(You can read it without reading the original work.) You can jump directly to the Lesser chapter to see if you are interested in the style before continuing. The first chapter only has small foreshadowing and character creation, and the main storyline has almost no changes except for the reincarnation demon.
This is a fanfic that reverses the identities of Makima and Denji.
If the controlling demon is Denji, the people who survive with Bochita become the if line that Makima develops for the world view.
Denji is still the arrogant yellow-haired boy, and Makima is still the succubus.
I will try to let everyone reach another ending without OOC.
The second editor slips and kneels: The Lesai chapter is very light. If you don't feel cold, just skip the last chapter! ! !
Editor 3: There is already a micro group ~ welcome to discuss (｡ì _ í｡)
Reader comments
It looks good, and the control of Denji is quite handsome (a bit white and black?), But the mkm feels a bit silly and cute. By the way, how is Lexi doing now? Will there still be a plot for her? I want to see a hundred, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see...
It's the same as the one above. The writing is really maqima ORZ. Compared with other fanfics, the character design is not OOC for the time being. It is more close to the original work, which looks really comfortable. It's just that it's very short and there are very few updates.
The plot in which Makima appears is completely different from the original work. The first forty chapters have not seen the same battles as in the comics. It's very if, very parallel world. Where there is a variable like Makima, there are changes. Things that should happen without variables continue to happen in the dark.
There aren't many chapters at the moment, but I think it's very interesting, very creative, and the writing is also very good. It makes Miss Machima look like the little girl in me! Looking forward to further developments! ! ! ! !
I found out that the author's task includes a book review for myself. Everyone is welcome to give suggestions (｡ì _ í｡) I was surprised to receive the first OOC book review today (after all, some people in previous book reviews said that the characters are too close to the original work)
I will also reflect on myself whether there is something very Makima here, and whether there is something like Aki Hayakawa there. But after all, it's hard to disagree with everyone, and I'm not a serious and famous chef (a very self-aware statement)
All in all, I hope everyone will appreciate it and discuss it moreヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ
So will there be electric barbecue?
Nice looking.
What a wonderful idea, very interesting.
Characters: mkm is more popular than in the comics and less serious and mysterious. However, this is a sixteen-year-old mkm, so it is acceptable. Denji is still very sick, but because he has become the dominant one, he also shines more like a normal person.
Plot and writing: I basically follow the plot of Shu's comics. Because the writing is good, I can keep reading. The writing style is not only beautiful in terms of words, but more importantly, it makes people read it. There is no nonsense or superfluous psychological description in the narration, and it keeps advancing the plot without seeming impatient. While reading, I kept recalling the plot of the comic, and I can still recall my admiration for trees at that time, but what is the second part of the comic about? I read the first part, but I really couldn't stand the rest.
All in all, this fanfic is quite good-looking and worth eating. [Send heart][Send heart]
Machi ma chi mar
A very excellent fan work, there are no major problems, but there are also bright spots.
It's perfect, I like the writing very much
Teacher, don't stop updating ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ). Please revive me.
It's really good
Come on, I quite like it
A super delicious book, keep up the good work, I especially like this story [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
It looks good, but I don't know if there are any Q or V groups who want to urge updates [sending heartfelt comments]
Update soon! It's been four days and I feel like there are ants crawling on me [shocked]
If there is no update, I can only refresh it again [crying]
It's beautiful, but... But... Why did Miss Himeno die [crying] I thought I could save Miss Himeno [crying] Hundan!
Anyway, it looks good
Nice! Like! Great!
Not bad, pretty good-looking
Okay, very beautiful
It's not my fault, how could it be so beautiful? It's so delicious
Hi, I really like it. It's a pity that the plot is too close to the original work. In fact, this idea can make it more exciting [crying]
The starting power is reasonable, but when Machima comes, why don't you give the gangster bean paste? You can kill demons
It looks good, and the control of Denji is quite handsome (a bit white and black?), But the mkm feels a bit silly and cute. By the way, how is Lexi doing now? Will there still be a plot for her? I want to see a hundred, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see...
It's the same as the one above. The writing is really maqima ORZ. Compared with other fanfics, the character design is not OOC for the time being. It is more close to the original work, which looks really comfortable. It's just that it's very short and there are very few updates. The plot in which Makima appears is completely different from the original work. The first forty chapters have not seen the same battles as in the comics. It's very if, very parallel world. Where there is a variable like Makima, there are changes. Things that should happen without variables continue to happen in the dark.
There aren't many chapters at the moment, but I think it's very interesting, very creative, and the writing is also very good. It makes Miss Machima look like the little girl in me! Looking forward to further developments! ! ! ! !
I found out that the author's task includes a book review for myself. Everyone is welcome to give suggestions (｡ì _ í｡) I was surprised to receive the first OOC book review today (after all, some people in previous book reviews said that the characters are too close to the original work) I will also reflect on myself whether there is something very Makima here, and whether there is something like Aki Hayakawa there. But after all, it's hard to disagree with everyone, and I'm not a serious and famous chef (a very self-aware statement) All in all, I hope everyone will appreciate it and discuss it moreヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ
So will there be electric barbecue?
Nice looking. What a wonderful idea, very interesting. Characters: mkm is more popular than in the comics and less serious and mysterious. However, this is a sixteen-year-old mkm, so it is acceptable. Denji is still very sick, but because he has become the dominant one, he also shines more like a normal person. Plot and writing: I basically follow the plot of Shu's comics. Because the writing is good, I can keep reading. The writing style is not only beautiful in terms of words, but more importantly, it makes people read it. There is no nonsense or superfluous psychological description in the narration, and it keeps advancing the plot without seeming impatient. While reading, I kept recalling the plot of the comic, and I can still recall my admiration for trees at that time, but what is the second part of the comic about? I read the first part, but I really couldn't stand the rest. All in all, this fanfic is quite good-looking and worth eating. [Send heart][Send heart]
Machi ma chi mar
A very excellent fan work, there are no major problems, but there are also bright spots.
It's perfect, I like the writing very much Teacher, don't stop updating ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ). Please revive me.
It's really good
Come on, I quite like it
A super delicious book, keep up the good work, I especially like this story [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
It looks good, but I don't know if there are any Q or V groups who want to urge updates [sending heartfelt comments] Update soon! It's been four days and I feel like there are ants crawling on me [shocked] If there is no update, I can only refresh it again [crying]
It's beautiful, but... But... Why did Miss Himeno die [crying] I thought I could save Miss Himeno [crying] Hundan!
Anyway, it looks good
Nice! Like! Great!
Not bad, pretty good-looking
Okay, very beautiful
It's not my fault, how could it be so beautiful? It's so delicious
Hi, I really like it. It's a pity that the plot is too close to the original work. In fact, this idea can make it more exciting [crying]
The starting power is reasonable, but when Machima comes, why don't you give the gangster bean paste? You can kill demons