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In addition to the protagonist, there is also a narration from the perspective of Shokuhou Misaki and Shirai Kuroko, which is rare among Demon Forbidden fans. The "main" story (volumes 1 to 3) has been completed The fourth IF extra volume has been completed. The fifth IF extra volume is being serialized. Although it is a side story, it is actually very much like an independent story. If you read the fourth IF volume, it is strongly recommended to read Chapter 47 in one go. It is the conclusion of the entire early period, questioning the protagonist's heart and giving back to the early choices. The main story timeline has been compromised for the sake of story integrity. The if volume timeline is finely calibrated

It's very interesting, and the author updates it very quickly. He must have written it before and then released it in one go. I haven't finished reading the if line of the second volume yet, but I suddenly had a guess and couldn't wait to share it in the comment area. The identity of the protagonist in the first volume can be defined as [omniscience], knowing all the scripts, but without any ability to change the scripts, and can only use the power of other people in the scripts. In the second volume, the identity of the protagonist is changed to the other side of God [Almighty]. After the Dragon King's Sigh incident, the protagonist's ability has become able to accomplish anything he wishes. Although there will be problems with insufficient power, his heart has also begun to change in the direction of the Almighty God. And then wavering between human identity and God's heart. I guess the second volume is about a protagonist who is trying to ensure his identity as a human being and has almighty power, trying to influence the script.

The author really wrote about the fact that in a world view where a single entity destroys the world at every turn (polemic), knowing that information is really despairing. Aleister is not a good person. English Puritanism is the devil of the tree of life. The Roman Orthodox Church... Was kicked to death by Aleister. There is also the demon god represented by Seng Zheng, Othinus, who affects the fate of the world. Damn, do you know how desperate this is? How do you fight with a power ceiling? [Cry]

It can be said that it is the only one among the Demonic Forbidden fanfics I have seen. He made me feel that the people around Kamijou Touma when we were chasing the series were not just decorations, but real people. The reason why people are called people is because they have free will.

The author worked very hard to update 66 chapters with diarrhea in three days, and then it was finished. I give this a good review. The whole thing is biased toward group portraits, and the timeline goes by very quickly, but it tells a complete story and is worth watching.

After reading the first four volumes, the author has a good grasp of multi-perspective group portraits. The problem is that when the plot suddenly speeds up in the later period, the heroine's perspective is missing, resulting in a relative lack of arcs and memory points for the protagonist's character. And because there are too many serious parts in each chapter, what impressed me the most is her high sense of responsibility and low stress resistance level that are very prominent among all the protagonists in the fandom. It's a hard life [laughing and crying]

It is recommended that the author not use the first person narrative like me. This will bring a sense of fragmentation to the reading of the article, just like reading someone else's diary. If you use the third person, you can greatly increase the sense of substitution. It also makes it easier for people to remember the protagonist's name

It is better than 80% of Tomato's books (only online books). Personally I think it is well written. However, the plot of the first world line is too big, very unimportant characters and events are not written, and it is not as exciting as the Forbidden City should be. I hope the plot of the second world line will be written in more detail, with more characters appearing and more character interactions!

Very good fanfic, the writing skills are very good. It may not be liked by fans of mainstream Internet literature (shuangwen), but it is suitable for remnants of the old era like me. Hope the author sticks to it.

The main story is well written. I thought it was another scripted book, but the story starting from the middle period really has its own characteristics. It has a feeling of the people's view of history that is not mentioned in the drama. That is, the story unfolds too fast. The speed in the early and late stages is a bit fragmented like inside and outside the black hole horizon. It is generally well received, you can take a look^ω^

Very good book. The basic skills are solid, the reading experience is smooth, and there is nothing to say about its consistency with the original work. The author is particularly good at placing readers in high-pressure environments like the characters in the book, so the experience is very engaging. (?) As of January 15, 2026, multiple volumes have been completed. If you want to see multiple endings, you can try it. In addition, the sweet part is very sweet, as for the knife part... Of course there is no need to talk more. Here are some of my thoughts This is what I was thinking after watching the Christmas special. "The so-called tragedy is to tear beautiful things to pieces in front of you and show them to you." - It seemed that Miss Sato, who woke up in the bathroom, had escaped from that suffocating and exhausting fate. That bowl of udon on a summer night, that sparkling concert... All clearly tell people that Sato Akemi is alive and alive as a human being. In this, she is happy, no doubt. But this happiness is actually unreal to her, so that we found that—— Fate, this fate as precise as a gear, this fate as cruel as a millstone, still found her. In a matter of seconds, the final decision was made. In just a blink of an eye, there were only empty pieces scattered here, which made people unable to let go. … Poor writing... It's so well written... Ah …

The reading experience feels as close to the original work as possible, so there is no abrupt sense of fragmentation. So this is the fanfic that I personally feel is the most comfortable I have seen so far. The timeline and logic of events are also very reasonable, very good [like]

The first part is a science side chapter, and the second part is a magic side chapter. Sato does not have much space in the middle and late science side chapters. The two parts can be used as parallel worlds, and the turning point is whether to help Kamijou or not and buy him food.

After reading the main story in one go, I feel that the score should not be so low, it should be around 8.5 At least. The author's characterization is really good. If there is any problem, some minor timeline bugs and the struggle process of the events are basically skipped. However, it is still very good as a short fan story. Now I am going to read the if chapter. Is there any difference between the if chapter and the main story?

It's a shocking work. I give it five stars because the upper limit is only five stars. With just tens of thousands of words in the first volume, I created a protagonist who is as impassioned as Touma, but more powerless, and I couldn't help but immerse myself in it.

Anyway, this is one of the rare Scarlet Fruit fanfics that is actually readable. Don't read it if you want to read it for fun, but if you can bear to read it, it is a fanfic of the classic A Certain Magical Index series, so you won't be disappointed. So I thought, give me a perfect score to encourage you! The author's courage is commendable.

I really felt the feelings of ordinary people facing the desperate script. I have only read the first part now. Sato did it.

I didn't read the first three volumes, but read the reset volume. The author really wrote his own style from the Tomato fans. I personally feel that the current rating of 7.0 Completely overshadows this good work.

Based on my many years of reading experience, this book is undoubtedly a good book. I love this story and this book. (After reading these volumes, I think Kuroko is really interested in Akemi)

It is very beautiful and worthy of five hearts. The author used multiple perspectives to observe the story and found that it is very similar to the animation. However, using the human perspective, many details will be ignored, but it is understandable because the pace of the book is fast, and some scenes that are liked to be shown in the animation will indeed be a bit redundant and difficult to write in the novel.

If and the main story, it is recommended to read the if first. I feel that the if is more like the main story than the main story [face covering] [face covering]

A bit mind-numbing maybe? It's not like the expected superpower novel. On the contrary, it is very artistic and quite delicious. Although I don't know what I'm watching, I sincerely hope that the protagonist can relax a little and take a vacation. Really, the protagonist is too tired.

Depressed and unable to rise up to struggle, this is the same as the magic ban I saw, not some kind of playing house

It's very cool to be able to use the first person to write a forbidden novel without breaking it.

What happened to the ending of Volume 7? I don't have enough brain cells. Please give me an explanation. When Touma wins the world, only the main characters are left. There is no future in the story, and the world stands still from a certain perspective. What happens when Shirai wins and the world returns to reality? Isn't Sister Misaka still here?

The writing is quite good, and it feels like watching a hot-blooded series, especially the ability to update five or six times a day is even more exciting.

I can't understand it, but it seems very powerful

The author is really awesome. I will update it like diarrhea. I will worry about the author's liver.

It's so well written that I couldn't stop reading it in one sitting. There are obviously a lot of chapters, but it still feels like it's not satisfying.

This is one of the best fanfics I have ever seen [Love] [Love] [Love] It is a blessing to be on the home page, but some plots may be a little different, it is super beautiful [Like]