Zenless Zone Zero: Heart of Steel

The subject matter is novel, the writing is good, and Stark's restoration is also good. It only took your Uncle Stark a second to accept the fact that he had traveled through time.

The author carefully wrote it by hand, and the overall quality is excellent. The only suggestion is to delete the English at the beginning. This is very discouraging for listening to books. In the current environment, life and death are determined by one chapter, or even the introduction.

I feel that this novel should be suitable for most people, but I don't know why no one reads it. The content is okay, and there are several plot points that are difficult to break down.

First of all, give me five-star support. Then just talk about my personal views The book is quite bland, and the plot advances in a very gentle straight line, lacking some "crack" feeling. Iron Man in Endgame is a complete character. He has experienced his debut, the Battle of New York, Ultron, Civil War, Thanos, retirement, family, and sacrifice. It can be said that there is no room for shaping a turning point. With a family and a daughter, the emotional line cannot be developed. The overly strong ability causes each event to pass smoothly. The big event mode of American comics obviously cannot be inserted into the Zero Zone. After all, in the end of the crisis, Iron Man will overturn, and it is difficult for the new Elle to not suffer a large number of casualties. It's actually a very dangerous idea to focus on the emotional lines of other characters, but I can't think of any good way. Could there be a secret invasion of the Skrulls? Just kidding, the MCU readership basically knows that a secret invasion can turn into a big mess if you are not careful (the TV version of Secret Invasion is quite abstract) digression I don't know how many days to wait for Avengers 5. MCU, rise up. By the way, pray for DCEU. Can I really see the movie version of Crisis on Infinite Earths in my lifetime...

After a quick glance, I found that the writing style is acceptable and the subject matter is novel. The current problem with the entire book is that Iron Man accepts it too quickly in the opening chapter. The issue that needs to be paid attention to in the future is the combination of technology from the two worlds, allowing Iron Man to climb the ether technology tree of Zero Zone and establish his own company to join TOPS. However, Hollow and Aether are still too buggy, so try not to mess up the game or collapse the setting. Of course, as the same fan author of Zetsu Zone Zero, I have to remind you in advance that there is a problem with the timeline of Zetsu Zone Zero. Before writing, read all the plots (including branch plots) of the entire large version and sort out the plot time first. Unless you also want Perlman to sleep in the outer ring for a few months, and then celebrate the annual gold-touching day every two months, and finally follow the official footsteps of the Zero Zone and write the character's birthday incorrectly. 😄

I recently watched Dutch's A New Day. When the movie ended, I thought of Tony Stark again. He is the soul of the entire Marvel. Since he was missing, Marvel has been like losing its soul. The new Iron Man made my eyes dark. I couldn't imagine what the screenwriter was thinking. I was extremely disappointed because the Tony I liked had died in Avengers 4. When I was sorting out the bookshelf, I accidentally came across this book, Zero Zero: "Heart of Steel". I happened to be a ropemaker, so I clicked on it and read it. I saw Tony who liked to quarrel and was protective of his shortcomings, and Tony Stark who had a bottom line and was responsible. I was very touched. I didn't expect that so many people still remember him. Seeing him taking care of all the members of the Silver Army like an old father, I got wet in the eyes. The Iron Man I like is back! He's back again!

In fact, there is not much to say about the works of Almost Powered by Love (fandom), and it is acceptable even if the problems are not big. I still want to complain a little bit about one thing here, that is, there is no need to put too much emphasis on the lack of CP. Of course, if you need "protection" and are afraid of being charged, then there is really no way. You can consider weakening the female character (tooling it) or writing less about the female character's demeanor and emotional thoughts (from Tony's perspective, this is actually quite reasonable). It can be seen that writing female characters is quite "internet culture", so the disclaimer is actually necessary. Under normal circumstances, the author doesn't have that intention, and there will basically not be too controversial content, but this way of writing the female character that is too "internet culture" is really not guaranteed, which makes it look very awkward and gives people the feeling of drawing a line and then jumping around repeatedly. As for other unreasonable things, just let them go. It's just fan fiction, so it's good to read it. Finally, I hope the author will get better and better and have fun writing.

Let me tell you about the look and feel of this novel. It looks very good. You are Tony Stark who has traveled to the Zone Zero. The imagination is very good. I have always wanted to see some Marvel abilities or how to travel to other worlds. Unfortunately, I can't find it. There are too few, but there are very few. This book is really good. The timeline is after Avengers 4 Iron Man snaps his fingers. Of course, you don't have to worry about the Minotaur plot. After all, our Succubus is still stable and the author has a strong desire to survive. Let me add one more thing, it is my own imagination. I remember one of them said that Iron Man wanted to make Pym particles and return to his own universe, and then I wanted to 🤔 🤔 🤔 You said that if Iron Man is really developed, will it travel to Beng Tie or Genshin next door? 🤔🤔🤔 Well, although the author only plays Zero Zone

The writing is good, but the pace is relatively slow. In addition, Iron Man has no other room for shaping and turning. It may become more boring in the future... I guess. Anyway, it will definitely be interesting to watch. I highly recommend it.

The author of Wisdom Teeth. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that the writing ideas are rigorous and clear. The author should be a science student (guess), but it is indeed possible. Where can I find an author who likes Iron Man and plays zzz[punch out]