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The writing is very beautiful, and the plotting in it is also very powerful. I just want the author to write more emotional lines for the protagonist. There are too few emotional lines, [shy][shy] There are too many plots. I actually went for the emotional line. Please write more emotional lines for the protagonist [crying][crying]

I've seen almost half of it. The overall writing style and writing style are relatively good and quite harmonious. But one good thing is that the relationship between primary and secondary characters is not allocated well, and too much ink is used to depict the characters other than the protagonist. I do not see how the protagonist enhances feelings and promotes the plot. More peripheral characters are used to promote the plot. This method leads to too much ink on peripheral characters. For two consecutive chapters or more, peripheral characters are written about, and the protagonist is secondary. In fact, it will be more attractive to put these plots in the dark line and the protagonist's actions in the bright line. There is also the interaction between the protagonists. In fact, the interaction between the two people can be described in detail, otherwise the readers will have inexplicable illusions. In fact, there is no need to show all the strategies. They can be hidden appropriately and let readers guess riddles. This way the novelty will last longer. I rarely write book reviews. I couldn't help but express my opinions after reading half of it. I hope I can write better and better, and I will continue to read [shy]

I really like it. This is the best story about two male protagonists that I have read recently. It is considered a high-quality story on Tomato. Each character is well written and not boring. However, the updates are too slow. Do you have any other similar stories that you can recommend?

There are too few love scenes. I know how they got together, but I don't know why they are attracted to each other. Holy shit, are we really talking about this? This strategy is a real strategy, it is so authoritative. But, the relationship has faded, I can't see how they fell in love, I want to watch Sweet Little Theater

It's a very nice book😁The author's writing is online☺️The characters are also described very well, the plot is vivid and interesting, the plot is very compact and I felt very happy after reading it😋The foreshadowing is also great! The character settings of the two protagonists particularly impressed me ☺️👊👊 It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my taste so well! If you want to see it, don't hesitate! 🙉🙉🙉

Let's talk about the main plot first. It has a bit of a conspiracy. The plot advances at a suitable speed and does not drag on. Moreover, Mr. Liu has a very good brain. It is very satisfying to watch his various conspiracies and schemes, especially the Southern Yunnan dungeon later. It feels really good. He is super charming, and although he claims to be motivated by self-interest, he actually works for the welfare of the people. He can really be said to be a typical good official who does not talk about righteousness, but always has righteousness everywhere)! ! ! Secondly, there is the emotional line. The emotional scenes are hidden in some small details that are very close to each other. Although Master Liu is sick, he has a strong brain and financial resources. Divine Doctor Chu is a master of medicine and poisoning. They are shining in their respective fields. In the beginning, it was Master Liu who took the initiative to show off. Our Divine Doctor Chu started with his appearance. In the end, the two of them worked together and supported each other. "Shuangqiang" is really good, especially when the author writes the main plot very well, and occasionally intersperses some details of warm relationship, which is very good. I personally like the slow and warm emotional line very much!

I finished reading it in one go yesterday, and it's rare to see an ancient-style double-powerful novel. The character of Chuhe is also very attractive. He has superb medical skills, powerful martial arts, and a sense of security. Liu Zhang is a beautiful woman with extraordinary brainpower. There is also a little emotional line in the plot line. I am quite satisfied. I am curious if I will write lines about other places, such as Mobei.

I feel that the rating of this book should not be so low. The writing style of the whole book is very smooth and logical. In fact, although the emotional line is very light, the interaction is also very good. And I think the most important thing of this book is to write about people and officialdom, but the relationship between the two protagonists is also very warm, and the author's writing is so good. I don't know why the rating is so low. Come on, thank you, support me!

It's almost tied, so I can't help but write a review. In terms of plot, the writing is very good, especially following the protagonist step by step to set up a situation to deal with the bad guys. Every time the protagonist can defeat the villain, it's very satisfying, so refreshing. There is not much emphasis on the relationship, but the two protagonists get along very well, and they have the flavor of an old married couple, which is very easy to interact with! I hope the author will continue writing, come on!

Great writing! Super awesome! It will be on your favorite bookshelf after it is finished. People passing by please support this author and never let her go [laughing][laughing][laughing]