
Collapse of Iron: Team Building of the Golden Ones in Another World
崩铁:黄金裔的异世团建
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 765k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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I don't believe you haven't swiped it two or three times
Looking for a Role Model for the Protagonist, National Destiny
National Destiny, the role played by the protagonist is an anime character
May the Country's Luck Start to Reveal Its Strength!
Set the system so that each country has its own current strongest players! Once there is a death, the next strongest one will enter, and the country will be punished at the same time...
Mi Cheats the Character to Participate in the National Games, Don't Play the Role, Don't Get Married
Is There Any Ma Jiawen Who Plays the Role of Mihoyo in Other Worlds?
I want to read a book similar to "Integrating Star Iron and Playing as Star God at the Start".
National Games "Shuangwen, Performance," (It's Best to Show Your Strength Directly at the Beginning)
If There Is Any Broken Iron, Don't Hook the Stone!
Hand over Xingtie's Role-Playing Text!
I would like to read a book similar to "Star Railway: Playing the role of reaching the sky and blasting the stars with one sword".
There Are No Good Books Left in Bengtie
Are there any books by Ompharos?
I Want to See COS Battle Damage.
I want to see content similar to "After losing Wendy in the cosplay battle, I traveled through Teyvat". Is there any new battle damage time travel article? ! ! I have read some of them so far. I beg the authors to write.
Bengtie, Ompharos, Good Book (˵¯͒¯͒˵)
I would like to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: The Inscription of Salvation Beginning with Omphalos".
If You Want to Watch the Live Broadcast of the Girls' National Games, No Cp, Cool Articles, and Strong Women, Check It Out.
I want to read a book similar to "National Games Live Broadcast: Reporting Dragon Country Players for Cheating".
Are There Any Books by Star Iron Pharos?
I would like to read a book similar to "Beng Tie: A Simulation of Beng San Starting from Ompharos".
National Destiny + Acting/transforming into a Female Novel Request
Your Majesty, Weichen Wants the Book Played by Mihoyo, Can You Give It to Weichen?
There Is No Good Article to Argue About the National Destiny of Star Railway.
I want to read a book similar to "Star Rail National Destiny: Becoming Invincible from Playing Jing Yuanyuan".
If You Want Alicia, You Don't Want a Male Protagonist! ! ! I Want Girls to Post Stickers!
I want to read a book similar to "The Collapse". Don't want a male lead! ! !
May the Fate of the Country Collapse, Don't Act Like It! ! I'm a Pretender, Don't Blame Me for Scolding You
Want to watch something similar to "Rule Monster Story: Open the Door!" Destiny walker! Book. If you want to see the character Beng Tie go to the national destiny, don't play it! Anyone can play any role, just don't play it! No cp either! If you can't see the person recommending the role to me, don't blame me for yelling.
Is There a Female Protagonist Who Is a Bengtie Heroine? If She Doesn't Want to Be Transgender, Can She Be a Girl from the Beginning?
Is There Any Book About the Butterfly?
Is There Any Ompharos or Other Normal Writing Without Bad Jokes?
Want to watch something similar to "Star Rail: Movie Watching Ompharos!" Bai E saves the world! Book.
Are There Any Books by Xia Die?
I would like to read a book similar to "Beng Tie: A Simulation of Beng San Starting from Ompharos".
Is There Anyone Who Plays the Role of Beng Tie, Not Beng Tie?
Looking for a Book, Is There Any Novel About Mihoyo Game Characters Traveling Through Time in Anime?
I would like to read a book similar to "Ming Ke: The Waistcoat Comes from Teyvat". Any world is fine






































































































The writing is very good. I hope that after the end, the protagonist will not easily agree to other people's requests and cooperation. That would be very boring. Besides, they are not from the same world, so there is no need to selflessly help people from another world.
How can I put it this way? This National Games is better than the dozen or so books I have read. Not only are the barrages in the real world, but the whole thing feels very friendly and uplifting to me. This is worth recommending. Coupled with the author's good writing style and just right descriptions, the whole book is even better. As for personal experience, you can only know it by reading it yourself. It may not be suitable for some people, but in my eyes, this kind of national destiny text is already a masterpiece, so I sincerely recommend it. Although I have read a few chapters so far, my overall feeling is that it is the best book I have ever experienced. Sorry, it still looks great! ! ! (And how do you know the first book review was written by me?) [Proud Jpg]
It's very good-looking, and it's rare that it's not just the protagonist who comes to the rescue at the beginning of Skyfall, but other countries have also portrayed fiery, three-dimensional characters. The barrage is also positive and patriotic. Unlike most of the protagonists who pessimize, they believe that even more people initially want to protect. The overall look and feel is very good, giving people a very sincere feeling. There is basically no subjective substitution of traditional impressions, but the efforts based on one's own position in the novel.
A very nice article about the fortunes of the country by Ya Die. I hope I won't copy half of it from Ya Die without updating it.
It's okay. There aren't too many taunting messages. Some players have very distinct characteristics. The description of the environment is also pretty good. I prefer the way the players from the White Eagle Kingdom exit the game.
The author's writing style is very good, the characters are vivid, how can I say the barrage, the overall feeling to me is that it is relatively friendly, and the impression is particularly good. I don't want to say more about the barrage in other national sports articles. In short, the author's writing is really beautiful, and I finished it in one go.
It's good. Ying Jie from Beng San next door will appear later. Personally, I think it works well, but there is one problem that I am very concerned about. Author, come on, ancestor Kevin was and still is the well-deserved No. 1 Person in the End. Are you telling me that it is difficult to beat a mere six-core Herrscher? According to the ancestor's combat power, all the Herrschers except for Final Yan could not withstand one of his catastrophes. Can you try to match the settings of Cocoon? Also, cocoon has not been mentioned at all until now. You have collapsed, but you haven't even mentioned the cocoon once.
The writing is very good, but why is the score so low, only 6.9 Points. I took a look at the comment section, and basically all of them were 5 stars, with only one being 3 stars, and that was because the readers didn't like it. Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating. Some other good-looking books about the butterfly have been discontinued. I don't know why.
The plot is okay, and the most important thing is that the characters are not broken at least in the first few paragraphs. Xia Die is the type who always talks at length. It is best to hope that the author can maintain this quiet, elegant, and a bit silly character.
Not OOC, the plot is not brainless, I like it [Like]
To be honest, I don't think Guiji can do anything to Honkai, let alone trigger Honkai. After all, the immortal dragonborn who broke into the solar system (it seems to be the envoy level, I didn't read the text carefully) were all killed by cocoons, and MiHoYo has been extremely serious recently. , It is said that the status and level of Cocoon are getting higher and higher, it is vaguely above the sea of trees, and it is at least the same level as Star God. Therefore, unless Nanook personally ends, Guiji may have been killed by Cocoon long ago. It is impossible to strengthen Herrscher, because as long as he uses Cocoon's destiny of destruction has been captured by Cocoon, and Cocoon thinks he is a threat, then Cocoon can create Herrschers for destruction, just like the Herrschers of Restraint. After all, the pre-Honkai civilization is not like the current Honkai civilization. The power and order of the Herrschers of the current civilization are fixed, and they are also It was fixed in the pre-civilization, but it can only be realized in the later stage. The humanity of the Herrschers in the current civilization is also due to Ellie's self-sacrifice. ૮₍ɵ̷ɵ̷̥̥᷅₎ა, So I hope the author will consider how to not eat the original setting [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
It's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing sinister about it to me.
Great, great, the character has no OC. And it's very detailed. I feel like the rating is a bit low this time. I think if it were more complete, it would definitely be a high-scoring work. Come on, author! Be sure not to abandon the article! I will also give you some small gifts. , Come on!
It's okay, it's okay, it's not a ruined character, and it's not brainless either [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
It's great. It's the best novel about national destiny that I've read on Tomato so far.
This book is really great! The author writes about Ya Die in a very realistic way, and her strength is also very real! It's great to watch!
The character design is very restored, please give me more interactions among the golden descendants! I want to watch the elementary school chicken competition with all the enemies [sending my heart]
The character design of Xia Die is very restored, and there are not so many violent barrages. The summary is quite nice, and it is not as cliche as what I have seen before.
It looks great, and the characters are restored very well!
Although the copy isn't quite to my taste, it's overall pretty good.
It looks good. My ability to empathize is relatively strong. I feel... Quite good when I watch it. Moreover, the character design of Xia Die is restored very well.
It's extremely beautiful. The author needs to update it more. The butterfly in the author's works is very cute.
It's beautiful! ! ! The character is not broken at all! ! Highly recommended!
The author's writing style is very good. He writes about Xia Die very realistically, but when he writes about his memories, it's a little sad.
Good-looking, love to watch, watch more
It's also very beautiful.
Beautiful and well written
I'm just a [like]
I don't know how to leave a comment, so I'd like to give you a five-star rating.
It's no longer the national destiny to go to Bai'e. It's basically half of the original plot.