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In the early stage, the young love life of the male and female protagonists was well written, and the dialogues were also written very well. However, the plot transitions were a bit lacking, and it would have been better if they were smoother. Appropriate writing of some battles and magic makes the viewing experience better, and the plot will not appear too bland. Generally speaking, the future is promising, keep it up, wait and see what happens next, look forward to ୧((•̀ꇴ•))૭⁺✧

I also have 3000 hours of reading. When I first read this title, I thought it was a very cliché driving nonsense. But once I read it, I will feel that this book is a rare masterpiece of Tomato, especially the psychological portrayal of the heroine and the hero. I like the heroine very much, she has a stupid love brain, and her behavior is also very consistent with the status of a saint and her age.

It is a story about a female protagonist in a Western fantasy. The young saint is also working hard to conquer the guardian knight today. The emotional interaction is very good. Although the female protagonist mostly fantasizes one-sidedly, she writes the young and hazy love fantasy of a girl. Unfortunately, the male protagonist is still a bit dull. So far, it doesn't look like there's anything bad about it. The only bug might be the male protagonist's ability. It feels too unsolvable [thinking]. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but overall it's okay. I hope the author can stick to it in the future and the style remains the same🤗 [laughing evilly].

This is true pure love! ! ! Tm After reading this for so long, I finally found a novel that is not a fast-food romance, the male and female protagonists are not prefabricated, the psychological description is delicate, and the logic is reasonable (I have read Chapter 28 so far, and I will come back after reading it) Ninety-nine percent! ! A rarity! ! This book is very good at character creation and the characters are very real. The heroine is a little girl who is growing up and has great love in her heart. The psychological description is more like that of Nan Beng. It really depicts the appearance of an 18-year-old girl in love. The description of the male protagonist is relatively small. At present, he cares about the heroine and the past very much. He wants to protect the heroine for the rest of his life, but feels that he is not worthy of him. The description of Elsa is also very suitable for a child around 12 years old. He has inexplicable vanity and insufficient understanding of the world, but he is not a bad character. The method of describing characters is mainly based on psychology, followed by events. To be honest, it is difficult to see that the character's behavior is consistent with the logic of his behavior. It is difficult to see that the plot development is deliberate by the author. But to be honest, there are still shortcomings. The skill setting and behavior are a bit conflicting. In other words, in this world view, it is really difficult not to collapse if there is a stigmata. The most direct question is, why doesn't the heroine use her own abilities to restore her sight? In a fantasy world view, why doesn't the church have the ability to save her? Of course, it can also be seen that the heroine is blind deliberately, which can promote part of the plot and emotional development, and has a little interest. However, this still makes people ask why, and I feel that it can be patched. If it's a slow-paced love story, the author should quickly turn into a donkey of the production team! !

Looks good, looks good! So sweet! So sweet! But don't have a plot of being bullied (don't ask me why I thought of this plot? Tomatoes are big, and there are all kinds of birds. [Face covering])

That's okay, it's a very comfortable read. The emotional lines between the male and female protagonists are also developed step by step, and the sense of distance is well grasped. Although it is marked with a slow-burning label, the amount of text information inside is not small, and specifically it is not very watery. If you like fantasy adventure romance novels, you can take a look. I can still grasp these elements, but I can only say that I haven't written much yet, only 100,000 words.

I just came in out of curiosity, but then I couldn't get out. The writing style of Lao Zuo is really awesome. Even if I don't read Western fantasy, I am addicted to it. Also, I really like the heroine, so I took her away. The hero should just go and cool off [you taste it carefully]

You can see a lot of detailed psychological and detailed descriptions, making the characters' performances very realistic. The plot arrangement is smooth and simple, making it easy to read. The protagonists are also good-looking people, and I even feel that they are suitable for adaptation into animated works. I have read some works that let me let myself go, but as I read them, I feel that the system is biased towards cultivating immortals and online games. At first, it was fun to constantly update skills, but the more I read, I found that the author couldn't stop throwing out new settings and constantly expanding the world view. It was very tiring, so I gave up. Or maybe in the end, you find that the protagonist, who has always been lonely and becomes stronger alone, will still long for connections with others and will never forget certain people. It would be better to be honest from the beginning. Maybe I prefer that the characters will have obvious psychological growth or become emotionally mature as the story develops. In most stories, emotion is one of the tools to become stronger, but the concept of becoming stronger is actually very nihilistic in the end. I actually rarely review novels, because until today, I don't have any novels that I am very interested in or agree with. And I quite like this work. Keep up the good work, author. The stories you write are delicate and true. The characters in your novels seem to me to really exist. They are both sacred and ordinary. Thank you. I will also keep a calm mind and read the subsequent plots. I hope you can also feel happy and relieved when writing.

Must praise Ahhhhh! Ahhhhhh! Ahhhhhh! Ahhhhh! So pretty, so pretty, so pretty! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! (Dark and twisted crawling)

Shit, I don't know how to evaluate this book. When I have time, I will use my cerebellum to catch up on this book. I have read more than 50 chapters. The author's writing is smooth and natural, the plot development is good, and the character description and characteristics are outstanding. It is a good work. I will support it with five stars.

Sixty-four chapters. After reading the first few chapters, I thought it would be a plot where the male and female protagonists fall into the abyss and support each other step by step to reach the top and kill their enemies. I didn't expect the plot after the restart () to be reborn. It's quite satisfactory (the God of Contract turns the corner of the main god, lol). The characters are well designed and have their own characteristics. Then the growth of the male protagonist is good. He has grown from a lone wolf in the previous life to now becoming one with others () I don't know when I can express my feelings to each other, and then push the main plot.

Good looking. . . It is recommended that you watch the part before rebirth before going to airborne.

The writing is very good, both in terms of emotions and character creation of the male and female protagonists. The plot is also very good. The author's emotional drama is really delicate. In short, this book is the best western fantasy novel I have ever read. I read it the day before yesterday and read it directly. The author must work hard to update it! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very well written. The emotional drama is very smooth and makes people want to read on. Come on, author.

I'm short of books, so I randomly found one on the first page. Although I haven't finished reading it yet, from the current point of view, this short sweet article is completely OK. It's not poisonous, and the emotional line is also very clear. The writing style is pretty good, maybe because there are fewer words. If the score is lower, if it doesn't fall apart or ends, I personally think it will be at least 8.8.

It looks good, I love watching it, I love watching it! ! ! The author's characters set in my heart [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

I have read Tomato for several years and this is my first time writing a book review. The emotional description is very immersive, but the combat power is slightly lacking. It's such a great work that even someone like me, who doesn't like slow-paced movies, keeps up with it every day. Maybe it was because he saw his own shadow in Augustine, or maybe he was looking forward to the appearance of his Isabella. Finally, I wish everyone can meet their own 'Augustin/Isabella'

As of publication, the emotions are smooth, the development is not abrupt, and there are no major problems. The author should not be swayed by those who think about Sesu every day. Personally, I think emotions should increase as the story develops.

It's very beautiful. I hope the author can write more battle scenes while taking into account the emotional line. Is there still hope for resurrection? There are still many chapters that I haven't read yet. What on earth is this about? The review is so harsh [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

It's great, the best western fantasy book so far.

I really like the way the protagonist is struggling with himself. The contradiction between the heart that wants to protect and the original character of killing has shaped the protagonist and indirectly shaped the saint [OK]

It's beautiful, ah, I feel like my pure love can finally go to the grave with warmth. Give the author a kiss (˘ ³˘)❤

The author is great [crying] It's so short that it's not enough to read. Give me five stars and update it quickly [shy] Don't force me to kneel down and beg you [sending my heart] I'm almost finished [crying] I want to eat something sweet. [Crying] There are more than 130 chapters in this book. Why haven't I even eaten a single mouthful? [Crying] How about I raise a book first [Sending my heart]

It's so beautiful and I love watching it [Blowing Kiss] It's your turn to get this five-star rating

From what I've seen so far, it has a knife, a lot of fun, and a lot of candy to chew on. It can already be said to be a good work. So, five-star praise, continue to look forward to it😊

It's a nice little sweet novel. The logic is very harmonious so far, and the characters are also very good. If you like reading "Two Directions", this novel is a good choice.

Yes, it's quite sweet. The setting of the Saint as the king of brain-feeding is quite good.

A good book with delicate and soft emotions. Highly recommended.

It's very interesting, the quality is relatively good among Touma Touli, the pace is not too slow, nor too fast, and the plot suits my taste. The writing is much better than 80% of Tomato novels written by newbies. I have been waiting for the update of this book for the past ten days.

This book really touched my heart. From redemption to protection, the description of the characters, everything is so natural, especially the stubborn and holy character of the heroine. I really love it. I love you, author!!!