The Traveler's Handbook: the Eye, the City, and the Moon Project

It's well written, it's well written, I feel like it's more realistic and better written than other monthly diaries I've read, the others are too much like cool articles. It is normal to have private settings, but for some plots that have clearly appeared, it is best to correspond to the plot design in the game, especially those related to combat power. Otherwise, it will affect the viewing experience. For example, the Black Cloud Club belongs to the thumb, the thumb commander corresponds to the level of the finisher, and the related settings of the Godfather. The private settings are all different from the game plot, which will affect the viewing experience to a certain extent. However, the writing style is still quite good, and it fits the urban background very well. It seems that this is not the city in the monthly diary, but a custom urban background that adds some settings of the monthly diary. I suggest the author mention it at the beginning. Otherwise, it would be outrageous that the Godfather of Thumb died because of the Inquisition. With the intensity of the game's storyline, a first-level commander could basically kill all the people holding the handle, including the big hammer, medium hammer, and small hammer at the same time. It's best to explain it, otherwise when more people see it, it will easily be criticized by some people who are obsessed with the plot. I think the author's writing style should not let this happen, otherwise it would be a pity.

Hmm~ This is the third Tsukiki fanfic I have come across in my life that is worth reading. Except for the slight flaws in the combat power setting, both the description of the environment and the characterization of the characters are at their peak. It's enough to be on the same level as "Moon Plan: Broken Wings". If time hadn't allowed me, I would have really wanted to become a ring apprentice and frame this epic masterpiece in a prominent place in the ring gallery [smile][smile] Monthly Calculator Author's Guide—— [Chapter 1: A qualified author should learn to write 80,000 words a day.

At first glance, I thought it was AI, but when I looked closely at the writing style, I discovered that it was the ancestor of AI.

A very good book. I haven't read many monthly articles, but this one is the most relevant to the urban background.

It's good to read. It's rare to see monthly articles that describe so many details. Other monthly articles basically rely on hanging around and doing what you want to do, but this one is more like writing about a person who relies on his own "value" (a worthless person can't survive more than three days) to adapt to the city and survive.

The narrative is not bad. There are no shortcomings except for being controlled by the traffic lock. The combat power serves the plot and it can be said that it would be better. Maybe the author would add more psychological descriptions of the characters. Moreover, most of the character names have some profound meanings, and the plot is refreshing enough. There are at least one update every day and the content is six to seven thousand words, which is really interesting. Finally, I like you, author😘

This book is absolutely outstanding among the YJ fanfics I have read. No matter the plot entry point, character design, or plot direction, it is all surprising. And the writing is very good, and it's very comfortable to read. I like you🥰

I haven't read it yet, so I'll give it a five-star support first. I hope I won't see the "stopped update" sign after a few days [Sending my heart]

Just from the transformation of the protagonist, you can feel the power of the author's writing. In the city, only the least human can live like a human being.

Professional, reliable, in line with urban logic and thoughtful thinking

I just like this taste, the desperate but hard-working struggle to survive [lick screen] What happened next!

It's so in line with my taste (I have the right to suspect that the author is from the city)

I really like this kind of realistic monthly calculation work!

You must keep writing it! Boss, this book is really in line with my taste. Don't break your teeth [crying] The book is very good, but there is a traffic lock. You can consider changing the title, but I'd better update it for a while before thinking about it (although I think the title is quite cool)

Very good book, love comes from the ruined library, I hope it can become the book I want ()

Rarely rigorous monthly scoring

Well written, excellent novel

It's pretty well written.

I didn't expect to find such new books for me [please read carefully]

Good! It's just that not many people are watching More updates (one update per day)! ! ! Why is no one watching? The further back you go, the better it looks (10 book reviews next door, why the rating is 9·5)

ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧The writing is good and it is a good monthly book. Come on, author!! !! ✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧

The plot is very good, the character descriptions are also very tense, the details are well handled, and the storyline is bold. It is a good book, but the biggest feature of this book is the pain of toothache (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

It's so beautiful and the characterization is so great.

Special brain text

Very cool monthly essay

After reading the last page, I felt disappointed.

One day, you will become a dazzling star in the city

It's super beautiful and filling. I love you, the author! [Blowing kiss]

Very interesting, with strong writing skills and reasonable logic. I have been reading books on Tomato for about two years and have rarely seen such high-quality books.

Well, except for the fact that there are too many names that I can't remember. I really like the narrative and settings in it