Magical Girl: My Sister, the Chief Judge

After more than 2,000 hours of experience in reading five articles, I have some suggestions for the author: For some people who like singles or lilies alone, they may lose interest in reading if they read the author tag. I suggest the author change it to either only write singles or 100s, or only write lilies. Otherwise, some people will say that you want to eat both lilies and singles, which will offend others. I hope you can take this suggestion. If you see it, please tell me in my comments below whether the protagonist of this article is male or female. People like me usually read the comments before reading a book. Your reply is very important.

In the book, everyone in the Magic Court looks like they are idle, staring at the protagonist every day. The protagonist is obviously so busy every day, so they might as well just stare at the protagonist and analyze him every day. They have nothing to do, right? He is also invincible when he spreads out blindly analyzed things.

I have finally read a popular book. When it becomes popular, I am also an old reader (.-`ω´-)

Come on! I will be an old fan when the book becomes popular *^O^*

It's still good, but I don't know if the protagonist will permanently transform later, will he lose his vest, and what about Lily's content?

Another magical girl novel about a boy who transforms into a girl, but the character description is insufficient. At present, it seems that all the younger generations are fishermen, and the younger sister is too well protected and is too naive. Overall, it's watchable, but not as good as similar products.

It's beautiful, the author must keep writing it.

I finally became a magical girl instead of my younger sister.

I particularly like this relaxed and humorous style [please update]

Haokan, when will the training be given?

Look, I found gold in the tomatoes.

Overall, the look and feel is very good. The problem is that the number of magical girls is too small, and the high-level combat power is too small. There are only a few in total. I hope that the number can be increased in the future, even if they can be used as supporting players.

The main problem of this book is that there are many descriptions of appearance and metaphorical processes, which are biased towards daily life. The focus of the book cannot be fully highlighted due to too many detailed descriptions in the whole book, thus missing a lot of the original excitement. If you can accept it, please continue reading. Most details can be described sideways through the reactions of several characters, thereby increasing the narrative of the paragraph and making reading easier and more direct. Most actions can be simplified and summarized in one sentence. The charm and appearance of the protagonist do not need to be elaborated too much, otherwise it will appear boring. You can use the magnificence of the scene and a few high-points as the key description objects. The remaining actions can be simplified. This can increase the coherence of the picture and allow readers to think better. Of course, it is best to reduce the psychological description. As the protagonist is one of the personnel with extremely high combat power, too much psychological description will reduce the protagonist's strength.

It feels like watching a drama

I have read a lot of magical girl-themed novels. Although the plot of this book is a bit cliche, the author's writing style is still good. There is nothing poisonous about it. It is worth reading.

The author's writing is very good, and the emotional drama is a masterpiece. I found gold among the tomatoes!

@ The protagonist of Zayu will never come back! Definitely! ! ! ! If you know how, you can watch it until the end! ! ! !

It's so beautiful that I finished watching it in one go

The writing style is great compared with other books. This is where the Taoist friend is going through the tribulation in this place of ascetic cultivation [Love] [Please update]

The author writes very well, I hope this book becomes popular (｡･ω･｡)

It looks good, the details are perfect, and it must be funny [shy]

The writing is very good, although I didn't read it on this account. I hope the author can continue to follow it.

Well written, very comfortable to read

[Thinking] The quality is very high, readers like it very much, and the narrative is very good^ω^. I don't know what will happen next. Come on, the author💪🏻

I hope it's not a change of marriage or a lily

It's so satisfying to read it all in one go. Did you find this cover randomly? Or is it a certain image of the protagonist that will appear in the future? [Sinister smile]

I really love it. Come on, author [blowing kiss]

I like it, the writing is so good

Very interesting writing It's well written, very logical, and the pace is okay.

Good lookingヾ(๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ" Want to watch the horse fall