Beji*************

The ultimate beautiful Dragon Ball fanfic, there is no system, no time travel, just another unyielding Saiyan who has gone through many hardships. This is the parallel Dragon Ball universe that belongs to the author. The character descriptions are online. The plot timeline shows that the author really put a lot of thought into it. I even sympathize with the hope that the sentence "Super Saiyan is not the only one" brings to Rena [facepalm]. It can be seen that the writing is also online. There are not many Dragon Ball fans, and good-looking ones are as rare as Super Saiyan. I beg the author not to use eunuchs, oh no, wow Darcy [laughing evilly]

Long-time Dragon Ball fans said that this article has a good grasp of the character of the Saiyans. Noka is not the kind of perfect protagonist. He will dislike being a "burden" and will be irritable because of serious injuries. Bardock's last words are like a thorn in his actions. This sense of contradiction is more interesting than a cool story that cheats all the way. The description of the environment of Poison Swamp Star is very touching. The poisonous gas erosion and monster attacks make people a little nervous. It's just that some of the combat terminology is a little different from the original work, and it's a little out of the ordinary, but it doesn't affect the overall story, and it's worth pursuing.

The fierceness of the Saiyans is well written. Noka was living on the poisonous swamp star. He was seriously injured and had to protect others at the same time. The struggle of hating the "burden" and having to carry it was more interesting than simply fighting and killing. The fight scenes with predators in the poisonous swamp are hard-core enough, but sometimes the descriptions are a bit messy, so you have to slow down to watch it. Overall, it doesn't deviate too much from the Saiyan setting in Dragon Ball, and I can keep up with it.

I watched it for the Saiyan theme and it did not disappoint. It's quite interesting that Noka's resistance to "protection" contrasts with his body's instinctive desire to fight. 👍 The dangers of Poison Swamp Planet are not just for show. Every time you are in danger, you feel like "this time it may really be the end." This sense of tension is well done. Bardock's instructions are not buried too deeply, and they should have a big effect in the follow-up. There are no flaws in the plot so far, and the pace is steady, so I can keep watching.

Looks good, I recommend it! ! ! Come on, author, judging from the current development, you can be the best Dragon Ball fan that can chase Tomato! ! !

The character of the Saiyan is very suitable, but the original setting is not very popular.

Beautiful, very beautiful

Overall, it's pretty good, and it's considered a masterpiece among Tomato Dragon Ball fanfics.

It's very beautiful, the author is very attentive

The author is still good

Have you seen the end, Angel Goku and God of Destruction Vegeta? So what is the protagonist's path? [What] It's really good-looking, there's no soul-traveling, no system, and the Dragon Ball flavor is overwhelming

Speaking of which, Noka seems to have no normal appearance description.

The plot is okay and the battles are quite detailed.

A rare character with a Saiyan flavor, and the chapter names are also very Dragon Ball. I look forward to the follow-up performance.

It's really beautiful, but Dragon Ball can't be painted! Alas😔 Obviously the writing is very good, but it can't feed people!

The plot is quite novel. Although the protagonist is seriously injured and his combat power is damaged, he is not aggrieved. Is it a single female protagonist? The author [Chigua]