the kind of plot where you are a superman when you are happy, but you are also a superman when you are unhappy, but there is also a story about Cao Pi [laughing] The book that I have read so far is the most suitable for my taste [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Cocolia is still saved. They really tricked Tiewei to death. Who will speak for the dead Tiewei?

So far it seems like they are just ambiguous stories. I want to see Shen Ru who actually opens a harem.

It's beautiful, it's beautiful, the characters in it are all very well written, I want to play a few more times after watching it [laughs]

I spent several hours watching it, and I found it to be really awesome, and the character design is uncensored. Compared to others, it's pretty good. The speed of the car also made my aunt laugh the whole time [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] I always feel that this book will become a god, and I am just sitting here waiting for the author to become popular [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The writing is quite good. I found a small number of novels among a large number of memes. The emotional line is quite good, but March 7th is too much. I won it directly [laughing]. Author, I want you to update your teeth ten times a day.

It's simply too nice [Top Post][Top Post][Top Post], the emotional line is simply invincible compared to other fanfics of the same type, but the author stops updating at the most exciting point, which is really annoying [Punch Out][Punch Out] The speed of the update is explosive

I am majoring in Chinese language and literature, and I feel that the writing is very good. There are some contents that can be exchanged. Let's focus on the plot of Belloberg first. At least it is not easy to be backstabbed. The main plot is slowly advanced and there is no rush. The main thing is character creation, especially the relationship with the protagonist, so that it will not appear abrupt. (Also: I want to watch the sisters Natasha and Landau [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration])

Yes, it's very interesting, but there are not many chapters in the book so far, and the plot has not been fully developed. I look forward to the follow-up content and hope the author will update more. Of course, the author should also be careful not to tire himself [Adoration]

The protagonist is well portrayed, and the heroine is not for nothing. Some characters have done their job. They should be given more roles, more care and interaction, and add a group chat or something, so that they don't miss it so much. I have regained my memory, and I should reply to the girls in my memories. I like this book very much. The plot is a bit off, and some plots feel weird and can't be connected. I hope you can pay more attention, come on, author!

The right amount of jokes, the right amount of humor, the logical plot, and the must-have comedy for Beng Tie fans. This book is so perfect, so cool.

The final ending was a little hasty and sloppy, and later on it was obvious that the plot was a little confusing and impatient in order to recycle foreshadowing, but it was still acceptable and had a high level of humor. It was still very good as a harem comedy. However, the knife in the later stage gave people an inexplicable, knife-for-the-sake-of-the-knife illusion because of the recycling of foreshadowing. But no matter what, this book still gives me a pretty good feeling!

It's awesome. You create your own story based on the character's personality, and the world view is not changed casually. The author can really write it. I rarely type so many words, I highly recommend it.

Very nice, funny and cool article I hope the protagonist can eat it soon

Good book, and I don't know if I can read the one written for the author. If I write a sequel, the point of nothingness must be solved. I have an idea. Since the protagonist will remember the memory before time travel no matter how the nothingness devours it, combined with other fans Fu Li and Aha, they will have a sense of memory of the time traveler. If you are interested, you can set the essence of time travel to be from three dimensions to two dimensions. The power of nothingness cannot act on the three-dimensional memory of time travel. Then you can use this as a basis to carve the memory of Beng Tie into the previous memory and fix it, or find Fu Li and Yao Shi to protect the memory and the body to resist the nothingness.

It's beautiful, believe me. A small number of articles were found among the large number of memes. At present, it looks like a waste of time. Five-star delivery first, looking forward to the author

It's a very good book. Come on, write about the uncle's big brother [Like]

The author asks politely How many heroines would there be? Expect more [shy] Can the author add a hessian sound at the end?

Four stars. The reason is that I was very surprised when I read the March episode. The succubus should at least provide some emotional support. However, considering that it may be the first time for the author to write this kind of article and there are lingering emotions, I will change the evaluation later.

From the current point of view, there is no big disadvantage. The only disadvantage is that there are too few, so please get more!

When I read a book and couldn't stop reading it, I wanted to read it again. You just know this book is special. [Laughs][laughs]

This novel is also very beautiful. Well, the author must update it fiercely and never update it. Come on, author, I believe in you ヾ(^▽^*)))

It looks good, and the progress is well controlled. It is astringent and relaxed overall. You can write more outside the main plot to avoid the pace being too fast. Please refer to those interesting second creations. Come on

Feeling good? Because it's been a long time since I've read a Bengtie fanfic. Sometimes I feel that the pace of this book is a little fast, but overall the quality is still very high. It is a book that I highly recommend reading at the moment.

I found it very interesting during the Beloberg period. After being at a disadvantage, it gradually turned into a harem novel. It's not that the harem novel is not good, it just feels like it has a weird taste when I read it. I don't know why? Anyway, I'm quitting for now, sorry. This book is still worth reading.

Well, yes. But is it too long to stay in Xianzhou now? Although the predecessor does have a very important position in Xianzhou, there is something wrong with staying in one place all the time. At least you can go to other fairy boats to see them. Well, it's not impossible to finish writing the stories about Xianzhou, maybe I'm a little anxious. But I still hope to write about the plot of Pinoconi as soon as possible, I quite like it there.

Yes, it is considered qualified according to Bengtiewen. There is nothing poisonous about it and it can be eaten.

Good, hey hey hey, super pretty

It's so entertaining, I recommend Aha to watch it.