The Female of the Apocalyptic Army Transforms into the Top Group Darling Alpha

Well, I personally think it's okay. I quite like the setting and plot, but the author's writing still needs to be improved. When I read it, it felt a bit confusing. The psychological thinking of the characters jumps quickly, so sometimes it gives people a feeling of being in a fog, but I can still understand what the author wants to express, and I can still understand it. Overall, it's pretty good.

I see that the current look and feel of the two protagonists are quite good. I personally like the characters of the two protagonists. But I just feel that there are too many plots where the two protagonists are targeted, and there seems to be a bit less communication between the two protagonists, right? Seeing it now, I always feel as if I have an unknown fire towards the supporting characters. ?

In short, the description is so cute. For me, this book is really good. At first, the little bear thought it was a little white flower, but later it turned out that it was stuffed with black sesame seeds. He would use his cleverness to punish people who treat him badly. Of course, it is legal and reasonable. And Yin is very kind, and then he is a poor little guy bullied by the company. He wants to rely on his own strength to show it in front of the audience [Like]

I really love Zhuangshou [Sending my heart] Baby bear is so good 🉑Love❤️ Can the author write more about the baby bear [crying] I really love this little bear bee to death [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Overall, the writing is quite good, and the characters are well described. It's just that the barrage during the live broadcast and the comments from netizens are a bit too descriptive, which affects the viewing experience. I hope the author can write more about the interaction and feelings between the two protagonists. Come on [please update]

The settings are all good, it looks great^ω^, I just hope the author won't stop updating [crying]

It's beautiful ✧(◍˃̶ᗜ˂̶◍)✩, I hope the teacher can complete this book perfectly [Blow kiss]

Good-looking, the character of Shou particularly pokes me

Yes, it looks good, that's it

Hao Mi, the live broadcast is a bit too much. Then I personally think that the symbol of the live broadcast can be more clear and clear. Also, the little bumble bee is really cute! ! ! 😍

For me, the character design is more attractive to me [Send Heart] In short, it feels more novel and beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The characters are so cute! Shou's character. In the beginning, because of the Zerg race, I could only speak the language of the Zerg. First time seeing this. Cute.

Hehe, it looks good, bear and little bee 🐝, cute hehe