JOJO: My Substitute Is Absolutely Silent

The writing is top-notch, supporting the protagonist who always misses the mark at some critical moments, such as accidentally making a noise after seeing an insect arrow and letting others discover it. If you use this method to promote the plot, you will always feel that the protagonist is stupid and too neurotic, which will make people feel that something is wrong with him. But overall, it is still top-notch, and the writing is very delicate. I look forward to the follow-up plot. It's a typo. It's not to support the protagonist's voice, but just that he loses control at the critical moment. It always feels a bit uncomfortable. It would be better if the author can promote the plot in another way.

Nice! It's not that I have never seen a protagonist with a brain, but there are too few protagonists who have a brain, a fighting IQ, and a character that is not greasy or disgusting. They don't take the surroundings as amusement, but take the new world seriously. 😭😭Boss, you have to work hard and write it down. 😭Even if the protagonist has CP in the end, I will finish it. As long as it is not a brainless harem (without CP, of course, it is more fun) and watching the protagonist expand his life step by step. The stand-in ability really has a sense of surprise of "Holy shit, it can still be like this". It is as interesting as watching the wits of the characters in anime. I hope that the protagonist will still have this attitude towards the world in the future, this kind of careful and rigorous plan to consider a good life, be fully vigilant and calm when dealing with the unknown, and can use tricks to maintain his calm (un)daily life when facing the enemy. (I wanted to mention it but the suggestion exceeds the word limit.. This is the first time I write a long review. Anyway, boss, your writing is super beautiful😭😭As long as you don't cheat me, I will always support you😭😭Come on

I felt comfortable after reading it in one sitting. It is indeed a growth process and it is quite good. There were a few minor issues in the early stages, but the flaws outweighed the flaws. The protagonist's abilities are very strong, surprisingly strong. Maybe it's too strong and I won't be able to continue writing (or maybe the author has other considerations), so the start is very crippled. But every time the substitute grows, there are traces to follow. My favorite parts are the monster in the apartment and the use of voice to send information to Sister Bu. They are very interesting. It's still some distance away from the main plot of Golden Wind, and I don't know how the protagonist will get involved. And there's Trish, the golden retriever, who feels like she's probably the boss's daughter. Otherwise there is no need to have the same name.

The character of the protagonist is very complex, but at first glance you may feel that it is a bit of a failure. But extending to the back feels particularly smooth. Maybe everyone always thinks that the protagonist needs a more complete personality, but for most of the characters in JoJo, only if their own personalities are extreme enough can they give birth to stronger substitutes, so this shows the source of the protagonist's substitute. At the same time, the author has a good idea of ​​the extension of his abilities. It is very distinct. Compared with most of the stand-in articles in Tomato, it is difficult to do this well and everyone will often come up with an invincible stand-in. On the contrary, I think it is a better approach to focus on the growth in this article. And in terms of the overall story structure, I think it is a relatively perfect logical cycle. There may be some loopholes in the middle, but so far it is relatively good. I highly recommend this book. After all, very few JoJo writers in Tomato can write something like this.

The writing is very good. At least the protagonist's use and development of abilities can be seen as carefully planned, which is rare. At the same time, the character design can barely stand up. But in my opinion, there is a problem. The identity of the male protagonist's neighbor is Trish. The identity of the character behind him suddenly changes. Suddenly, he is very, very strong and added to the plot line, which creates a huge poisonous point (personal opinion). The male protagonist's character is cautious and cautious. Although the male protagonist grows up, his character gradually gains a foothold. But Trish's sudden change of identity directly affected the male protagonist's previous behavior. According to the metaphor in the book, the spider web the male protagonist laid was a weak spider on the web, and next to the weak spider, there was a praying mantis? Just stay there. Although I also saw Trish's understanding of a certain situation in the early stage, the foreshadowing was a bit too shallow. At the same time, I forced a character who had already established a foothold in the early stage to join the protagonist group. At the same time, I broke this persona and replaced it with another persona, so it was a big poisonous point for me. But if you don't care about these, this novel is worth watching. The male protagonist develops and uses his abilities and develops the world view to a certain extent. It depends on how the author continues. I recommend it with a score of 3 to 4.

The style is serious and serious ①Skills have many evolution directions and can be used flexibly ② I can witness the growth process of the protagonist, and it is well-founded. It is not all golden fingers. It was weak at first but it is not boring to read; when it becomes stronger in the later period, it does not open up a harem and is not hanging on the sky. The emotional line is weak but natural. When the author writes the plot against the enemy, he can always fight back and forth no matter what stage the protagonist Lin Zhou is in. The tactical design is exquisite, making it interesting to read and experience. ③The character setting is not flat, and the characters who appear more often can basically take into account both their shining points and growth lines. Finally, the author please update as soon as possible. It's so uncomfortable that it's almost tied. . . [Almost crying] [Almost crying]

I can't do it anymore. This is the first time I have read a book that kept me from skipping to the end. The development of abilities is very reasonable and strong. The writing style is very funny and the emotional lines are written very well without any sense of fragmentation. . It can be said that it is the top one in my heart. I want to keep updating soon😋The character design of the protagonist is also very good. Every character is very vivid. I really like the portrayal of the protagonist. He is not just pretentious or funny. He is really a flesh-and-blood protagonist with many laughs and interesting battles. Come on

It's very interesting. Finally, there is a stand-in for the time traveler protagonist who is not a copy of someone else's. I highly recommend reading. The author updates quickly. Please support him🤓

Perhaps the beginning is a bit slow. After the leather tango, the non-protagonist's stand-in appears, and the work begins to get on track. JOJO Part 1 Phantom Blood JOJO Part 2 Battle Trends JOJO Part 3 Star Fighter JOJO Part 4 Diamond of Immortality JOJO Part 5 Wind of Gold JOJO Part 6 Freedom of Stone JOJO Part 7 Puma Yelang JOJO Part 8 The Gospel of Jojo JOJO Part 9 (I don't know what it is called) No matter which work, the center of expression (golden spirit, destiny, dark will) is not expressed by fighting. Fighting is the main theme of JoJo. It can be said that JOJO cannot do without fighting. Only if the fighting is written well can JOJO be successful. The text of this work describes the battle, which is full of JOJO-style power, strangeness, wisdom, and reversal.

There's nothing much to say. I'll give it a general rating. The previous content looks strange and has a lot of flaws (for me), especially the part about the new tenants. I felt uncomfortable watching it. I repeated it many times and said it was noisy. It took a lot of space to describe this thing, and I couldn't mute myself. I always had this problem when I watched it. Can't I put myself in a mute state? After seeing this point, I had no intention of reading any more, and then I commented here. Well, after a general glance, I saw some people saying that the plot behind it was okay, but I no longer had the desire to read on, so I will give it four stars. Come on, author! I am very much looking forward to the plot direction in the future, so I won't watch it yet.

The author writes quite quickly, and the pace of the book is quite comfortable for me. Give five stars to support the author and don't let updates stop. I always see people saying that the actions of characters in the plot are unreasonable. In my personal opinion: everyone's actions and use of avatars in the JOJO world are reasonable and are caused by their character. Because it is the character of the stand-in user that determines his stand-in ability, so just follow the plot of the book. (Of course, I say this because there are currently no major problems with the plot of this book. If there is a big problem, I will change my face.)

Juqian is very good, it feels like watching JOJO, but some of the plot logic is very strange. I will give it 4 stars. Come on, the author.

[Thinking] 4.5 Stars, the overall plot is good, a lot of psychological description is used, the characters are full, but there are still some flaws (after all, it is original, and I can understand it) I want to innovate! But the update is too slow. I haven't cleared Naples yet. I don't dare to think about the fighting power in the future. How to write the protagonist after the requiem [Petrochemical] can only go behind the scenes.

The protagonist's psychological journey is developed very reasonably, the story line is relatively clear, the narrative words are fluent, and there are no poisonous points so far. Hope there is no cp I feel that the protagonist's moral bottom line is quite high. He feels good or bad when he does some bad things (), and his personality is a bit autistic. Looking forward to growing Trish's story changed a lot, but it's okay I hope there is no CP, I hope there is no CP

Wow, yes, yes. Although there are unnecessary literary descriptions of non-fiction in some places, the perspective feels unique. The interaction with Lingju is also very lively. The protagonist's image is well created. The image of an obsessive-compulsive disorder who fears social insecurity is vividly displayed on the page, which makes a deep impression on people. Although the foreshadowing is a bit long, the plot seems to be well connected so far, and it is the kind of growth flow that develops one's own stand-in ability step by step. I personally think that the protagonist hiding behind the scenes at the beginning is by no means as incompetent as the rat hiding in hiding as others say. This kind of hiding is very necessary when his personal strength is weak at the beginning. What's more, this is also in line with his own desire to build a safe "fortress". Hiding behind the scenes as a "ghost" will help the protagonist group but hates being disturbed. This degree has been controlled very well so far. The plot of this book is different from ordinary JOJO fans, and you can still see the author's different ideas.

Nice. I couldn't help but the description was so awesome. I read it before going to bed and brought the protagonist into the story. I fell asleep half asleep and dreamed of the sunshine in Naples, the noisy fear, the sense of betrayal, the coldness caused by the crisis, the indescribable fear, and the weak body. I just had my left hand numbed by pressure. At that time, I felt like I couldn't tell who I was. The air was thick and my thoughts were heavy. It took me 5 minutes to wake up and recognize myself...

The writing is quite good, but there is a plot about tlx. In the anime, tlx is after his mother died. In order to ensure tlx's future, the mother spread the boss's pseudonym and contacted the boss. When Wu Qiao joined the gang, Bolbo had actually received the task of escorting TLX from his boss. This is also a small loophole, but it doesn't matter╮(╯_╰)╭

I cry! Never had such a perfect start! True jojo style writing! The author's writing is so powerful, perfectly showing the protagonist's dilemma and struggle and the dark will revealed after breaking the situation. The protagonist's ability development is also very reasonable and in line with the mental power setting of the original work. The author must have opened a trumpet account or be an old reader. To be honest, I feel that I have earned it on Tomato by allowing me to read it for free.

This book is different from other books I have seen. This one has the author weaving his own story line and developing the plot with sound as the core. I feel that my eyes are bright. I cannot say that other jojo stories written around the original main line are not good. This is the kind of novel that the author does and cannot be tired of.

It is very in line with the problems faced by ordinary people when they travel to the JOJO world. It is very interesting, but the front of the protagonist feels a bit like a sewer rat (don't spray, it's just a personal feeling)

Very delicate! Very nice! Very much looking forward to the author's next story! The psychology described is really vivid

I'm on par with the progress. This book is good. The details are well described. The protagonist's avatar is weak at the beginning and gradually becomes stronger later. Moreover, the concept of voice is quite novel. Generally speaking, the first half of the book is a bit green and has some toxic points (the protagonist is social phobic and has obsessive-compulsive disorder. I feel that he may have some mental problems due to the time travel). The plot development is slow (if you like the fast-paced turn left and go out, you are welcome), but it will be fine if you get through the first half. The author's writing has made great progress in the latter part, and the plot and combat aspects The story is exciting and exciting (the following is really beautiful). The protagonist failed to pretend to be 13 [laughs] Lao Lin also wanted to pretend to be incomprehensible (what the stinky society might be thinking). Let's see when the author will revise the first half. A good beginning can always attract people. I believe that after the revision, more people will discover this treasure [Sending heartfelt wishes] There are not many good books these days. Author, you must keep writing. Such beautiful books should be seen by more people [Blow kiss]

A very interesting book with very detailed descriptions of the characters! The protagonist's abilities and expanded applications are very creative! Anyone who likes Golden Wind and doesn't like brainless invincible style will like it (I think) [Like]

The detailed description is very good, and there is a sense of foreshadowing for the battle of wits. In addition, the protagonist is the legendary hunger-resistant king, who doesn't need to eat to get there Brother, can't you make something normal for the protagonist to eat? (Looking)

It's a very nice book. There is a blade in the middle and a blade at the back [smile] The protagonist prescribes a usage for his stand-in that I would never dare to think of. It is not a book without common sense, nor is it a mindless article. Here are some suggestions that you would like to use your brain. It's not finished yet, I hope it ends well.

It's very good-looking. It's one of the best jojo books I've ever read.

Pig's Knuckle's character and persistence may seem awkward in other worlds, but in worlds like JOJO or Full Time, they work perfectly together. It's like watching a new character without any sense of dissonance. It's so fun to watch.

It's very beautiful, the battles are interesting, and the protagonist is well portrayed. The reason why I don't give full stars is because I feel that the protagonist is too weak. I can't accept this. I will change it to five stars when the protagonist becomes more worthy.

At present, it is still a very stable and high-quality JOJO fanfic. There is no poisonous point, and the substitutes are also arranged reasonably. I just feel that the character of the protagonist needs to be improved. I want to see if there is a golden spirit.

A very good-looking jojo story. It is no longer described in the form of a panel. The development of various abilities. The cautiousness and hysteria in the early stage set off the crazy growth of the substitute's ability. The precision is also awesome.